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Published: 2011-05-01 22:22:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 297; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 6
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The Simple Things...---
They are what bring us together.
When we can all gather and see the same thing,
When we can say we were there,
And can tell everyone what we shared,
If everyone enjoyed the simple things in life,
Then maybe we could all show anyone,
We are not ones that look only ahead,
But those that take things slow and soak in memories.
Memories hold us together,
Rushing pushes us apart.
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THIS TOOK ME FOREVER!! I TRIED NEW SHADING AND STUFF!!! LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK PLEASE!!!! The giant light line are fireflies
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This has to be my best work... EVER... the wolf next to Kega is Karen and belongs to
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Very nice atmosphere!
Critique-wise... It might be good to think a little more about the composition of an image. This one is quite cluttered, the spreading-out of all the characters isn't in any sort of pattern and so there's no focus to the image. The line of fireflies serves some purpose to drawing the eye around the image, but it's too bright and solid, so it almost outshines the characters who I presume are the real focus of the image. The two wolves in the lower left corner confuse the image somewhat... Because their colouring is somewhat random, they kind of clash with the rest of the image, and being in that corner they distract the viewer, to the point where the first few times I looked at this I actually completely overlooked the giant dragon, since his colouring blends into the image whereas the two wolves do not. Perhaps if they were moved up, it might introduce a bit of negative space to draw the focus to the top, where the other characters are. It might also serve you well to experiment with varying colour shades rather than using the simple, bright colours you have there, so that they look a little more in harmony with their surroundings.
That's just general advice that might help you, of course, don't feel too pressured by all I said since I tend to talk a lot... I've had art and design classes that teach me about these sorts of things, and I think you'd benefit from looking into those sorts of things as well. Your actual drawing skills will develop with time and lots of practice, but your sense of aesthetics when developing an image can be improved straight away just from a bit of research.
Good luck and keep on persevering!
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don't get a lot of cirtuques it will help
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Critiques are a much-loved, rare commodity, it seems <: D But I guess that's the reason so many groups encourage them.
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have you ever played scopa random topic
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i think my hand died a little making it X'D
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i read your comment and then accidently the first part of your sig X'DDDDD anyway~~~~ DON'T DIES!!
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I DIED IN YOUR PANTS YES.
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