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RasheruSuzie [2017-09-29 13:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Very cute character! You've used bright, pleasant colors, and I really like the simple bg; it emphasizes the character without being distracting.

I see you've already received a comment but I made a redline for you, hoping it might be useful (sorry if it's not, haha):
preview.ibb.co/b1tA8w/catredli…

The main anatomical issue I see is that the angle of the chest does not match the angle of the shoulders, so it gives the impression her breasts are not the same size. I think drawing the center line will make it easier to see when angles don't match ^^
Her breasts are also placed a bit high on her chest, so it looks like she is missing the clavicle area. Lowering them a bit could look nicer.

Another, smaller thing I see is that the facial features are kind of close to the edge of the head. From that angle, you should realistically be able to see more skin next to the eye on the right, and the head lacks a little bit of volume on the left side.

Except for that I think you've handled it very well. The result is adorable, from the cat ears to the tails, to her expression, too. Nice work!

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SpiritseekerDA [2017-09-29 01:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I'm from ProjectComment  and I'd like to review your piece!
the first thing I'd like to point out is the excellent use of colors! They all work very nicely together, and give it that cute feeling that I think you were trying to go for! The shading had a nice technique, but it seems to be a bit scattered. Using references helps a lot! The head seems a bit long, and the face looks almost squashed in comparison. Again, using a reference is very helpful here. The hair seems to have a natural amount of weight to it (I especially like the way the hair drapes on top of the shoulder), but could use a bit more volume. In some areas, it looks like the hair is sticking directly to the skull; maybe look at an anime character with a similar hair style for ideas on how to do this properly. The highlights are very cute and match the art style nicely, well done! The lines on the tail(s) are a bit distracting, though, and maybe blending them in for a smooth transition might look a bit nicer. The last thing I'd like to mention is that the character and background seem to be off-center. This can be easily fixed using a cropping tool, or by resizing the image inside of it to fit it properly. You can see it in how the top of the pink hue is cut off by the canvas, but comes nowhere near the bottom. Overall, though, this is a really nice piece that you should be proud of!

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Chaotic-Crustacean [2017-09-28 13:38:07 +0000 UTC]

The colouring and the linework is very nice and clean! Some details to point out though is how you used the light on the drawing.  Instead of just plainly drawing light circles try to give some more perspective on it to not turn the drawing "overly shining for no reason". Light and shadow are very important settings when it comes to any art piece so putting them anywhere or everywhere is not very wise. I'm not saying that you over used them, I just noticed some kind of misplacement that it's easy to fix that can make your pieces much nicer and soft looking. The color palette is nice in this drawing but the physical composition is a little off, maybe you should see more references on anatomy to fix that up, in questions of proportions and etc.  As in question of background, it's okay to not know what kind of background would match the drawing ( I have trouble with it myself ) but you should also try to make it soft and smooth as well with some patterns or something. These are just friendly tips to make your drawings even better, overall, this is a really nice piece!

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RoXXieChuu [2017-09-27 06:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Cute!

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Hiroki-Ajame [2017-09-27 01:58:30 +0000 UTC]

cool art!!>w<

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Blue-Ape [2017-09-27 00:43:06 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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IndigoWizard [2017-09-27 00:14:55 +0000 UTC]

not that, I can assure you

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