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Hello!
So, what do you guys think? Like I said in my journal, and I are going to try to partner up on this!
She helped me with some redlining, as well.
So yes! Very exciting!
ABOUT THE PAGE
So yes. The Spirit wolf, Red. His first appearence!
Basicly he is collecting water against his will.
With a.. um.. leather bag type thing.
FAILED.
Not much to say other than that!
Thanks for reading!
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Thanks! Actually, this is a really old version. The most current one is here-
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But the most current version is also currently being remade...
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it seems like there's a bit too much scruff on the underside of his neck in the last panel, but that's just my opinion.
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Yes, now that I look back on it you're right.
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Hey, do you mind small critique/advice comment? Just two things I noticed - the background and the sound effects words. For the background, you might want to put even just a little bit more time into it, to make it less confusing. This tutorial might help with the water: [link] And this one is nice for trees (although there aren't any on this page): [link] As for the words, they might be a little more dynamic if you drew them, or maybe used a different font. Other than that, you are very talented and I am really enjoying your comic so far!
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Thank you for your critique, fortunatly I have improved a few things such as the water. And the backgrounds are slowly evolving, and as of I believe on page five I changed the font to a nicer one that seems to work better.
Thanks again!
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No problem, I'm glad you feel that you are improving
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Yay! 
You could have worked a bit more on the backround, but I like the way you drew the wolf, especciallly in the last panel.
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But I'm working to fix that!
And thank you!
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Np. Your backrounds are awesome in usual pictures.
That's the way I feel when I draw comic myself.
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Exactly! Though the next page imma try EXTRA hard. :razz:
I guess it's the night scenes that are killing me.
I used to love night scenes before this.
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Quite soon! ^^
I just have to do the speech bubbles...
And a quick runover to make sure I got everything.
BUT MAN THESE NIGHT PAGES ARE KILLING ME. THEY LOOK SO... UN NIGHT LIKE.
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No... they look more "night like" then what I draw...
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Eh? Oh.. it just takes practice! ^^
Thankyou though.
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I think the new lines look great, I bet this partnership is going to turn out very nicely
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Thankyou! It's in progress.
The way things are looking, it should be done sometime later this week!
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EPIC! Fabulous poses, and it shows a lot about the character just in these few scenes. Lol the bag!
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Thankyou! YUS. The bag needs work.
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Alrighty, I'm gonna tackle this in my traditional way... critique first! 
I think what might be interesting with the bag is keeping it with the style it is (blending it into the background), BUT to add a small strip of lighter color at the very edge of the darker side; this gives the strap more shape and lends more to the form. I'll email you a picture to show this, since I don't think I describe it very well.
Now... OMG YOUR PACING. I really... I just cannot get over the pacing of this page. xDD This REALLY helps to carry the story... you are SUCH an amazing story teller, it's incredible. 
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gosh, thankyou so much! I really try to do good! And yes.. the bag.
A true enemy!
I really would appreciate your help you have to offer.
Yes. The pacing.
I TRIED SO HARD I COULD HAVE DIED. I read Making Comics by Scott Mcloud a while ago, so I'm able to use several techniques from that. Among my own I've discovered!
But really, thankyou so much!
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