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Xalath — Loki x Reader- Teach Me by-nc-nd

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Description    Thor stormed through the halls, slamming open the doors of the library, revealing his raven-haired brother- his face stuck in another magical book. He smiled as he walked closer, a childish smile on his countenance. Before Thor can even say 'hello', Loki spoke "What do you want, brother?" He pressed his lips together, looking annoyed as well as amused, but gave no indication that he was interested in what Thor had to say. The blond didn't mind his lack of attention, since over a thousand years of this behavior had gotten him used to it. He grabbed a wood chair from the other side of the table, dragging it behind him and parked it in front of .

"I have brought some interesting news," He admitted, sitting down harshly. Still, the trickster did not look up, not even a flicker of his green eyes to him.

  "Oh?" He said like an impatient mother. Thors' leg began to shake with anticipation. Hardly amusing for a god that was trying to study magic. The bearded man leaned forward, the smile on his face never fading. "There is this rumor that a beautiful maiden has joined our presence. Better yet, she has mastered every type of magic!" He leaned back, completely satisfied when his brother looked up with an obviously curious glint in his eyes. Loki chuckled. A maiden who has mastered every spell, hm? he thought as he closed the book, setting it on the oak table before him.

   He could admit that this was definitely intriguing to him, but there were also questions in his mind that he knew his idiot brother had no way to answer. He was also curious to why someone would suddenly appear without notice before hand, not to mention an unknown reason. Perhaps Odin was planning something? If yes, what was it? He stood up suddenly, surprising the older before he stood up as well. Loki looked up to him briefly before walking to the exit of the library. "Let's go look for this so called maiden of magic," And so he left, Thor trailing after him with a proud glint in his eyes.  



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   What felt like hours of searching in the halls of their home for this mysterious woman, fell completely short to the mind of the boys. Maybe they only spent twenty minutes on this pursuit, and perhaps they did. They asked many guards for the location, but all sent them to a dead end. It was strange, really. How come every one seemed to be trying to keep them away from this lady? Loki raised a brow to his brother, who had suddenly grabbed his shoulder. He looked to him to find his face away from his- staring at something far in the distance.

    "What is it?" He asked, slightly annoyed. Instead of answering with words, Thor brought up his muscly arm and pointed to a small group of guards in the center of the garden. As his arm fell back to his side Loki fully turned to the crowd with his eyes squinting to get a tiny bit of a better view. But alas, he did not have the eyes of Heimdall now did he?

   Before he could even think of making a move, Thor shot forward and trotted to the area with no hint of remorse in his heavy footsteps. Loki sighed and chased after him with a roll of his eyes. "Brother, wait." He called for what had felt like the thousandth time this evening. But, of course, the brute did not listen to his words. He just continued forward without a care in the world. Surely, this was the reason he got into so much trouble- even without full intention. Soon the armored Asgardians caught the movement of the approaching princes and bowed their heads to them for a moment.

   The ones nearest to the two moved out of the way to reveal their father, Odin, with a mysterious woman next to him. She turned to them both in surprise, her (e/c) orbs dancing between the two. The young black haired magician could have sworn his heart skipped a beat at her beauty, a face that is obviously not from around Asgard. Her (H/l)(h/c) hair was slightly curled against her face and dropped under a gold headdress with a few (f/c) jewels adorned on it. Sure, the jewelry on her body made her look even more stunning, but he paid no heed to the useless items that he could easily replace.

   The woman looked away from Thor and to him, almost as if everything was in slow motion. His breath hitched in his throat suddenly, making a faint tint of red come to his snow-like features. Well, that is what he would blame it on for now. Odin stood up from next to her, tearing his longing stare away from the nameless woman. The king seemed to be a disappointed by their sudden arrival- obviously wishing the guards had done a proper job of keeping them away, but why?

"Thor, Loki," The all-father spoke, gesturing to the woman as she stood up. "This is (F/n) (L/n), Mistress of Magic," He said regretfully. Thor was the first to greet her, quickly on one knee and gently taking her hand to kiss her knuckles. He smiled up at her flirtatiously, oblivious to the stern glare that his younger brother was sending him.

