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Description I fail at backgrounds. Sorry. I fail at titles too btw.

CRITIQUE PLEASE. D: Whether it be good or bad. I. DON'T. CARE.

A request from of Jerome and Weed together. Is it love...or very very very strong friendship? ;3

H'OMFG WEED ISN'T BLUE. 8DDDD
I'm somewhat pleased how it turned out. I tried out a new technique for "brindling" fur. Thanks =Gingastar18 . xD
I hate the background HAAAATE it. Ugh. I'm so glad I'm almost done with requests...

Weed and Jerome (C) Yoshihiro Takahashi
art (C) meeee
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Comments: 35

snailkites [2009-07-02 13:44:50 +0000 UTC]

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Yaay you followed all my tips! Backgrounds are really hard, I usually just 'borrow' a photo off Google, flip it, and run it through some filters. ;D I love the way Weed and Jerome look, but I think you should try branching out on shading. Here's what I do for shading:
Whatever color light is being cast on them, make the shadows the opposite color. Open up a new layer and shade, not just around the edges, but anywhere some thing is blocking the light onto them. It can even be a part of their body, or a round section can be devoid of light, as long as you keep a source in mind. As you've shaded with the color, set the layer to multiply and adjust the saturation and opacity as needed.
For the background I can see you used tree brushes... they look pixely. The snow on them is well done though, but Weed and Jerome seem to have floating dog syndrome- they are hovering above the ground. Add some snow around their feet, covering parts of their tails maybe, to show they are on the ground, as well as them casting a darker shadow on the ground. I like the coloring, and I'm glad you took my earlier advice. Yay, sharp lines!

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GingaLegend227 [2012-03-25 07:15:19 +0000 UTC]

aww this looks really nice n_n

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Gingaxheart [2011-11-19 15:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job! Weed looks so cute - and just like Gin :b

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SonicTailsBros4ever [2011-01-16 07:39:56 +0000 UTC]

*U* I think both the background and Jerome and Weed themselves are GORGEOUS! *U* Love this! Rock on!

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snowy-huskywolf [2010-01-23 14:06:04 +0000 UTC]

They look soo sweet ^^

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EdwardElric1308 [2010-01-20 23:12:09 +0000 UTC]

This is cool, I'm trying to figure out how you brindled the fur like that because I sure would love to learn how!

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WolfieBites In reply to EdwardElric1308 [2010-01-20 23:15:46 +0000 UTC]

OH LAWL. I thank , she told me how. xDD
You have to find a white and black zebra pattern and then change the opacity to really light and smudge everything in with the fur color.
It's very simple and easy, it's just a pain in the ass. :/

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WeedxKyoshiro1995 [2009-07-25 22:41:15 +0000 UTC]

Something happened when I was attempting to psot a comment and it was lost DX. So forgive me if my first post just magically turns up later... I L-O-V-E this!!! Jeorme looks sexy... Weed looks like he's really enjoying his time with 'his' Jerome. It's beautiful!!! And, you don't suck at backgrounds. I love the background!! Yay, for no-blue Weed. Thank you sooooo much!!! 8D

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WolfieBites In reply to WeedxKyoshiro1995 [2009-07-26 05:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Yessss, I'm really glad you like it. :'3 You did such a kick ass job on my amv, so I decided to draw something extra snazzy.

You think I should draw more Ginga yaoi arts..?

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WeedxKyoshiro1995 [2009-07-25 22:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaaw!!! I LOVE this!!! It's so pretty!! Incredible job!

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betty80 [2009-07-23 10:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful just wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!

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alvin938 [2009-07-22 21:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Always nice to see your style blended into Ginga, Wolfie. I like how you made these two resemble Gin and John in color ratio, they're much more pleasing on the eyes in your design too

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WolfieBites In reply to alvin938 [2009-07-22 21:39:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. : ) I like the Ginga style, but I think art looks much better when people put their own touch to it.
Oh yeh, I guess they do kinda resemble John and Gin, colorwise. I never noticed that. xD

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alvin938 In reply to WolfieBites [2009-07-22 21:43:20 +0000 UTC]

That's the beauty of viewing your pictures multiple times, you notice things you didn't the first time.

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dang8518 [2009-07-18 18:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Your wolves are Sooo cute!(>_<

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WolfieBites In reply to dang8518 [2009-07-19 06:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^

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Ichigo-sama55 [2009-07-14 17:59:57 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! : D *favs*

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Kuroshadow25 [2009-07-04 01:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Very cool!

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Pookpic [2009-07-03 10:22:56 +0000 UTC]

Omg cute1!

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snailkites [2009-07-02 15:15:15 +0000 UTC]

I posted a critique.
Also, do you use the pen tool for lineart? If you don't you should, because you can get amazing results... or so I hear. TT.TT I have the FAILtoshop Elements. It's the cheap-ass version with half the tools. D:

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WolfieBites In reply to snailkites [2009-07-02 18:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks !!! : DDDDD
Meh, I use pen tool sometimes, I haven't really mastered it yet. :/
But yoy make WIN Art/graphics with Failtoshop Elements. D:

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snailkites In reply to WolfieBites [2009-07-02 22:16:56 +0000 UTC]

Nyeeeehhhhhh!

