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Published: 2017-12-24 19:41:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 10581; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 0
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Under the Tree Page 3
OOooooh, a gift to him?
Edit: Xael and Tayo on this comic are 11 years old.
Erilia is 10 years old, sorry for the confusion
Re-edit: Grammar mistakes fixed
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there are mistakes
panel 3: I think IT'S enough...
panel 4: you know I llove everyone ESPECIALY you...(I hink, I'm not really good with grammar)
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In the first panel it saysΒ "I told you, tttttI'm not interested in your sister."
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Fixed.
I didn't checked these on time
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"I told you, tttttI'm not interested in your sister." Just wanted to point that out
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Strange... the Braixen on this page happens to look very similar to the Braixen on page 11 that seems to be fighting along side Xael (although the only thing that I have that points to that is the scarf color of the two Braixens...)
Also, I notice that Xael's scarf has changed. Possible gift that was given?
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I'll fix them.
I'm not used to capitalize them yet
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Bleeeaah... Ok. XD
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It's fixed correctly?
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Haha,Β you missed a few, but sure.
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I wonder what she made him or said that brought him to such an emotionally distraught state.Β
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The amount of uncapitalized 'I's are killing meΒ
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I bet it's his scarf because he was wearing a different one in panel 3.
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Oh yeah, That's true.
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Hehe we'll have to wait and see if I'm right.Β Β
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Aura: Xael what happened!?
Why are you crying?! Deathxael what the heck?!
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So Tayo is a shipper?
Also, what is ββyou're never this kind of suddenββ supposed to be? I also noticed a lot of lowercase i's that should be uppercase.
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On the third panel "We have the same age" should be "We are not the same age"
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It meant more like Xael and Tayo have the same age, and Erilia is younger, sorry for the confusion
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Well then change "have" with "are" so it reads "We are the same age" instead of "We have the same age
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Is he okay?? Why is he cryin??? Must a certain god of Speed hug him so he can stop cryin?
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