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wlkr In reply to JiMeiLofgren [2016-11-09 19:57:30 +0000 UTC]

I basically need some way to refer to the different "untitled" so I started to add a descriptive word. And since this was a completely gutted building in Berlin that was going through renovations it became Berlin.

The building looked really interesting, just the gutted frame standing on stilts. But the unedited picture didn't work for me, too much distracting stuff, building materials and so on.

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JiMeiLofgren In reply to wlkr [2016-11-09 23:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Well, I say "Untitled" with a descriptive word is better than the ones that are labelled as compositions with a number. Those seem more indifferent to me. But I'm sure something will come to you. I've had difficulties myself trying to title my pieces of writing as well. There are some that I still don't like, but I leave them as is because I'm lazy. ^_^

In any case, looking at it again, it sort of makes me think of a cyberpunk/apocalyptic run-down building. If I were to critique it, just one thing I would say is that the bottom part with the manipulation looks a tad too busy. I would crop it a bit so the focus on the building is a little bit more. But that's just me and what do I know about the rule of thirds and all that.  

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wlkr In reply to JiMeiLofgren [2016-11-10 09:42:01 +0000 UTC]

I tried that, it didn't look good (in my opinion). The building need the air around it to have an impact, otherwise it just becomes a box.

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JiMeiLofgren In reply to wlkr [2016-11-11 04:31:51 +0000 UTC]

Very true. Ah, well, I still think it is fantastic.

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wlkr In reply to plasmid1 [2016-06-14 16:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the suggestion, but it doesn't feel right to me.

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