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WrathLOS β€” RWBY 4Koma 02 - Impending Doom

Published: 2013-09-28 08:58:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 5819; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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Description So, with Ruby being my first guest I show her exactly what it was that kind of bothered me, and what it was that tempted me to call them all to my own little world.



EDIT:Β  I'm no longer doing any work concerning non-original works.Β  I'll no longer comment on non-original works.
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geek96boolean10 [2013-10-06 12:23:40 +0000 UTC]

i'm reading this a week later and i'm still smiling.

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WrathLOS In reply to geek96boolean10 [2013-10-07 01:36:28 +0000 UTC]

I smirk a little reading it myself.Β  These characters have awesome personalities to work with.

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Rextimina [2013-10-01 08:00:27 +0000 UTC]

lol, Ruby and Weiss are perfect together

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WrathLOS In reply to Rextimina [2013-10-01 17:35:23 +0000 UTC]

As literary foils, yes.

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Rextimina In reply to WrathLOS [2013-10-02 06:43:33 +0000 UTC]

in terms of cannon i can see Ruby withΒ  Jaune

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WrathLOS In reply to Rextimina [2013-10-03 00:34:25 +0000 UTC]

To a very small extent.Β  They kind of called that idea and shot it down in episode 2.Β  Remember how she ditched him and Jaune said "Where am I going to find a quirky girl now?" Than Pyrrha appeared?

Pyrrha and Jaune has actual support behind it though.Β  Have you seen how oddly supportive she is of him?

Here's where I'm calling it: Pyrrha's life is going to be at stake later on in the show; Jaune will be pretty much watching her die because he's weaksauce, and than his aura will kick in full and he'll go eleventh-hour superpower all over the baddy in question.

Remember how they said Aura get's channeled through equipment?Β  I doubt that heirloom he carries around is just a paltry sword.
Remember Pyrrha saying he has a lot of aura?
Remember Glynda stating that he has an impressive transcript?
Remember his aura being pure white?

I've watched anime before.Β  When a character named explicitly after a legendary hero from meta world glows white and has an heirloom weapon, something is going to push them to their brink and they will then proceed to go apeshit on the enemy forces.Β  And it's GLORIOUS to watch.Β  Every time.

Solid example, Gohan going SSJ2 in DBZ.Β  That scene was one of the best in the series.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gx2vMy… <-- Jaune is gonna pull one of these.Β  When he does, it'll be BADASS.

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Rextimina In reply to WrathLOS [2013-10-03 07:34:56 +0000 UTC]

so true, so who you think Ruby will be with then in the show then

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WrathLOS In reply to Rextimina [2013-10-04 04:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Why does she have to be with someone?Β  Why would a protagonist HAVE to have a romance?

Secondly, I didn't help write the story, but I can assume there's more characters that have yet to be revealed.

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Rextimina In reply to WrathLOS [2013-10-05 07:40:58 +0000 UTC]

Ture she technically doesn't, but it seems like monty may do it since they are basically all teens
that is true that there will be other characters, not really sure what kind exactly but yeah

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WrathLOS In reply to Rextimina [2013-10-05 23:38:05 +0000 UTC]

It bothers me to a moderate extent how people so very heavily want this 15 year old child to get into a relationship.

And this whole "teenagers have to have relationships to be real people" thing is disgusting in my opinion.Β  But it's the age we live in I suppose.Β  Sucks being a minority.

And I pray Monty doesn't drop the ball on his own writing.

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Rextimina In reply to WrathLOS [2013-10-11 02:51:37 +0000 UTC]

Well I truthfully never looked at it from that point of view really from which her age, I mean I haven't dated yet i turned 18 recently to

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ArtisticKamenRider [2013-09-29 13:51:10 +0000 UTC]

I would do the same, never underestimate a young lady's/woman's rage.

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WrathLOS In reply to ArtisticKamenRider [2013-09-29 20:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Especially one you've seen rage against you on multiple counts.

