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wolfgangraven — Preview: Avarion Page 009
Published: 2008-09-23 22:30:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1322; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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( copy pasted from his submission )"This is a preview of page 009 from *rpgAvarion 's comic - after an eight-page-prologue this will be the start of the first chapter.
It is the first page finished - which means it will be a while before the comic is ready to start. You can find the character descriptions for the people on the page in his gallery - however the lettered version will not be posted until the comic starts."
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( a note from moi! >.< )
Also, as I said, it's a preview... it was supposed to be "Mature Content". Since I really want to share it with you guys, I censored a few "Bumps" to make this for GP audience. ^_^ And yes, I had to "Liven up the border" to secure from theft... LOL!!!
ENJOY!!!
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Looks great. Not sure if the slight colorations work... but they arent BAD. I look forward to seeing more of this comic!!
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nice idea with the border and the "bumbs"
Concerning art thieves I'm considering to use one of my logo-pictures and place it somewhere on the pictures - that way no one could sell it and the ones who post it elsewhere are actually making an advertisement for the comic.
Unfortunately that isn't possible at the moment with one of my websites down and the other incomplete and not presentable to the public...
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^_^ that could work too
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^_^ hindi naman... slight lang!
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So much detail... I really like the small splashes of color too. You've out done yourself. ^^ Bumps, haha... indeed. I had actually thought why they weren't there, given the attire, when I looked at it before reading your description. It made me laugh. ^^
Excellent! ^^
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I had to go with the DA-content-rules on this - in my country this wouldn't be considered mature content, here are several age-16 comics with much more explizit content available, and you can see more in real pictures on the front side of some daily newspapers...
And there is a reason for this attire in the story of the comic, otherwise it wouldn't be there - while I have no problem with letting it attract readers if the story needs it as well, I wouldn't do descriptions like this for pure (and imho useless) fan-service.
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I completely understand the content rating for DA. I don't mind adult content to be honest, so I know I wouldn't be offended with the 'bumps'. The comic looks great!
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if you want to see the mature content, take a look at *rpgAvarion 's page
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The border works actually. I mean its something I've been doing also with the comic I'm currently doing. Of course its not the same border design I have made but this chinese type design looks pretty darn good.
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lol, the purpose was to eliminate some details for those art thieves... ^_^
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