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Published: 2012-04-12 09:20:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 941; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 5
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this is the first of a series of pictures i'll be posting, based on how different people see beauty. i have a couple more other ideas but if you want to provide more feel free.Related content
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cute! itΒ΄s simple, but that is okay ^^ I like the colors, they create a warm and calm mood, especially the light behind her is great
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haha some of the most amazing pics i have seen here are simple 
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my stupid mac over heats and when its super hot it switches itself off, i was working on something last week and it did that then i completely lose interest because that would mean creating it from scratch and i'm trying to do it the pro way but since im not a pro just getting the basic shape thats hours on a tablet and by then its gone
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This is not my genre, but I would want to give you one little advice as far as composition goes. I think you've given the top too much breathing space. When you first open this image, you see the top, and a lot of it, which has no interesting aspects. As a result, even when looking at the girl, that large space in the top makes the entire creation a bit.. doll.
I hope you're not taking this the wrong way. I'm not trying to offend you or anything
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point taken, thanks for that. i did want her head to be too boxed in so i let it up.
no, I'm not offended by good observations like that. in fact now that you mention it i have done it before on some other pieces of mine hehehe...
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Hehe, well yeah. I've done it a lot on my photos in the past as well. It's all part of the process of learning and developing : )
I guess one advice, if you don't want future heads to be too boxed up, could be to draw the character slightly from the side. You know, so the head is facing either direction. Because then you can place it a bit in rules of thirds, and give the head breathing space in the direction the head is facing. These things also tends to make a creation more pleasing to the eye, and generally make the eye focus on the aspects you want it to : )
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well i'll definitely take that into account in my next piece. great advice!
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Thank you kindly for the complements on my gallery
Good luck trying to keep this in mind
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