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BeanSproutMomo [2013-01-29 17:59:50 +0000 UTC]

How did you know anything with a galaxy print is just something I adore?! I really enjoy how you incorporated stars in such a unique way.
The sheer ruffles are a nice, but they really extenuate your curvy backside. Your pose seems a little lifeless, and I’m not sensing any boldness from you. Perhaps try to show more emotion in your stance when you pose for photos. If you are the life of the party, then I want to see you celebrating!

Artful hint: Try to tilt the ear in back a little more to the front, and it will appear more natural.

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StarryCrowns [2013-01-28 07:23:35 +0000 UTC]

I can sea that you are strong and fierce and not to be messed with, however I must say that while your pose has some attitude there are a few things to note: Your pose. The way your hips are angled makes your lower body look much bigger than it actually is, if you wanted to show your hips off then I would suggest accentuating your spine's curve just a little bit more to add more sparkle to the pose.

Also perhaps either pulling back or pushing forward your expression just a teeny tiny little bit, it looks like you were trying to be tough but ended up looking a little bored and also slightly shy. I love love love how your designer went with a different idea for stars, but I would like to have a word with them about the rest of your dress. The bustle seems just a tiny bit out of place in contrast to the tight form fitting dress, if there was a little more lace on the rest of the dress it would look more cohesive, or if the lace was a little heavier or if the skirt was a slightly different shape, but as is the tight fitting dress with this random bubbly poof of a skirt is just a bit awkward. (however the touch of transparent lace up on the top of the dress is absolutely to die for, it gives it that sense of modernity while still being modest)

Artful Critique: Be careful with your shading, your colors on the skin look a little bit murky, you can use colors other than brown/black for shading, for example since your dress has so many hints of purple and pinks then some dark purple/fuchsia hints in the skin would make them more cohesive and a little more lively.

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AnimeDeathWarrior [2013-01-28 04:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh ghoul! I love your hair in this picture. It matches your dress incredibly well. The star theme you chose is way different than everyone else that I’ve seen. I like it. It’s different and very unique. It’s an extra point of creativity that I see.

The pose you’ve chosen works.. but it’s simplistic. I think it’s the way you’re selling it. You seem to be really shy.. A boost of confidence would help bring out that sass that a model should have. Don’t be afraid to let go!

Artful critique: I think you could focus a bit on your model’s face. I feel her nose is bit long. And I have a feeling that you probably don’t intend for it to be so long. Maybe pay attention to that small aspect. Your model’s eyes do look a tiny bit blurry and out of focus from the rest of the body.

Your model’s bicep on her left (our right) looks a little lengthily. If her arm was straight with how her arm is configured, it would be longer than her right (our left). Her hip that her hand is resting on looks a little big as well. Unless she has a naturally curvy butt?

You may want to take attention to her legs as well. More around the foot and ankle part. Just take your time with it. Look at everything closely and have fun with it. You’re on the right track. I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us.

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Oracle01 [2013-01-28 00:18:41 +0000 UTC]

So you say you view yourself as the life of the party?? Where is that life in this picture? I really don’t see it here. Maybe it’s the fact that your face is really hiding from the camera... Maybe if your head could have tilted upward just a bit more, we would be able to see your beautiful bone structure it wouldn't seem like you were so incredibly shy here.

With this picture it seems like we're losing a lot of that beauty. Even though your bangs are hiding most of your face, I feel that your features are so strong that you'd be able to push out your most in-tuned modeling aspects out and work through anything.

Though, here... It seems like you’re extremely shy and almost unsure of how to pose. Your color is absolutely stunning I must say. If you would have stepped into the light a bit more to accentuate those beautiful cheekbones of yours... as well as your whole body you would have popped that much more here.

And that dress... Oh ghoul! I love it! I’m getting a feeling that the back ruffle seems a little out of place. I would have loved it if that wasn’t attached there... I feel that it adds too much over-emphasis on that curvy booty of yours. Like you managed to turn to the camera too much. Sometimes you want a lot of booty in a shot... Here? I don’t think too much is needed. You’re already selling the garment beautifully.

Man.. that dress is so stunning. I simply must have one. And THAT? Proves to me that you've got the modeling gene in you. You were able to make me interested in this dress.. and I would love one for myself.

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Prismativity [2013-01-19 20:17:19 +0000 UTC]

The outfit looks fab! Good luck hun

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CelestialCresselia [2013-01-05 16:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Macey looks beautiful honey! As always.

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Kinga-of-Queens [2013-01-05 13:26:17 +0000 UTC]

pretty!

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Porcelain-Hero [2013-01-03 05:10:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh my goodness she looks gorgeous! <3

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BonnieElizabeth [2013-01-03 00:01:39 +0000 UTC]

Woah, she is looking gorgeous Love her dress and those ankle boots, dang. Those boots

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raven--noodle [2013-01-02 22:58:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I don't think you need to redraw this!
I l-o-v-e-d the idea of the texture for the stars! I love this galaxy things and stuff, gorgeous! <3 And her pose is very model-like too :3

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