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ArtisticKamenRider In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-29 23:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I was almost under a similar rage because of some friends trying to prank/troll me, but luckily I managed to get out of that trouble. Wish I could say the same to one of my friends, he got hurt bad.

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WrathLOS In reply to ArtisticKamenRider [2013-09-29 23:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Damn, scary O_o

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ArtisticKamenRider In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-30 00:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Actually what helped is my Aunt(Though has a difficult relationship with the rest of my family), My Grandmother, and a little bit of my Mother taught me on how to treat ladies/women.


My friend that got the rage...well his favorite thing was golf, had golf clubs nearby, and had a few ladies in rage...I'm sure you can see where this is going.

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WrathLOS In reply to ArtisticKamenRider [2013-09-30 02:55:05 +0000 UTC]

Jesus what the hell did anyone do to get hit with a club?!

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ArtisticKamenRider In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-30 03:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Long story short, supposed love letters that start out nice, but then becomes immoral...While most of my friends were in on the prank, the mastermind of it wrote the letters and didn't show the letters to the others, only saying it was fake love letters to get me in trouble with several women. I and the others put him on very thin ice in terms of friendship and trust.

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WrathLOS In reply to ArtisticKamenRider [2013-09-30 03:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Your friend's got a fucked up sense of humor.

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ArtisticKamenRider In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-30 03:30:47 +0000 UTC]

yes...but I pranked back, Most of them got off light. The one who wrote the letters, I made him think Jeff the Killer and Slender Man were after him.

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WrathLOS In reply to ArtisticKamenRider [2013-09-30 03:31:45 +0000 UTC]

He thought imaginary characters were after him?Β  How old is this individual again?

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ArtisticKamenRider In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-30 03:34:44 +0000 UTC]

around 23-24. He knows they're imaginary, but I know how to make them alive...so to speak. I actually had a lot of help with this and it's the reason why the others got of light. They posed as victims.

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Aqua311 [2013-09-29 11:57:46 +0000 UTC]

Is she going to hide Myrtenaster too?

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WrathLOS In reply to Aqua311 [2013-09-29 20:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Weiss will probably be too angry to even think of looking for it.Β  She has hands to punch and strangle with XD

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Aqua311 In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-29 21:30:42 +0000 UTC]

lol If she could do that, she would have strangled Ruby a couple of episodes ago.

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WrathLOS In reply to Aqua311 [2013-09-30 00:00:09 +0000 UTC]

That was at Beacon.Β  With nearby witnesses.

This place sits on the 4th wall.Β  Only those asked to enter may join XD

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b4k4-san [2013-09-28 15:03:21 +0000 UTC]

Now see, if everyone were focusing on Yang instead of Weiss, she'd probably be okay with it. Nora too, so long as nobody shipped her with anyone but Ren.

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WrathLOS In reply to b4k4-san [2013-09-28 16:39:40 +0000 UTC]

The thing that bothers me most is that everyone is assuming they are all super-amorous lesbians, which is an odd thing to expect of these characters.Β  They have character traits, yet people ignore every one of them.Β  So they are effectively just copying the character's artwork and no more.

Also, I already got a few ideas for what to do with Nora.Β  Since this chain of 4komas will be all about 4th wall breaking, she'll be the easiest to work with, honestly.

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b4k4-san In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-28 20:23:59 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, the same could be said of all rule34-type stuff. I imagine the bulk of the people who are into creating that kind of material don't really care about the existing world and characters' personalities, they just want to see characters that they like or think look cool being all naughty and what not. Some of them might try to brush it off as "well it's all alternate universe," but I don't think those concerns really register with them for the most part.

I'd be careful with Nora, she seems liable to shatter the 4th wall entirely rather than just break it. As fun as it could be to hang out with the Beacon students and staff, I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be a match for Professor Port's Boarbatusk, let alone any of those other Grimm beasties.

