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Published: 2014-10-21 16:57:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 4972; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 0
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How many times have you tried, just to put me down,The last time I remember, I was underground.
And even then I rose up, just to challenge the greats.
You might be thinking that your wins are all a part of your fate;
But it's not!
You're a little puppet in the game,
And when you try to take me out, you'll be feeling the strain!
I will be breathing down your neck and it's offense;
No nonsense. I am the Word of Chen, execution commence!
And now you're feeling the pressure, I'll make you suffer;
Your words try to cut me, but you're bleeding your brother!
You don't recognize that I'm the one who paved your way;
And now you're crying, sweating bullets, while you kneel and pray-
I don't find you. You're scared! Your soul is bared,
The only thing that makes us different is the fact that I cared!
But it don't matter now boy! You can laugh and smile,
Because the only thing left is to burn you in a Word of Chen style.
- Chennie, 21st October 2014
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Ah, I hate it when people do that xc Don't worry about it, your watchers know where to find material that's real and from the heart ^^ And waa, was that a quote??
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Bravo Chennie, I've been reading your stuff for a while now, and you never disappoint. Keep going man! I believe in you 
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I've been watching you since you were a part of Bottomless Pit, I'm still watching, and I'll continue watching until the day you decide you don't want to exist on DA any more.
The poem itself actually motivates me, oddly enough. Β
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YOU ARE BACK. (teh pirates shall now rejoice)
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SHIT YOU'RE BACK.Β
ish.
I'm late (like with everything) xD
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For some reason I read your description in rhyme voice, was that supposed to happen or not??
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Welcome back!! Amazing work agin!
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I'm so sorry to hear that people are plagiarizing your work - that's just wrong, and I hope they get punished for it. =_= Karma! > :3
I miss your works, Chen, and I'm so glad you're back to do poetry!
Stay strong - those people copying your work have got NOTHING on the original, awesome source - you.Β
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dud your work is amazing so much flow with every line each paces I read is perfect my days are so much better after I read your work
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Welcome back Chen! Β I was looking at the other poems, but I'm glad that you are alive and well. Β Pledging support right here too.
And here's for a fresh start!Β Β
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Thank you kindly for the support :'3
I'll do my best to make it worthwhile ^^
-Chennie
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I hate to hear about your work being imitated in such a way. You're one of my favorite writers so I'm happy to hear from you again. You will always have support when this lurker then whenever I'm on
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Thanks so much for that support :'3 I appreciate it for sure man ^^
-Chennie
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Didn't read this, but I haven't nearly gone far enough everyone needs to hold onto their butts.
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Often imitated, but never duplicated - try though they might, no one can sound like you Chennie 
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Thanks m'dear. No need to really, I'll be pumping out the urban style where I can and also dipping back to poetry inbetween.
I need a more unique kick to my poetry side too :'3
-Chennie
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Good to see you again, Chennie. I really enjoyed this poem - relatable and no nonsense.
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Haha, it's the way of chen
-ChennieΒ
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Yaaay! I am so glad to hear that you are back, Chen, even if it's just for a little while! Because the return of you is surely a sign of good things to come. Also, I can't believe it... people are actually stealing your older works. I guess you're just that famous already, if people really want to steal your work that much. Even though they know it will be recycled trash... something that they don't really own. Or haven't even created. Or anything.
But great going with your poems! As always, I enjoy reading every line of it. Easily understandable and flows in words very well. Keep on rebuilding that stage!
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Well I'll most likely be working with an urban style for quite awhile. So far I'm getting in the 400's in terms of views. I'd say that's pretty good :'3
Hopefully I can take it up past 500 soonish ^^
Thanks for your support m'dear, I really appreciate it.
- Chennie
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All right! That sounds quite good, actually! I have noticed you like working with the urban style, so you've had plenty of time to practice and now you're really good at it! Go for it!
Indeed, I think your view count is pretty good already! Just keep posting and people will draw back to your work like magnets!
But like always, you are most welcome!
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CHENNIE~! -random fangirling-
Okay, no...
I'm reading your stuff for a long time now (even before I watched you) and lately I read a loooot of stuff about art thievery and such things too... And now you too write something like that? A reason like that was not what I hoped would bring you back to us... D=
And I hope you'll be fine... ;o; Those ppl should not steal art or poems or stuff from anyone... But it's just out there... ToT" -sighs-
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Haha thanks for the cheering and the fangirling
And they're not exactly art theives. See this is where the law gets muddy. An artist knows when it's his/her work being used, but if they change it up enough that it's not really recognisable as the original piece. You can't really call that copyright infringement or anything else. It's the grey area that happens from time to time and unlike art where you can tell something is traced, it's so much more difficult to words.
But I know that no matter what they copy, they can't copy my works exactly, nor can they copy the new ways in which I present my work. So that's where I'll win it ^^
Thanks so much again :'3
- Chennie
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Wah, no need to say thanks >o<
Hmm... Those 'nice' gray areas of the law... For writers it's often like 'I just saw my piece, even though it's tweaked and changed, but have no right to tell anyone because the original stuff is not recognisable anymore'... Changing something written is easier than changing an original drawing... That's why I gave up writing a long while ago... Even if you don't copy others people come and complain 'Uuuh, your style is just like the one of that and that person and he wrote a story/poem about that too'... Though I always used to be a terrible writer anyway... XD
But it's true that they can't copy you. Chennie's works are unique =3 And I really really love reading everything I see from you~
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Man, I'm sorry to hear about the crap that's going on :/ but hey it's nice to see that you are back!!
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Well not fully back, but I'll get back into my groove slowly.
I still have a lot to sort out in my personal life, but I'll try and use it as inspiration ^^
- Chennie
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