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WoodenTrees — LeafCrow/evil Cinderpelt au, part 1

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Published: 2019-09-15 19:59:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1794; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 1
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Description “Mother!” Holly cried, “You’re okay!”
Holly what are you doing?” Feather growled, lifting his head. “lion what is she doing?”
Lion tilted his head. “That’s a good question.” He grunted, his gaze clouded. “What’s happening Holly.”
“ But-But she’s here!” Holly yelped , staring at her mother’s starry figure, “How do you not see her?”
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Crowfeather sighed sadly, “This is as far as I can take you. “
Lion flattened his ears, “You aren’t coming?” He mewed, his voice shaking.
Crowfeather looked at his son, love and grief warring in his eyes, “I want to.” He began, “But I’ll only cause chaos for you. If you-if you three really want to go, then it will be easier for you if i stay behind.”
Lion bowed his head, the thought of losing his father to made him queasy.
“I’ll miss you.” Holly choked, pushing her nose into Crowfeathers fur. Feather rested his head on Crowfeathers head, his sightless eyes closed in a moment of emotion.
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Feather sniffed, lifting his head. An unusual sent wafted around him, as he trudged through the rain.
‘I wonder,” Feather murmured quietly, bunching his nose,
“Guys!” Holly Interrupted him, Yelling in excitement, Were here!”
“what?” Lion yelped beside Feather, “wait where?”
“Come on!” Holly bounded behind her brothers, pushing them forward, “I saw It! The lake, and-and the island!”
Lion didn’t need any further convincing, Feather could feel lions heart race with excitement and fear,”Show me!” He demanded.
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“Squirrelflight?” Lion questioned slowly, staring at the ginger she-cat, “As in, Leafpools sister?”
Squirrelflights eyes widened, “You know Leafpool?” She gasped, “How?”
Lion felt his heart begin to race, “I’m, Im her son.” He rushed “We’re Leafpools kits.” Lion could feel Feather flick his tail at lions back, but he didn’t care anymore. This was more important than staying safe.
The whispers of Squirrelflights clanmates surged, “but she was-“ “Leafpools?” “She’s alive?” “Trick-“
Squirrelflight blinked at him, her tail quivering. “Leafpools kits.” She murmured, visibly growing exited. She motioned Lion over to her, “Come. “
That was all Lion needed. He rushed toward the ginger she-cat, pressing his nose into her long fur, shaking. Squirrelflight wrapped herself around her new kin, tucking him into her fur like a kit that needed protecting.
She smelled so different, but so much like his mother.
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“Hello” a voice behind feather sounded, “Im Alderpaw. Feather right?”
“Right.” Feather responded hesitantly, flicking his long tail. Not bothering to turn round.
“Uh,” Alderpaw stammered, “I’m behind you?”
Feather snorted, “I noticed, And?”
Alderpaw rustled the ground with his paws, obviously nervous to be talking to a stranger. After a moment of uncomfortable silence, Alderpaw trotted from behind Feather. Feather could hear Alderpaw suck in an astonished breath.
“Oh.” Alderpaw mewed awkwardly, “you’re blind.”
Feather growled, he hated that word. “Oh really?.” He snapped at the fluffy apprentice, “ I hadn’t noticed.”
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The starry pelts faded back into Holly vision, and she sighed in relief. There were no Starclan cats in thunderclan, so it was unbearably quiet. Holly hadn’t realized how accustomed she had grown to the starry cats being everywhere she went.
“Greetings Holly,” one murmured, it’s fiery ginger pelt glowing, “We have waited for you for moons.”
“What?” Holly blinked, “Why are you waiting for me of all cats?”
“You and your brothers will deliver us.” The fiery cat mewed softly, Holly felt her fur stand on end. “You three will let the stars in.”
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Holly stared at the moonpool, shivering. She had never experienced something like that before.
Glancing up, Holly noticed Alderpaw screwing his eyes shut at the base of the water, obviously not asleep, but attempting to visit starclan. Beside him, Cinderpelt stared at the water, her icy blue eyes slitted. Cinderpelt lifted her gaze, and met Holly’s green eyes with her own. Cinderpelt smiled softly, but her blue eyes weren’t friendly.

Holly shivered, ducking her head back Down to the icy water, but she could still feel the grey she-cats blue eyes on her pelt.
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I’ll let you identify what’s going on here! But this is something that I’ve been thinking about doing for 100 watchers. That being a small Quick 6-7 part comic, with full illustrations in between! This is au that I like, there’s more info about it on my page!
Feel free to ask questions about It!
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Comments: 18

Warriorcatsfan47 [2021-06-27 21:42:48 +0000 UTC]

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Dovley-Artist [2019-09-16 03:14:06 +0000 UTC]

this is so interesting!!  I can pick up a few things, i'm assuming Leafpool and Crowfeather left and didnt come back, and Cinderpelt survived.

