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wynter333A — Revelation and Reckoning - 4

Published: 2007-10-29 20:20:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 8138; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 180
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Description Time passed very slowly for the tired young captives, each second like water dripping from the end of an icicle: Sliding slowly past, hanging suspended and cold for a tense eternity...and then dropping away to make way for the next. Both kept up their struggles almost non-stop, but those struggles gradually began to slow, their energy fading and despair - yet not defeat - creeping in to take its place. After all, it had been the middle of the night when they'd been kidnapped - at the end of a long week. Neither had had the faintest moment of actual rest since they had been dragged into this waking nightmare, and the lack was starting to tell. A nagging urge to take a nap, to try to regain some of what had been expended, tugged at their weary flesh. But, neither Cody nor Bryn was willing to do so yet, afraid of missing any opportunity which might present itself. After all, they had no idea how long they had before their captors "returned"... But eventually, they both fell still, unable to really continue with their seemingly futile physical resistance. Then, they just sat and waited, each locked into their own world of blindness, helplessness, and anxiety. Waiting to see what fate may lay in store for them, once this "boss" the one had mentioned in the van arrived. Fortunately - perhaps - for Cody and Bryn, they didn't have to wait much longer...


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On to "Revelation and Reckoning", pt 5
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Comments: 25

Roninshinobi [2007-10-30 20:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Now we see what he wanted Cody for and what he'll do with Bryn. Superb job

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black-Kat-3D-studio [2007-10-30 10:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Story is coming along nicely, great job as usual

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Sorry I have'nt commented on each, (running out of quips)
but will continue to follow the story as it comes up
(still working on my Toon Raider stuff. and trying to sort out membership probs)

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wynter333A In reply to black-Kat-3D-studio [2007-10-30 13:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Tom! Very glad you're enjoying it. *thumbsup*


(And no problem! Never any obligation to comment at all, much less on every one. I appreciate the thought - and all the thought that went in in days before - but never feel obligated, my friend. After all, it's not as if my returns to your always-clever quips were all that stellar, anyhow... )

(And yeah...I saw that you had put some more up yesterday. Going to go check them out now! THIS is a good thing, to me. What isn't, are the membership problems - hope you get them straightened out soon, and sorry to hear you're being given a hard time/having trouble at all. )

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black-Kat-3D-studio In reply to wynter333A [2007-10-31 10:21:45 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome as ever and look forward to more

Hopefully my membership probs will work out as I am in contact with the helpdesk

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Crystal124 [2007-10-30 00:58:53 +0000 UTC]

I hope we all finally get to know why the twins were kidnapped in the first place

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wynter333A In reply to Crystal124 [2007-10-30 20:25:29 +0000 UTC]




*looks around surreptitiously, and then, convinced that no one else is listening, whispers* "Don't tell anybody, but...I think the answers to a lot of those questions are coming up tomorrow...in the second leg of this story-arc..."

*winks to her conspiratorially, and then continues more loudly* "Well...we'll just have to see." *ahem* "These things all unfold in their own time. Suspense...and..stuff...ya know..."


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ryuji-kun [2007-10-29 22:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Not only the pic is hot, but the story is great as well! I wonder what'll happen next!

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wynter333A In reply to ryuji-kun [2007-10-29 22:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, my friend! That's high praise indeed. And it's deeply appreciated. Means a lot to me that you're enjoying it.


And tune in tomorrow to see what happens next! *dun-dun-dunnnnh!*

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side-effect55 [2007-10-29 21:02:11 +0000 UTC]

the ties look awesome. keep up the supreme work.

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wynter333A In reply to side-effect55 [2007-10-29 21:19:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, man! Really glad you liked the ties, and the pieces as a whole. Hope you continue to have fun with 'em.

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Mixmaster119 [2007-10-29 20:48:08 +0000 UTC]

Mixmaster: How's about this boss meets me? I'm sure we'll get along real fine

I don't really like that look...

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wynter333A In reply to Mixmaster119 [2007-10-29 21:15:33 +0000 UTC]

*nasty grin, glowers at the boss* Hmmm...doesn't sound like a bad deal to me, Mix. Go get 'i -

*listens over his shoulder, then calls back into the shadows* Oh, c'mon! The guy's rhight there! *gestures over incredulously*

*grumbling* Sorry, Mix... They say you're gonna hafta wait a bit. AGAIN. *shoots a nasty look back into the shadows, over his shoulder* Something about that "reality inconpatibility" thing again...

Can't wait to get that straightened out... Can only imagine how much payback these guys have built up and coming from YOU...

Which, for the twins' sakes, I appreciate. Always nice to have someone willing to look out for them.

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Mixmaster119 In reply to wynter333A [2007-10-29 21:50:13 +0000 UTC]

Mixmaster: Allow me to respond back wtih these little phrases in order *ahem* DAMMIT!!!! THEY ARE SO ASKING FOR IT!! and Thank you I always look out for others

...

Mixmaster: Speechles?

yeah pretty much...

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wynter333A In reply to Mixmaster119 [2007-10-30 20:29:08 +0000 UTC]

8also speechless for a moment, and then nods fiercely* Indeed thay are. But you know what they say...paybacks are hell. And the bad guys always get theirs in the end.

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Mixmaster119 In reply to wynter333A [2007-10-30 23:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Mixmaster: Oh yea you better believe it!!

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GreaterLimit [2007-10-29 20:37:13 +0000 UTC]

What a situation those two have managed to get themselves into - hopefully they'll last long enough to amuse their captors...

As always very good job Faved.

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wynter333A In reply to GreaterLimit [2007-10-29 20:40:39 +0000 UTC]

(And thanks again, man. VERY glad you liked them. And thanks for the fave!)

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wynter333A In reply to GreaterLimit [2007-10-29 20:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Aye...they do look to be in a bit of a jam, no? But, if given their way, I'm sure they hope to do a bit more than just "amuse their captors"... Of course, it ALSO looks like choosing is something that they're in no real position to do at the moment, so...

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Lordoffantasy [2007-10-29 20:28:08 +0000 UTC]

cool. what are his reasons, and how badly is he to get his ass kciked?

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wynter333A In reply to Lordoffantasy [2007-10-29 20:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Much will be revealed in the parts to come, my friend...

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Lordoffantasy In reply to wynter333A [2007-10-29 20:31:04 +0000 UTC]

then let them come. i'm getting a bit antsy.

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wynter333A In reply to Lordoffantasy [2007-10-29 21:10:17 +0000 UTC]

*evil vhuckle* Well...we wouldn't want that. Don't need the "poor" baddies getting slaughtered...

I have to pay a premium for new ones everytime that happens...

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Lordoffantasy In reply to wynter333A [2007-10-29 21:12:32 +0000 UTC]

are you done posting ofr the night, or should ikeep an eye out for more?

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wynter333A In reply to Lordoffantasy [2007-10-29 21:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's all for today. The next 4 parts are coming up tomorrow (are mostly done...but I'm pacing things out for suspense purposes). And the last 5 bits of this Act are coming up on Wednesday.

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Lordoffantasy In reply to wynter333A [2007-10-29 21:19:38 +0000 UTC]

okay. it wil lbe good to see its end a little sooner, and to see how these kids get out of this peril and into another. this guy, either simple sadist or killer, is going down, eventually.

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