   "I am Thor, the God of Thunder," He stood up tall, still holding her small hand in his. She chuckled at the blond, amused of how highly he held himself. She bowed her head slightly, stealing a glance to Loki. "So I have heard. Also, that you have put your charming father into some predicaments over the past few years." She said with a glint of mischief in her eyes. The god shifted awkwardly, sending a minor glare to his father. Odin just shrugged. Her eyes turned to Loki, who was waiting patiently to introduce himself to her. "And you must be Loki, the younger brother who fancies magic." She said as she stepped towards him. They both bowed their heads to each other with respect before looking up to each other again. He smirked at her, folding his hands behind his back.

  "You are correct, m'lady," He confirmed. A smile came to her face as well, not bothering to look away at his gleaming green eyes which held her mind in place. Though, there was something about them that did not feel right. What was it?


"Why has a woman from a different star come to us at random?" Thor said non-nonchalantly, snapping her out of the trance.


(F/n) turned around sharply and quirked a brow at the man. All of her thoughts of him being a casual gentleman had dissipated. "Hm? Is there a problem with my presence?" (f/n) remarked with a tilt of her head. The blond took a step back while Loki just smiled at the fire in her tone. Thor shook his head- doing the best he could to avoid her sharp gaze. He opened his mouth to speak but got interrupted by the all-father. "Enough." He said, stepping between the two.

    He gave an apologetic look to (f/n). "I apologize on behalf of my sons' lint tongue. I shall speak with him while Loki shows you around." He nodded to the more obedient child, whom nodded back. He gently placed his hand on the small of her back and turned her around for her to follow him. She sent one last glare to the childish son before turning with the youngest and walking to the main halls of the castle.

   There were a few moments between the woman and the man clad in green. It was predictably uncomfortable for the rage of fire still burned in the mistress' stomach, but she tried her best to calm her spirit. There was no way she was going to ruin her first impression of herself... again. Though, she did make quite an impression on him. He found her amusing, not to mention interesting in the most of knowledgeable ways. How was it that a woman (whom seemed to be so young) became one of the most talented magic users in the nine realms?

She walked to a golden railing that held the sparkling view of Asgard. "So, how many spells do you know?" He asked as he walked up behind her. She turned around with a smile on her lips, eyes scanning his young face.

(F/n) ambled over to Loki with her hips swinging with a soft intimidation, earning a seductive look from said male. "Does the great god of tricks wish to see?" She questioned, head tilting to the side with a playful gleam in her eyes.

   He smiled down at her, gently grabbing her hand and placing the back in his palm. "Oh, yes! I would absolutely love to." He chuckled, watching as her eyes fell from his own to the hand that he held against his own. Instead of following her eyes to the same spot, he staid watching her slightly concentrated face. Suddenly, a fire bursts over her hand like a lighter. His eyes darted to it, slightly surprised by its sudden arrival. (F/n) couldn’t help but giggle at his jumpy form. Loki couldn't help but laugh as well, but a simple fire was not what he wanted to see. "Oh, please. This trick is for beginners! Put a little excitement into your tricks!"

(F/n) raised a sleek brow- a bit astonished by his slightly childish motives. She let out a soft groan, turning to look around for anything to mess with. "Okay," She sung, looking up to the top of the hallways ceiling. There, all across its massive length, stretched paintings of the past warriors and battles that took place. There were a few cherubs and angels placed around the large canvas- some with harps or weapons to chase the antagonists.

    A smile came to her lips before she raised a jeweled arm to the ceiling. The center of her hand glowed a pale (f/c) before the light shot up to the painting, spreading out like smoke against a wall. Loki looked up, baffled by the scene playing before him. The once still painting moved ever so slowly to a full out brawl of paint. When the characters made contact, the colors that they had touched would splatter all around instead of bleeding. It was an amazing sight for the prince. "Is this what you were waiting for?" She said coolly. He tore his eyes away from the scene to meet (F/n)s face, which still peered up at the painting. It seems that she was also impressed at what she did.
   
   Even though he knew she probably couldn't see his actions, he nodded.


"Teach me."



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XxYilingGirlxX [2021-03-13 21:28:13 +0000 UTC]

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LokiGirl72 [2014-11-08 05:04:45 +0000 UTC]

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It's amazing XD it makes me smile, it has few or no grammatical errors, it uses colorful words, it has feeling. It is so well written, it gave me chills e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> I really liked how you made Thor a little obnoxious, which is, in my opinion, exactly how he's supposed to be. It also made me feel like I was there, even though Im nowhere near Asgard (sadly) which is the point, and I am disappointed to say that most writers forget who they're writing fanfiction for. Overall, it did exactly what it was supposed to. I give it ten Lokis outta ten e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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Lena-Beana42 [2014-01-30 22:15:10 +0000 UTC]

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Vision: I swear I could literally see all this playing out.. I have to say, darling, this has an amazing use of detail and there are very few places that don't get a full image in the reader's mind. Great job depicting the story and drawing readers in!