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WolfieBites In reply to snailkites [2009-07-03 04:38:50 +0000 UTC]

HOSNAP.

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snailkites In reply to snailkites [2009-07-02 22:18:30 +0000 UTC]

THEY WILL STARE EACH OTHER INTO OBLIVIONNN

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Ukaisha [2009-07-02 15:13:58 +0000 UTC]

Flippin' A Wolfie, feel the love for yourself a little the dogs are fantastic, the background is fantastic, and the brindling is flippinfantastic. I still can't draw a correct, or at least partially correct, brindling pattern on a dog.
Although I didn't even know Weed was Brindle to begin with?

Um...critique...I guess if the characters are lying in snow, it would be logical for them to be sinking slightly into the snow and for little snow drifts to be covering parts of their parts and legs. Same concept as if the characters were standing in grass; grass stalks would poke up and cover their paws. Yeah, we'll go with that |D

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WolfieBites In reply to Ukaisha [2009-07-02 18:33:39 +0000 UTC]

meh, I knowww, but I just have low self esteem all the time; not my fault.
FYI, I cheated on the brindle pattern, I didn't really draw it. ;] And yes, Mr. Potface is a brindle, they just left that out in the anime.

I noticed they were supposed to be "sunk in" a few minitues after I submitted this. D: But I'm too lazy to go back and fix it. I'm so proud of my fail trees thoughhh. x3

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Ukaisha In reply to WolfieBites [2009-07-02 20:16:01 +0000 UTC]

Aw ._. Is Weed supposed to be a Blue Brindle? Because Blue Brindles aren't actually blue with darker stripes; they're more blue with silver stripes, which look cream. IRL, anyway. I figure he could be a Gray Brindle, but he's colored Blue, so yeah O_o
But I guess anime doesn't always make sense.
And if any doesn't make sense, neither does your art |D So they're floating on top of snow; that's cool.

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WolfieBites In reply to Ukaisha [2009-07-02 20:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Weed isn't supposed to be blue, PERIOD. He's supposed to be a Silverrr Brindle like his dad, Gin, whose name means "Silver" because he IS silver. D:
I dunno, the anime was fucked up anyway. It doesn't follow the manga at all.
Well, floating dogs in snow are connected with the floating, flying dogs on the Weed mangas, so now everything makes sense...

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Ukaisha In reply to WolfieBites [2009-07-02 20:49:32 +0000 UTC]

xD Silver is actually cream colored for dogs IRL. Technically this is what a silver brindle should look like:
[link]
So even that doesn't make any real sense.
Oh well what the hell; if everyone else has been smoking dem blue dogs, we might as well join in |D Oh yeah, and I've got to draw that horny triceratops guy too...

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WolfieBites In reply to Ukaisha [2009-07-02 20:59:56 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh, like this dog:
[link]
Wow, that looks SO MUCH like Weed. Yes, it does. Totally makes sense why everyone mistakes him for being blue. LAWL MY BROTHER HAS BLUE DOGS IN HIS CAR, but he refuses to share them with me. :'D
I'm failing at your requests...really. I hate drawing people, because they end up all disfigured and everything..

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Ukaisha In reply to WolfieBites [2009-07-02 21:06:47 +0000 UTC]

That dog looks like it's been smoking other dogs |D And I'm sorry; I'll make an attempt to draw you blue dog fanart some time later tonight. I just got a car yesterday, so I'm still sort of doing stuff with it. :3
And that's fine, frankly I think your people are beter than mine. You should see my attempts at people. I should try to draw one just to show you what it's like. It would make you kill yourself upon impact.

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WolfieBites In reply to Ukaisha [2009-07-02 21:15:57 +0000 UTC]

lawl I think it's just an Akita thing. They smoke themselves. You can just draw something like wha my friend did. xD [link] It's blue, and it's a dog. 8D
Oooooh, what kind of car? 83 I wish I had a car. x'3 I'm going to go to the DMV later to try and get my permit once my mom gets back.
That's because you think your's are god-awful. Drawing can be comparable to writing. Some people can draw some really awesome shit (i draw shit, but I don't consider it awesome), but some people can write novels if they wanted to(that would be you).
I figure some people can only have one or the other.
Then again, some peoiple are jsut so fuking fantastic, they can write AND draw.
Have fun with your car though. D:

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GojiraGin [2009-07-02 15:06:16 +0000 UTC]

That is very cool! This is amazing!

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Tai91 [2009-07-02 06:51:25 +0000 UTC]

OMG!! this amazing very wonderful

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WolfieBites In reply to Tai91 [2009-07-02 18:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. 8D

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