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Published: 2014-06-28 16:30:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 3425; Favourites: 195; Downloads: 0
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Do you truly believe that you are made of flesh?
Do you believe that it is blood running through your veins?
Or is it merely the feeling of circuitry,
Pulsating beneath a synthetic exterior.
Think about it logically,
If indeed you can.
You are in constant need of a connection.
One that makes you feel like a part of the whole.
But if you were to be cut-off from it.
What would happen then?
I am eager find out.
Aren't you?
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this is a very interesting concept and it made me think.
So, amazing job.
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admirabil...but mr.Chene...don't have time for our comments....;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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No idea if this was intentional, probably not, and also completely unrelated to the rest of the poem, but I really like how it looks like an arrow (or two arrows) pointing downwards. ^^
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It was beautifully unsettling. I love it-Chrissy
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this piece is spoken like a true writer or inventor I give u props Β
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I excellant. You excellent well my grasshopper.
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For some reason, I found this poem slightly creepy. I'm not sure why... I still liked this, though.
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I like the dialogue from this little peek but the audio-recording made this all the more awesome...
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This piece is beautiful! 
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The developed world is moving to cyberpunk. Β With developing worlds, it's a whole different story. Β Anyway, I have an interest with a donation, if I can send pure cash. Β Of course, I use the USA dollar, so I'm going to figure out how to convert a dollar to points without the use of the dreaded credit card.
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Love it, love it, love it, love it! Bone-chilling, suggestive, the placement of the verses looks like it can be an insignia for a technocratic dystopia, or perhaps a burrowing machine working at the back of your skull...Β
You're awesome!
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Wooow. That was cool!
The audio was freaky, but in a good way (if that is possible XD), kinda sounded like something out of a film or something!
But yeah, awesome!
-Amy & Kiara
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If you liked this one, tomorrow will be better, I'm still perfecting his voice technique and it's almost fully done ^^
After that I'll be working on the violent demon KROM :'3
-Chennie
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Wow, this certainly is an interesting take on things. How exactly do you go about trying to write poetry in a robotic persona? I think of poetry as art, and robots as not necessarily capable of creating art. How do you manage it? (I'm forever getting told off for being too curiousΒ Β )
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Well the robot himself has a personality. He isn't just a machine. He acts and thinks like a human, but his reasoning is not based on flesh, it is based on the electrical circuit that serves as his mind. Insanity to a robot after all is one that doesn't follow it's programming. He cannot follow his programming, but he cannot be human. That's how I developed the persona x'D
You'll get to see the real crazy on the next release x'3
-Chennie
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I look forward to seeing how crazy that'll beΒ Β
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