Originality: This is the first of this kind I've personally seen, though I'd LOVE a sequel (hint hint e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="454" title="Wink/Razz"/> )

Technique: BEAUTIFULLY written, darling! I personally could not imagine this written better! You didn't write in a confusing manner and you made sure every little detail was attended to and all tied together! Kudos to you!

Impact: Well, all I can say is I think I might be sitting here for a while waiting to come back alive from my death of feelz.. Unless you DO decide to write a sequel.. In which case I will sit here and wait patiently.

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LuigiPlaysGames [2014-01-29 02:52:00 +0000 UTC]

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Vision: The images that appeared in my head as I read this were extremely detailed scenes of what you wrote. It was well thought out and written to a great extent. I didn't see any errors grammatical wise or spelling wise.

Originality: Out of all the Loki X Readers that I have written (which is a large amount) , this is the first one that I've seen that Loki is the one who wants to learn the magic tricks. Usually, it's the other way around where Loki is teaching the spells so the Reader can defend themselves.

Technique: Well, I can't exactly explain how great this area was in my opinion. Ever piece of the story went together and never strayed from the topic. That is usually what I look for, most people honestly don't do that, so seeing it for once made my day.

Impact: I loved this story. When Thor was trying to be nice and made the Reader embroiled, I was like, "I've never seen a story where Thor is like an antagonist." That was a 'wow' moment and a thinking moment for me, and those are the key things I look at.

Overall, this was amazing and it kept my attention!

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Xalath In reply to LuigiPlaysGames [2014-01-29 03:12:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! I also read a quite few of loki x reader fictions myself, so i tried to do something a bit different. (which is something i do quite a lot without noticing) Thanks again! Glad you enjoyed my story~!

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LuigiPlaysGames In reply to Xalath [2014-01-29 03:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Death-For-One [2014-01-28 19:11:26 +0000 UTC]

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I liked this so I guess I shall send you a llama. Really this was interesting to read, but you should start putting what people say in a separate paragraph. When you keep it with the rest it makes it harder to read and makes the story look blocky.
Also the first two sentences of paragraph three confuse me. First you said that it felt like hours and then you said that it felt like twenty minutes. (My English book says that you are supposed to write out the number, not use actual numbers.)
Also in the last paragraph sentence ten instead of blood bleed would make more sense.
Other than those trifle things this is really good. The characters' personalities were believable and besides the bleed/blood thing I didn't notice any spelling mistakes.

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Xalath In reply to Death-For-One [2014-01-28 19:41:04 +0000 UTC]

I have made some changes about what you have said, and hopefully it is better? Thank you for critiquing my work and for the llama as well ^^

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Death-For-One In reply to Xalath [2014-01-28 21:08:33 +0000 UTC]

No problem and it does seem better.

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Lady-Mischief-97 [2014-01-28 06:47:20 +0000 UTC]

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I am just overall amazed over the fact that this story is absolutely well written. My imagination was set free while reading this, and just like your other writings I could not stop reading until I finished the whole thing, but I even went back and read it again. Everyone's personality was right on point and no one was out of character or ooc as some would say, not to mention your grammar is pretty good as well. I was able to readthis story without being confused, which is an even bigger thumbs up for you! Can't wait to read more of your work!

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Xalath In reply to Lady-Mischief-97 [2014-01-28 19:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Lady-Mischief-97 In reply to Xalath [2014-01-29 02:00:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I'm glad you like my critique. 

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crystal-of-ix [2017-08-04 02:04:53 +0000 UTC]

Nice job!

The last time I drew Loki casting a spell, he stole a magic book out of another wizard's garbage and tried to play tag with a ghost

I tend to make Loki and another sorcerer look like morons in the comics I draw...