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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-16 04:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!! < 3
And You are correct! Leafpool and Crowfeather left together and didn’t linger in the clans territories. And Cinderpelt lives to see another day!

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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 00:03:52 +0000 UTC]

does this mean brackenfur died? or Sorrel?

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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 00:15:13 +0000 UTC]

Sorrel lives, but due to how stressful the month of her pregnancy were with losing leafpool, and the badgers, she would lose cinderkit and molekit. 
Brakenfur dies in the badger fight, because he’s fighting hard outside of Cinderpelts den, keeping them both safe, but dying in the process. 
Birchfall also dies in the battle! 

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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 00:20:28 +0000 UTC]

nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu birchfallll.

ALSO, im assuming Hollyleafs power is to see ghosts?  Im curious why you made that decision.

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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 00:31:23 +0000 UTC]

ByE bYE birChFALl.
I took a spin on the seeing ghosts thing tree can do, and made it so Hollyleaf can see Cats from star clan!
I did that for a couple of reasons-
- since Hollyleaf grew up knowing that she was outside of the code, there’s no real ‘dynamic” between her and clan-life. So the choice to make her see starclan cats I felt would draw in some chemistry with clan-life naturally, rather than making her super strict to the code.
-I wanted to give her a power! I feel like this au needs her to be the “third” to give the three something else that binds them. I feel like she’d be kinda a stick in the mud, with no plot drive otherwise!
-Since Firestar is dead, he’s not In the prophecy, so I needed to fill up that space, Holly was a natural fit.
-Currently, Starclan has shunned Thunderclan, due to Cinderpelts actions. So I needed Hollyleaf to be a natural communicator with starclan, so she can help “let the stars in”!

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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 02:41:30 +0000 UTC]

-How did firestar die?
-wtf did cinderpelt do oh no

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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 02:54:41 +0000 UTC]

This is an EeeEeevviill Cinderpelt au! What do you ThInk shE dId.
She actually did a lot.
I’m going to explain it all in the drawings, but I can explain it to you vaguely if you’d like?

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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 02:59:14 +0000 UTC]

sure y not lol, 


d i d s h e d o w h a t i t h i n k s h e d i d ?




f i r e h a s b e e n s n u f f e d ?

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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 03:17:38 +0000 UTC]

h e s b e e n s n u f f e d
Okay, to sum it all up, Cinderpelt is extremely bitter about not being given a chance to become a warrior, so using that anger, Snowtuft offers to train her.

Yaddayaddayadda,
and she eventually becomes a mentor to Leafpaw, Which she is also very bitter about, because She loved Firestar, and mentoring his kit isn’t her ideal apprentice.
New prophecy happens still. Same events. Until Cinderpelt finds Leafpool being “friendly” with Crowfeather.
She gets angry, not understanding why her apprentice thinks it’s okay to fawn over a Tom, when she has work to do.
Leafpool has a massive spat with Cinder before she runs away.
Cinderpelt grows more resentful as days go by, Her brother being dead doesn’t help either.
Cinderpelt also grows spiteful of Firestar, because he still looks everyday for Leafpool, even though she knows leafpools gone. She was also still bitter about him not fighting for his apprentices future.
(Keep in mind that she is being trained in the dark forest through all of this!)
So, snowtuft approaches her, and tells her that her problems won’t go away, they’ll only get stronger.
She needs to cut her weak points.

So she waits until Firestar has been injured in battle, and disguises death-berries in a herb bundle, which kills him. The poison is still fresh in his system, so it doesn’t go away. (Then she does something else that you can probably asssume.)
But it was murdering Firestar that made Starclan turn their heads!

Lol, “summing it up” but that’s as best as I can do! There are a bunch of details that I glossed over, but that’s her arc up until this first strip!
So yes, h e h a s b e e n s n u f f e d

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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 04:11:33 +0000 UTC]

'After the fire goes out, only cinders will remain'



Idk, I like the Idea of maybe sum starclan cat sayin that lol.

also agood title for an art peice.

also yaya Snowtuft is no longer beinig gnore, also, wy snow?

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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 04:17:39 +0000 UTC]

I chose snowtuft because I feel like he’s a very unexplored character! And I have a little backstory for him that makes him empathize with Cinderpelt!

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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 04:27:40 +0000 UTC]

oooooooooooooooooo

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GothamWolfess [2019-09-15 22:47:23 +0000 UTC]

wonderful story

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WoodenTrees In reply to GothamWolfess [2019-09-16 04:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! 

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m-arcelynn [2019-09-15 20:26:32 +0000 UTC]

oh this is GOODD

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WoodenTrees In reply to m-arcelynn [2019-09-15 20:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank yoUuuu!

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