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hyoron [2017-05-17 14:37:28 +0000 UTC]

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Now, I don't understand the "pairing" itself, as I haven't done any research into the creepypasta fandom. But that doesn't influence this critique!
Let's start with the anatomy. Both torsos seem too long, and on both it's hard to tell where torso ends and meets legs. Ben's (?) left hand (the one on the right side) seems off, but I can't pinpoint it. Maybe wrist is too thick and palm is too short? The lineart is clean, and colored in some areas, which is nice. I think I see some slight texturing on the pants, which is a good addition. The shading, though I can tell you went for a cel shaded feel, seems too hard and blocky in some areas. I'd recommend possibly blending it with an airbrush or blend tool. Specifically about the shading, Ben's (Just gonna roll with that.) lips. it's distracting and makes it hard to see the actual linear for the lips. All in all, nice piece! I've always had trouble drawing held hands, but you executed it nicely! ^^

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CamyWilliams9 [2017-05-29 23:47:25 +0000 UTC]

I don't ship this, but in like a brothers xD

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lornii [2017-05-17 19:06:29 +0000 UTC]

your art is really smooth, it's nice to look at! (especially the lineart)

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