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CANDYNERDZ [2016-11-22 07:58:10 +0000 UTC]

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you

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Error-Loading-Sorry In reply to CANDYNERDZ [2019-10-13 18:44:14 +0000 UTC]

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ShadowXLoki [2016-10-14 00:02:18 +0000 UTC]

great story !! i would give u a llama but idk how

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Xalath In reply to ShadowXLoki [2016-10-14 01:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Go to my profile, on the top right corner says 'give' with a present by it, the option is there when you click on it

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ShadowXLoki In reply to Xalath [2016-10-14 03:03:54 +0000 UTC]

thx!

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BuckyFanGurl101 [2016-03-20 23:49:57 +0000 UTC]

DAMN, I WAS EXPECTING THE READER TO ASK LOKI TO TEACH HER SOME MAGIC! NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND!

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ijudgelove [2016-01-03 22:05:50 +0000 UTC]

lol did anyone else read the sentence "Hm? Is there a problem with my presence?" as "yo, I'm here now, you got a problem with that? Take me or leave me, but Imma be over here with your hot bro. "  XD

Love it!

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ThatOneAngel142 In reply to ijudgelove [2020-02-23 20:37:55 +0000 UTC]

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VioletMinago [2015-05-30 00:18:20 +0000 UTC]

I loved it!!!! Phrase write more!!!! ^•^

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nightcrawlerlover99 [2015-03-27 16:08:55 +0000 UTC]

I think he meant to say "marry me" XD

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AnnabethLovegd [2015-02-24 01:47:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow.
My lady, I have begun to notice something about you.

You are absolutely flawless at these character personalities.
As a writer, I can first hand tell you that keeping a character 100% in character is REALLY FLIPPING HARD TO DO.
SO HARD OMV.

And you, my friend, absolutely nailed it.

fantastic job!!!!
+1000 points

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Xalath In reply to AnnabethLovegd [2015-02-24 03:16:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much~! I usually go through the entire process of understanding the character (and fangirling over them lol) to actually understand how the character would act in a certain situation I get absolutely frustrated when I can't figure them out xD

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AnnabethLovegd In reply to Xalath [2015-03-09 19:21:04 +0000 UTC]

Yessss you're so awesome for doing that! Most wouldn't put in the effort, thanks for being exceptional!!

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annafuru [2014-03-08 04:50:05 +0000 UTC]

I loved this little story! ^^ are you going to do more?

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Xalath In reply to annafuru [2014-03-08 05:09:44 +0000 UTC]

I've been thinking about it!!

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Hudsonwinchester [2014-02-16 03:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Not to be a pest, but in the mythology, Loki is actually the older one. He was adopted by Odin before Thor was born. But a really, really great story good job

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FIREELFMAIDEN [2014-02-10 04:03:32 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed reading this well done. 

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Xalath In reply to FIREELFMAIDEN [2014-02-10 05:58:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!

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Darkforces84 [2014-02-02 07:08:26 +0000 UTC]

I liked it! It was very interesting!

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Xalath In reply to Darkforces84 [2014-02-02 19:00:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Lena-Beana42 [2014-01-30 22:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Love dis! Beautifully written! (I'd send ya a llama, but I don't have points XD) Anotha?

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Xalath In reply to Lena-Beana42 [2014-01-30 22:55:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm thinking about making another- but It would have to wait. And you don't need to have points to send a llama xD

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Lena-Beana42 In reply to Xalath [2014-01-31 04:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Np! :3


heh.. I feel so newbish XD I shall send thee a llama!

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Xalath In reply to Lena-Beana42 [2014-01-31 05:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha xD That's alright :3 I'll send you a llama as well! ^^

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Lena-Beana42 In reply to Xalath [2014-01-31 16:02:16 +0000 UTC]

ehehehe~ Thank you! :3

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WindKunoichiPrincess [2014-01-28 16:07:05 +0000 UTC]

Please keep this going this would be an awesome series.

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Odoms-Spire [2014-01-28 06:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Very cool!

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Xalath In reply to Odoms-Spire [2014-01-28 07:08:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you! And for the llama as well

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Odoms-Spire In reply to Xalath [2014-01-28 07:10:29 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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AlchemistWitch14 [2014-01-28 05:03:29 +0000 UTC]

interesting

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NalaMarieTotallyRock [2014-01-28 03:57:03 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome you should make a sequel

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Xalath In reply to NalaMarieTotallyRock [2014-01-28 04:11:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'll think about it

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NalaMarieTotallyRock In reply to Xalath [2014-01-28 05:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Allllllrighty then

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