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Published: 2012-10-19 00:12:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 8627; Favourites: 215; Downloads: 0
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A shot of model Lauren.Wind Swept and wet with make up running down her face.
Wanted to portray emotion with this one.
Love the drips of water coming off her.
And her eyes are just awesome.
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You are very kind indeed. I'm glad you understood my work. The look we were going for was messy!! Thank you very much for taking the time!
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One of the best critiques I have ever had. Thank you . Wise words indeed!
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Thank you for accepting my critique. :3
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Your welcome :3
P.S. Sorry for grammar mistakes.Stupid keyboard -,-
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Were should I start....
You photoshoped it? I hope not cause it doesn't look like you did, her skin looks dirty (to orange!!!!).
Also the eyes aren't really taking much of attention, they are to dark across to her nose and some areas of her face, you should take those highlight a little down.
A lot of attention goes to her hand, it's to bright and takes a lot of space in this shot.
Also the hair is a mes.
I won't call this really a fashion shot, it's more an emotional portrait. I'm sorry.
However, the way she looks at the spectator is very good. I also like the idea of the make-up that run alover her face.
I hope you understand I don't mean it bad and why I won't give you much rate.
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Thanks for taking the time!
First. No I didn't photoshop it. Just levels and stuff.
The whole idea of the shoot is of a breakup so she is very sad. Wanted to keep her eyes dark. It was a fashion shot for a uk campaign. I understand what you say and would like to thank you for having the time to give me your feedback.
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you're welcome and sorry if I gave you a hard time ^-^" (yeah some people don't like when you give a negative feedback)
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Not a problem. Any feedback is good feedback. Thanks!
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Really beautiful and vivid color and texture on her face!Β I love the mood it adds to the image.
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I think so too. Thank you!
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Thank you very much!
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beautiful portrait. i love her expression and her eyes are gorgeous.
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That's very nice of you to say. Thanks!
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Gorgeous
One of the best
awsmmm
loved it
Loved the colours
AMUSING WORK
WONDERFUL
BEAUTYFULL
Thanxx for sharing with us
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I love the sort of messiness in this image. Β It has a very natural, unforced beauty.
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Very nice of you to say!
Thanks!
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She is beautiful; It looks like there is a story behind her eyes.
Well done <33
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What emotion were you trying to portray with the photo?
Where did you want the viewers eyes to go in this photo - at the moment the brightest part of the photo is around the mouth and nose.
Very beautiful model, (I really like freckles btw) sadly the photo is not quite up to par in my opinion.
The colors are way too saturated in some places, for example on her forehead and cheeks, and desaturated in others, for example around her eyes and on her hand and wrist.
I gotta disagree with one of the earlier critics and say that I don't think that straight hair would look this good here, I like when the hair adds a bit of movement to a photo.
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Thanks for the comment. I wanted the viewers eye to be drawn to where ever they thought it was to be drawn to. Rules out the window in my book!
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She has really lovely eyes and such an interesting and intense stare. That's really great!
I also just LOVE her nailpolish! It's just a tiny detail but I really really like it
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Very kind of you. And well spotted!
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She is in good company then! Thank you!
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Beautiful photo. I love how blue her eyes are.
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