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WrathLOS In reply to b4k4-san [2013-09-29 06:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, I don't really dislike rule34 stuff because it's aware of what it is: porn.

A lot of the 4komas I've seen on here though, I find when searching for witty humor.Β  And instead, I find amorous girls; one of which is underage.Β  In other words, if I was ever looking for raunchy amorous fanfictions, I would hope it'd be placed elsewhere.Β  When searching for light-hearted RWBY stuff, I'd hope to find it here.Β  Comedic content should be that, comedic.Β  Making Weiss a pedophile and every female lead super-lesbian just "because it's funny" as some told me, is just a bit on the bothersome side.

People told me they do it because it's just a joke.Β  I've heard jokes.Β  I've watched comedians.Β  "That girl wants to sleep with that girl" is not a joke.Β  I'm the guy trying to tell the comedian "Work harder on better material."Β  But, people are entitled to their own opinions, and I've heard most if not all of it.

Only one individual was able to whole-heartedly defend this content in a way I couldn't disprove.Β  I will quote her in my 4th comic and give a shout-out, should she be okay with it.


But, there is no point in trying to convey my viewpoint on others' work.Β  So, I apologized to those I'd bothered most and decided to create my own work.Β  Hence, what you see above.Β  I'm kind of proud of my idea, honestly.

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b4k4-san In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-29 20:45:10 +0000 UTC]

I don't have a problem with people making sexy stuff either, but trying to pass it off as some sort of humor when it's only purpose is to titillate is another story.

If you're uncomfortable enough that you have to justify it by saying "No, I did it because it's funny" instead of sacking up and saying "I drew it because I think it's hot," maybe you need to draw other stuff for a while first. Call it like it is, you know?

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b4k4-san In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-29 13:37:46 +0000 UTC]

As you should be. I know if I were in that situation my reaction would probably have been "Well, screw those guys."

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WrathLOS In reply to b4k4-san [2013-09-29 18:21:20 +0000 UTC]

Hey, lotta people got sex on the mind.Β  Sigmund Freud man.Β  If they wanna make comics about it that's fine.

One person pointed out to me that it's what his/her fans want, and they're feeling too down to draw anything else.

I'll try my best to be original and listen to any feedback I receive from others, without sacrificing my self-respect and my respect for the RWBY team.

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b4k4-san In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-29 20:45:43 +0000 UTC]

I don't have a problem with people making sexy stuff either, but trying to pass it off as some sort of humor when it's only purpose is to titillate is another story.

If you're uncomfortable enough that you have to justify it by saying "No, I did it because it's funny" instead of sacking up and saying "I drew it because I think it's hot," maybe you need to draw other stuff for a while first. Call it like it is, you know?

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WrathLOS In reply to b4k4-san [2013-09-29 20:56:59 +0000 UTC]

PRECISELY.Β  If it's meant to be dirty, own up to it.Β  Don't say "It's meant to just be a joke."Β  Not only that, it's just crappy humor, if that's what they are trying to do.Β  Bad writing is unforgivable in my experienced opinion.

But as I've said, my opinion is not valued in that area, so I won't give them that critique.Β  I'll just make my own stuff and hopefully draw a more refined crowd.

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geek96boolean10 [2013-09-28 09:00:43 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, ruby better watch out.Β 


but who knows - weiss might be a fan!

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WrathLOS In reply to geek96boolean10 [2013-09-28 09:09:53 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't help but envision Ruby actually saying "everything that is moderately pointy!".Β  And while I would like to hint to my script, I mustn't do spoilers, it wouldn't be classy.

also, you may have noticed I put a little more effort into character design here XD

Thanks for the steady responses by the way.Β  Makes me one step closer to my fan-army >Β  I'll be sure to check out each of your comics as they come out.

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geek96boolean10 In reply to WrathLOS [2013-09-28 09:25:27 +0000 UTC]

^^ no problem, keep drawing.

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WrathLOS In reply to geek96boolean10 [2013-09-28 16:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Likewise good sir.

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