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xalmuz — Beat Me Til I See Hell
Published: 2012-08-02 18:46:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 712; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 5
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Description Repeating, repeating, of a carnival beating,
There is no remorse, only laughter and cheating,
I've always loved all the people I've hated,
And always watching your heart become so berated,
Your filthy gods will spit in your throat,
Beg for forgiveness, so forgive you I won't,

Strangling, dangling,and asking for mercy,
Just beat me, just beat me, so that I may feel,
Reality is wrong, so show me what is for real,
Just beat me, and reap me,
Until I see hell..

Theres a, pretty little flower with your name on it,
In bloom and it's full of shit,
Forcefield is blocking,
And no one will stop me,
Before I push them all away...
Someone stop me,
Just drop me,

Theres a little, little, crack inside the window,
And it's my soul caught in a frame,
Something made me feel so black, this heart feels so gray,
Please just beat me, someone keep me,
Far away,
Someone hate me, someone take me,
Just beat me,
Until I see hell...

You won't leave me alone,
Unless I leave you first, but I can't turn my back while you walk away,
Bruises, such a sign, of that simple time,
Emotion can flow like an ocean of rage up in me,
I can see you all, your miles away, won't somebody stay?
Just beat me,
Beat me,
Beat me then eat me,
I think I'm in hell, I don't plan to stay...
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Comments: 9

hipknowtizer87 [2012-08-31 01:57:02 +0000 UTC]

First of all, the rhyming is good yet you're not afraid to avdenture away from rhyming. Seems to flow pretty good.

Second of all, I'm assuming you're the type of person who just prefers solitude over being around people. Don't beat yourself up, that's just how you are.

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hipknowtizer87 In reply to hipknowtizer87 [2012-08-31 01:57:22 +0000 UTC]

*adventure, I mean

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shadowwolfgal12 [2012-08-03 06:45:12 +0000 UTC]

I think I can relate. Good job.

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xalmuz In reply to shadowwolfgal12 [2012-08-03 06:56:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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shadowwolfgal12 In reply to xalmuz [2012-08-03 07:12:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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gabrilxia [2012-08-02 22:12:16 +0000 UTC]

I know how u feel
Great peice i like the repitition and rhyming

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xalmuz In reply to gabrilxia [2012-08-03 01:37:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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6Star6Wolf6 [2012-08-02 19:30:28 +0000 UTC]

very nicely done. I think I could relate

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xalmuz In reply to 6Star6Wolf6 [2012-08-02 19:44:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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