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PowerFeud [2012-10-06 09:27:47 +0000 UTC]

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Great work on this piece. I really like how you've worked both of these. Both versions have exceptional flow and composition.

I think I prefer the version at the top the most. That extra color really helps.

Here's a bit of a break-down on what I think could be improved in both versions:

Top version: You've got some great colors here, and the overall signature looks nice. However, it seems to be a tad oversharpened; this is evident by the fact that some edges around the render look to be pixelated; this is a sign that the opacity of the sharpness should have been lowered a bit. The same problem is also noticeable throughout other areas of the signature.

Bottom version: The render stands out a little too much since it's the only thing that has any color while everything else is black and white. I feel that this throws the signature off by quite a bit. I think this version would have looked better if it was all black and white; everything would have seemed more natural and it would have all fit together much better.

Despite these problems, you have brought together an excellent signature here, and both versions have quite a bit of appeal to them.

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JustinCalam [2014-04-21 12:55:42 +0000 UTC]

The top on is epic!

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theMoon-sFantasy [2012-10-12 12:30:44 +0000 UTC]

love dead space, LOVE LOVE LOOVE LOVE LOVE!
love you VERY much xD

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In2umniaKillH3r [2012-10-08 18:44:53 +0000 UTC]

The first one is definitely the best.
The colors and lighting.

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Graphfun [2012-10-07 12:14:14 +0000 UTC]

The one is awesome !

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xArtl3ssx [2012-10-07 10:48:39 +0000 UTC]

The colors in your first work are pretty good! (:
Some areas seem to be oversharpened and a lightsource would be nice.
Overall you did a nice job here!

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Rabling-Arts [2012-10-06 04:08:54 +0000 UTC]

The first one is pretty cool m8.

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