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fiddee [2016-03-08 20:13:05 +0000 UTC]
...''He is taking her for a ride'' |D *shot several times over*
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fiddee In reply to WishingStarInAJar [2016-03-13 13:08:37 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha! *dies on the floor* That face! XD
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fiddee In reply to WishingStarInAJar [2016-03-13 20:41:22 +0000 UTC]
Hihi, I'm sorry but I couldn't let the chance slip XD
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ThexDarkenedXLight [2016-03-07 06:22:27 +0000 UTC]
Oh!! I really do like the roughness of this sketch. It turned out very nicely~
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The-Resident-Jinx [2016-03-06 16:07:07 +0000 UTC]
I really do love your sketches Wish! ;;
I have to say, it's a shame that you had to re-write that chapter! It sounds like it would have been an interesting idea, seeing Armand do something that perhaps he wouldn't normally? And Alys kind of being dragged along in the process! xD Xx
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WishingStarInAJar In reply to The-Resident-Jinx [2016-03-06 17:43:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~
I liked the idea (otherwise I wouldn't have written it xD) but I approached it the wrong way and it showed afterwards. The only way to fix it was to completely remove it and go with something which would show Armand's suspicion towards the Eliatropes (and the Eliacube) but also that he only wants what is best for the kingdom while proving his worth because the show didn't really touch on that until the OVA episodes (a ONE SECOND character development ><).
I still have the chapter somewhere because I didn't have the heart to throw it out completely. I might upload it as a separate short story with some adjustments so it isn't lost forever and people cans till have this if they want to.
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Gary3-6-9 [2016-03-05 21:37:36 +0000 UTC]
Haha, her expression though!XD
It's a pity that you've had to rewrite the chapter - Armand could really use some out of character moments. Show us a better side of him once in a while.
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WishingStarInAJar In reply to Gary3-6-9 [2016-03-05 22:37:35 +0000 UTC]
The face of terror when you aren't the one driving and the seatbelts don't feel like they are enough to keep you safe.
He isn't always a jerk; I believe him to be misunderstood as all he wants is to impress the people he looks up to but he does ruin it for himself with acting so rash, rough and spoiled and I do try and bring this forward in my writing. But that deleted chapter made Armand look like a completely different character and that aint right. I wish I had noticed that sooner...
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WishingStarInAJar In reply to Gary3-6-9 [2016-03-06 21:40:53 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't say that. Armand has a temper which clouds his judgement and steers his actions. He is capable of caring for people but we hardly get to see it other than his father mentioning it but the care is still there under the douchebag exterior. He wants to be recognized, he wants to be respected, he wants to get that comforting pat on the shoulder and his father telling him he is proud of him, but he is obviously not getting what he wants and this only makes him more bitter.
I think his incapability to not let his negative thoughts and ego get the best of him is what prevents him for stop being such a jerk. He was apparently fairly tolerable before his mother died.
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Gary3-6-9 In reply to WishingStarInAJar [2016-03-06 21:58:43 +0000 UTC]
Oh! Huh.... his mother died.. yeah... how come I didn't even rake that into consideration...?
Also, all that, and he should get his teeth checked...
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WishingStarInAJar In reply to Gary3-6-9 [2016-03-06 22:06:02 +0000 UTC]
His mother was really loved by the people and the actual queen (the ruling force) of Sadida. His father was a renowned warrior known for his strength until he got married, became a father and also grew older; now he is a gentle giant but adored by the people. His sister is slowly gaining the favor of the people and is destined to follow their mother's footsteps and become queen. Armand is.... uuh... he doesn't have much going for him other than being born into royalty >.>
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Gary3-6-9 In reply to WishingStarInAJar [2016-03-07 21:30:24 +0000 UTC]
Huh..... well, at least I can see where this is coming from....
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YukaigeOrRao [2016-03-05 21:32:19 +0000 UTC]
I like the idea of them as friends. I just hope Alys can still breath considering how his breath is XD
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