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I groaned and slowly opened my eyes. An awful stench filled my nose making me gag. I slowly stood up on my paws, pain scorched through my entire body making me grit my teeth. My fur felt sticky and gross. A hard substance was under paw paws, making my pads hurt. The sounds of monsters and Nofurs sounded from above me. A beam of light was in front of me. I walked forward till I was under the light and looked up. It was coming from what looked like some sort of vent. I could see the feet of Nofurs walk past the vent.
"Where am I...?" I rasped. I winced, my throat was sore and dry. I have no idea how long I have been down here, nor do I know how I got here. I tried to remember who I was.
"My name is...My name is... Dawn...." I said slowly. I twitched my tail. My head was pounding. The last thing I remember was talking to my mom and siblings. 'Mom....' My mom was name Willow... I had two brothers... Two older brothers named.... Named... I cant remember. I can't remember what happened to them. I don't even remember what happened to me. I remember my age. I am 4 moons. No wait... 5 moons. I might even be six moons... maybe I have been down here for a moon. For the moment I know I am at least 5 moons.
I looked to my right. There was water flowing. On the other side was another hard substance. It looked like the thunderpath but white. My mouth was dry. I walked over to the water and bent down. I lapped at the water. I reeled back, my lip curled and my nose wrinkled. That was the foulest thing I have ever tasted. I could see stuff floating in the water. My ears pricked when I saw an orange fish floating in the water. My stomach growled. I just realized how hungry I was. I crouched by the foul water and swatted my paw at the fish. It flew in the air and landed on the white thunderpath next to me. I sniffed the fish, it was definitely dead. It was tiny, but I was too hungry to care. I tore a bit of the flesh off of the fish. I wrinkled my nose. The fish tasted like the water. I forced my self to eat the rest of it despite it's taste. It didn't do much to ease the stabbing hunger pain in my stomach.
I left the remains of the fish and started walking. It wasn't as dark as before, my eyes were probably adjusting to the lack of light. Every once in a while there would be beams of light coming from different vents.
Soon my paws started aching and the hunger pains in my stomach felt awful. I stopped walking and lay down sighing. I rested head on my paws. I closed my green eyes and just rested.
My eyes snapped open when I heard squeaking and a skittering sound. I sat up and yawned. I must have dozed off. I heard squeaking again. Mice? I looked around. To my right were two big, brown, animals with narrow faces and naked tails. They sat up on their hind legs and stared at me. Their whiskers quivered. They kinda looked like mice, but much bigger. They were as big as me. I stood up and walked over to the mice looking animals. I reached forward and sniffed them. One of them let out a horrifying screech, showing its sharp teeth. I squealed and leaped back. The two animals leaped towards me. One latched onto my front leg and the other ran around me and latched onto my tail. I shrieked and threw them off. I turned tail and ran as fast as I could. I could hear the creatures chasing after me. I screeched and fell when one of them jumped and bit my leg. I spun around and sliced my claws across one of them. It shrieked and fell backwards. I grabbed the one on my leg and threw it into the water. I turned to the last one. It let out a loud screech again. Suddenly five more of the creatures joined the first one. Their beady black eyes stared straight at me.
I shrieked when they all suddenly leaped onto me. Their claws scratched my pelt and their teeth sunk into my flesh. I howled in pain and tried to run, some of them falling off. I tripped after a bit of running. I flailed my legs and claws, trying to throw them off. Pain seared my body and black dots started to cloud my vision.
Suddenly, a loud yowl sounded from close by. The weight of the mouse like animals started to be lifted. Soon I could feel all of the creatures were off and running away. The cat who saved me turn to me.
"Hey! Hey stay awake!" he exclaimed. My eyes slowly closed and everything went black.

Sidenote: Mkay well I was bored.... so yeah... I wrote this in like ten minutes XD

Description
I groaned and slowly opened my eyes. An awful stench filled my nose making me gag. I slowly stood up on my paws, pain scorched through my entire body making me grit my teeth. My fur felt sticky and gross. A hard substance was under paw paws, making my pads hurt. The sounds of monsters and Nofurs sounded from above me. A beam of light was in front of me. I walked forward till I was under the light and looked up. It was coming from what looked like some sort of vent. I could see the feet of Nofurs walk past the vent.
"Where am I...?" I rasped. I winced, my throat was sore and dry. I have no idea how long I have been down here, nor do I know how I got here. I tried to remember who I was.
"My name is...My name is... Dawn...." I said slowly. I twitched my tail. My head was pounding. The last thing I remember was talking to my mom and siblings. 'Mom....' My mom was name Willow... I had two brothers... Two older brothers named.... Named... I cant remember. I can't remember what happened to them. I don't even remember what happened to me. I remember my age. I am 4 moons. No wait... 5 moons. I might even be six moons... maybe I have been down here for a moon. For the moment I know I am at least 5 moons.
I looked to my right. There was water flowing. On the other side was another hard substance. It looked like the thunderpath but white. My mouth was dry. I walked over to the water and bent down. I lapped at the water. I reeled back, my lip curled and my nose wrinkled. That was the foulest thing I have ever tasted. I could see stuff floating in the water. My ears pricked when I saw an orange fish floating in the water. My stomach growled. I just realized how hungry I was. I crouched by the foul water and swatted my paw at the fish. It flew in the air and landed on the white thunderpath next to me. I sniffed the fish, it was definitely dead. It was tiny, but I was too hungry to care. I tore a bit of the flesh off of the fish. I wrinkled my nose. The fish tasted like the water. I forced my self to eat the rest of it despite it's taste. It didn't do much to ease the stabbing hunger pain in my stomach.
I left the remains of the fish and started walking. It wasn't as dark as before, my eyes were probably adjusting to the lack of light. Every once in a while there would be beams of light coming from different vents.
Soon my paws started aching and the hunger pains in my stomach felt awful. I stopped walking and lay down sighing. I rested head on my paws. I closed my green eyes and just rested.
My eyes snapped open when I heard squeaking and a skittering sound. I sat up and yawned. I must have dozed off. I heard squeaking again. Mice? I looked around. To my right were two big, brown, animals with narrow faces and naked tails. They sat up on their hind legs and stared at me. Their whiskers quivered. They kinda looked like mice, but much bigger. They were as big as me. I stood up and walked over to the mice looking animals. I reached forward and sniffed them. One of them let out a horrifying screech, showing its sharp teeth. I squealed and leaped back. The two animals leaped towards me. One latched onto my front leg and the other ran around me and latched onto my tail. I shrieked and threw them off. I turned tail and ran as fast as I could. I could hear the creatures chasing after me. I screeched and fell when one of them jumped and bit my leg. I spun around and sliced my claws across one of them. It shrieked and fell backwards. I grabbed the one on my leg and threw it into the water. I turned to the last one. It let out a loud screech again. Suddenly five more of the creatures joined the first one. Their beady black eyes stared straight at me.
I shrieked when they all suddenly leaped onto me. Their claws scratched my pelt and their teeth sunk into my flesh. I howled in pain and tried to run, some of them falling off. I tripped after a bit of running. I flailed my legs and claws, trying to throw them off. Pain seared my body and black dots started to cloud my vision.
Suddenly, a loud yowl sounded from close by. The weight of the mouse like animals started to be lifted. Soon I could feel all of the creatures were off and running away. The cat who saved me turn to me.
"Hey! Hey stay awake!" he exclaimed. My eyes slowly closed and everything went black.

Sidenote: Mkay well I was bored.... so yeah... I wrote this in like ten minutes XD