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Published: 2006-12-08 17:36:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 221; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description Im not very happy with this one...But i need to be submiting more offten here, im starting to lose my fame.

Anyways,
You'll neva guess who is comming
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Comments: 22

NaitoOokami [2007-02-19 05:54:31 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, i would totally suck if i tried to do a comic, and you've pulled off a great job! like craz said, totally cinematic-like. my only concern is the last frame, its only the forepaws, so you dont know where the wolf is coming from, or what it's doing (standing/sitting etc). Other than that, i would totally follow the whole series. I really like this, more plz!

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WolfAphrodite In reply to NaitoOokami [2007-02-19 10:53:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! And I am in the process of working on this to make it a bit better
Im takeing notes as everyone comments, hopefuly this helps
Thanks again!
And More comming at cha!!

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NaitoOokami In reply to WolfAphrodite [2007-02-19 11:14:34 +0000 UTC]

no problems! :+watch: ^^

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WolfAphrodite In reply to NaitoOokami [2007-02-20 00:27:26 +0000 UTC]

<3 thankies!!!
Love the huskey picture btw

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NaitoOokami In reply to WolfAphrodite [2007-02-20 06:46:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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WolfAphrodite In reply to NaitoOokami [2007-02-20 20:47:11 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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Crazdude [2007-02-18 17:45:32 +0000 UTC]

I can feeeeel the tension!! You really could work for a movie studio making storyboards! You really have the cinematic feel in your frames and story-telling skills! You're great with the snarl faces! You make Kira look so freaking scary!!

The only thing that I thought was a little confusing was whether the paws were Kiras or someone elses, and where everyone is located in the scene. Maybe if you threw in a frame that showed a Point of view shot from behind Kira looking over the Unicorns.

And a shot of the other character in a way that showed where they were in respect to the unicorn herd and Kira. Or if you rotated the first and second frames so that it looks like Kira is facing the right-side of the page for each of the frames she's in, while the new character is facing toward the left. That way they appear to be facing each other. It's some basic rules of film that you might learn in college if you take a film course!

And of course coloring couldn't hurt! That might make things a little clearer for the storyline!^_^ Over all, this is one of the best pages so far!!

*keeps reading the next few pages*

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WolfAphrodite In reply to Crazdude [2007-02-19 02:12:24 +0000 UTC]

lol!!! Cool beansss! ( jots down some more notes <3 )

~

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WolfLuver [2006-12-12 03:24:02 +0000 UTC]

Call me your good friend >:

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WolfAphrodite In reply to WolfLuver [2006-12-12 15:29:50 +0000 UTC]

you know you are!!!

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ChosenWolf1 [2006-12-09 02:14:42 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW I KNOW!!!!!!!! props to me for the idea!!!!!!!

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WolfAphrodite In reply to ChosenWolf1 [2006-12-10 02:49:08 +0000 UTC]

XD WOOT WOOT@!!!

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Kittylover17 [2006-12-08 20:22:27 +0000 UTC]

awesome!! finally page 2 of fulfurious!! It looks awesome!! I love it! You have to draw more! I want to know who's coming!!!

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WolfAphrodite In reply to Kittylover17 [2006-12-10 02:48:28 +0000 UTC]

I bet you do my kitty friend ^^

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Kittylover17 In reply to WolfAphrodite [2006-12-12 22:04:18 +0000 UTC]

lol! very funny little wolfy!! btw, are u ok? I haven't seen u today or friday. I was absent yesterday.

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kitsumie [2006-12-08 18:28:59 +0000 UTC]

okay i must try to color x3! cause its to awesome!

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WolfAphrodite In reply to kitsumie [2006-12-10 02:47:33 +0000 UTC]

^^ aww thank you very much my good friend!

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kitsumie In reply to WolfAphrodite [2006-12-10 02:52:57 +0000 UTC]

so what colors are what?

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WolfAphrodite In reply to kitsumie [2006-12-10 02:56:13 +0000 UTC]

lol, you color as you like.

I want to see what you can come up with ^^

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kitsumie In reply to WolfAphrodite [2006-12-10 02:58:44 +0000 UTC]

XD oh my god..im going to kill it

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WolfAphrodite In reply to kitsumie [2006-12-10 03:03:49 +0000 UTC]

XD haha! YOU CAN DO IT!!

Have fun babe kira's going to bed

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kitsumie In reply to WolfAphrodite [2006-12-10 03:08:47 +0000 UTC]

oh i shall night

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