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Dovley-Artist [2019-09-16 03:14:06 +0000 UTC]
this is so interesting!! I can pick up a few things, i'm assuming Leafpool and Crowfeather left and didnt come back, and Cinderpelt survived.
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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-16 04:38:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much!! < 3
And You are correct! Leafpool and Crowfeather left together and didn’t linger in the clans territories. And Cinderpelt lives to see another day!
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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 00:03:52 +0000 UTC]
does this mean brackenfur died? or Sorrel?
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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 00:15:13 +0000 UTC]
Sorrel lives, but due to how stressful the month of her pregnancy were with losing leafpool, and the badgers, she would lose cinderkit and molekit.
Brakenfur dies in the badger fight, because he’s fighting hard outside of Cinderpelts den, keeping them both safe, but dying in the process.
Birchfall also dies in the battle!
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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 00:20:28 +0000 UTC]
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu birchfallll.
ALSO, im assuming Hollyleafs power is to see ghosts? Im curious why you made that decision.
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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 00:31:23 +0000 UTC]
ByE bYE birChFALl.
I took a spin on the seeing ghosts thing tree can do, and made it so Hollyleaf can see Cats from star clan!
I did that for a couple of reasons-
- since Hollyleaf grew up knowing that she was outside of the code, there’s no real ‘dynamic” between her and clan-life. So the choice to make her see starclan cats I felt would draw in some chemistry with clan-life naturally, rather than making her super strict to the code.
-I wanted to give her a power! I feel like this au needs her to be the “third” to give the three something else that binds them. I feel like she’d be kinda a stick in the mud, with no plot drive otherwise!
-Since Firestar is dead, he’s not In the prophecy, so I needed to fill up that space, Holly was a natural fit.
-Currently, Starclan has shunned Thunderclan, due to Cinderpelts actions. So I needed Hollyleaf to be a natural communicator with starclan, so she can help “let the stars in”!
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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 02:41:30 +0000 UTC]
-How did firestar die?
-wtf did cinderpelt do oh no
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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 02:54:41 +0000 UTC]
This is an EeeEeevviill Cinderpelt au! What do you ThInk shE dId.
She actually did a lot.
I’m going to explain it all in the drawings, but I can explain it to you vaguely if you’d like?
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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 02:59:14 +0000 UTC]
sure y not lol,
d i d s h e d o w h a t i t h i n k s h e d i d ?
f i r e h a s b e e n s n u f f e d ?
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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 03:17:38 +0000 UTC]
h e s b e e n s n u f f e d
Okay, to sum it all up, Cinderpelt is extremely bitter about not being given a chance to become a warrior, so using that anger, Snowtuft offers to train her.
Yaddayaddayadda,
and she eventually becomes a mentor to Leafpaw, Which she is also very bitter about, because She loved Firestar, and mentoring his kit isn’t her ideal apprentice.
New prophecy happens still. Same events. Until Cinderpelt finds Leafpool being “friendly” with Crowfeather.
She gets angry, not understanding why her apprentice thinks it’s okay to fawn over a Tom, when she has work to do.
Leafpool has a massive spat with Cinder before she runs away.
Cinderpelt grows more resentful as days go by, Her brother being dead doesn’t help either.
Cinderpelt also grows spiteful of Firestar, because he still looks everyday for Leafpool, even though she knows leafpools gone. She was also still bitter about him not fighting for his apprentices future.
(Keep in mind that she is being trained in the dark forest through all of this!)
So, snowtuft approaches her, and tells her that her problems won’t go away, they’ll only get stronger.
She needs to cut her weak points.
So she waits until Firestar has been injured in battle, and disguises death-berries in a herb bundle, which kills him. The poison is still fresh in his system, so it doesn’t go away. (Then she does something else that you can probably asssume.)
But it was murdering Firestar that made Starclan turn their heads!
Lol, “summing it up” but that’s as best as I can do! There are a bunch of details that I glossed over, but that’s her arc up until this first strip!
So yes, h e h a s b e e n s n u f f e d
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Dovley-Artist In reply to WoodenTrees [2019-09-17 04:11:33 +0000 UTC]
'After the fire goes out, only cinders will remain'
Idk, I like the Idea of maybe sum starclan cat sayin that lol.
also agood title for an art peice.
also yaya Snowtuft is no longer beinig gnore, also, wy snow?
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WoodenTrees In reply to Dovley-Artist [2019-09-17 04:17:39 +0000 UTC]
I chose snowtuft because I feel like he’s a very unexplored character! And I have a little backstory for him that makes him empathize with Cinderpelt!
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GothamWolfess [2019-09-15 22:47:23 +0000 UTC]
wonderful story
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m-arcelynn [2019-09-15 20:26:32 +0000 UTC]
oh this is GOODD
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