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Published: 2011-09-17 16:01:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1235; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 5
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Description [my first serious business picture! including an excerpt that I'll eventually include with my fic, The Eve of War]
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Clay could see Lieutenant Dolton and his co-pilot, Roland, watching him from a distance. Ever since Anthony's death it'd basically become his home, and they knew that. Whenever anyone saw him in it, they stayed away to give him space. And today they really knew to stay away.

Everyday the Gears in his unit received mail. Mail call was always a morale booster, whether it was from family or other Gears they'd met from different squads and regiments. It was just nice to hear from people once in a while. But not from the wrong people.

He recalled mail call earlier that day. He had anxiously waited for his name to be called, only to hear that his letter was from a Sergeant Fenix. His heart had almost stopped working but he stood up and walked over to receive it. He tore it open and was greeted by Benjamin's messy handwriting.

Everyone was too busy with their own letters to notice that he hadn't taken his helmet off to read his. It was smart to remove it first, because the bulkiness of the damn thing would distract you from the joy of reading a letter. But he didn't. He didn't want them to see his face.

And now Clay sat in the King Raven that he called home, rereading the letter. It was dark now and he could barely make out the words. It was no problem, though, because he'd practically memorized every word.

I hope you're doing well out there, Clay. Not sure where you are but I trust that the COG will get this letter to you safely. I know that you'll be excited for me, but it'd be great to hear from you before I ship out.

I just wish Anthony was still here bro. I really miss him. I take comfort knowing he died a hero, but still... I miss him, as I'm sure you do too. Well, you know I'm not that good at letters, so I'll keep this short. Hope you're doing well, big brother, and know that I'll be doing my very best to serve our country and make you and our family proud.

Your little brother [aka the Squirt], Ben.

And the end was from another person:
His last wish was that I made sure this gets to you. I'm sorry.

Signed, Marcus Fenix

They hurt. The inanimate words hurt him. Not even the grubs could hurt him as much as this did.

Clay hadn't noticed that the paper was beginning to get wet from the first rain of Storm. He quickly folded it and carefully inserted it into his chest plate. At that sight, the two pilots began to walk towards their bird as Clay dismounted and left to his barracks, patting his chest and wondering if it was actually his tears that were drenching the letter.
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Comments: 24

capta1nmo254 [2014-09-06 05:59:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm not gonna lie, that's some pretty damn good fan fic in the intro there.

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The-Saddest-Blue [2012-06-04 00:26:04 +0000 UTC]

God, this was a little heartbreaking.

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Sharky-Shark-47 [2011-11-23 02:13:59 +0000 UTC]

The Carmines were always my favorite even when i first watched mt lil bro and dad play the 2nd gears i ran out the room and cried when Ben died. Very emotional description it made me really sad and start to tear up like when poor lil Ben

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Smash-Bros-Brawl12 [2011-11-01 02:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow....That's a deep description.

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Bravo918 [2011-10-20 23:08:22 +0000 UTC]

The carmines were my favorite in each of the gears, Im happy Clay got to live and that he atleast has one brother left

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TeaDarkA [2011-10-01 19:41:40 +0000 UTC]

*hugs clayton and start to cries*
I soo liked that darn lil squirt too. He miss me.
great job

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Noodles16 [2011-09-19 00:02:04 +0000 UTC]

wicked! :3

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elvenblood [2011-09-18 15:13:53 +0000 UTC]

That was good. Man, I feel sorry for Clay.

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x0cutiepie0x In reply to elvenblood [2011-09-18 15:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just wanna jump in this picture and give him a big hug :'C

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Soundwave04 [2011-09-18 10:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Maybe it's just me, but it's nice to see a different side to Clay, rather than the usual Bruiser or "Bacon!" side.

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x0cutiepie0x In reply to Soundwave04 [2011-09-18 15:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Exactly what I was going for. But you gotta admit, the bacon thing is pretty amusing xD

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Soundwave04 In reply to x0cutiepie0x [2011-09-18 17:05:35 +0000 UTC]

I still stand by my statement that "Bacon" will be an internet meme.

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nicambi [2011-09-17 22:45:52 +0000 UTC]

Really nice, cutie! C:

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x0cutiepie0x In reply to nicambi [2011-09-18 15:35:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Cait ;3

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nicambi In reply to x0cutiepie0x [2011-09-18 15:44:58 +0000 UTC]

C: Your welcome.

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Freshbreath3 [2011-09-17 19:42:29 +0000 UTC]

[link] BUT WE WON'T STOP BECAUSE WE'RE BROTHERS IN BLOOD NOW!

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x0cutiepie0x In reply to Freshbreath3 [2011-09-18 15:33:22 +0000 UTC]

I FREAKIN' LOVE THAT SONG. I have it on my Zune! xD

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Freshbreath3 In reply to x0cutiepie0x [2011-09-18 19:38:48 +0000 UTC]

NICE [link]

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DepressedDragonInc [2011-09-17 17:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Well done definitely improving on creating cog armor good narrative as well. Hope you don't have writers block and what not. Happy trails or rather....unhappy trails. *puts on trolllollol face mask walking off*

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x0cutiepie0x In reply to DepressedDragonInc [2011-09-18 15:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I've finally got the basics of the armor down but I'm still a little slow on the colors and shading.
And sadly, I do have writer's block argh

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TexD41 [2011-09-17 16:35:06 +0000 UTC]

wow!, i really like the story behind this pic!, exactly as i imaginated Clay's reaction!.

very nice!

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x0cutiepie0x In reply to TexD41 [2011-09-17 17:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I imagined it to be that depressing :c
And thank you! That means a lot coming from you :3

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TexD41 In reply to x0cutiepie0x [2011-09-17 18:10:46 +0000 UTC]

yeah! :C, they should make a scene of that at least in a comic or a book.

you are welcome! , i really love this piece!

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x0cutiepie0x In reply to TexD41 [2011-09-18 15:38:44 +0000 UTC]

I would really love to see a Gears comic solely based on the Carmine brothers' lives. MAKE IT HAPPEN, KAREN TRAVISS!

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