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xalmuz — Garden of Gore [NSFW]
Published: 2012-07-29 06:01:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 329; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description Infactuation, of the fact that I've wasted,
This life inside, dried and full of hatred,
Now I'm frustrated,
Fucking unrated,
Because of the cowardice I feel, even when I feel brave,
My black heart rotted and nobody can save,
No none can save what's already gone, sunk into the grave,
Befriend the faceless, the lone and the sorrow,
Bet you any day he might wake up dead tomorrow,

Laughter and laughter, and laughs are all that I see,
When he took that god damned knife and he stuck it in me,
Mirror oh mirror, magic mirror on the wall,
Why'd I have to go and end the start of it all?

Why am I bleeding?
Jesus,
Wish I coulda seen this,
Won't somebody clean this?
Blood stains on the wall and all on his jeans,
His, mother might walk in and see this,
Scream "Oh shit. Hon why did he bleed, what'd we do to spoil our seed?"
The seed had grown right into a weed,
Cut himself down, for somebody he needs,
So in the soil he bleeds.
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Comments: 11

byludo [2012-08-03 17:38:27 +0000 UTC]

I love it!

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xalmuz In reply to byludo [2012-08-03 19:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Thankks

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byludo In reply to xalmuz [2012-08-04 09:30:39 +0000 UTC]

No prob,!!

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Liuva-Lez-Heva [2012-07-30 20:11:43 +0000 UTC]

very well written! Great Job!

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xalmuz In reply to Liuva-Lez-Heva [2012-07-30 20:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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Liuva-Lez-Heva In reply to xalmuz [2012-07-30 20:21:34 +0000 UTC]

your very welcone

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topazcat511 [2012-07-29 06:10:06 +0000 UTC]

I always get my best ideas by talking to myself, never doubt your own voice
This is awesome-sauce right here people.

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xalmuz In reply to topazcat511 [2012-07-29 06:11:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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EetTheChildrenRAW [2012-07-29 06:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful fuckin' job!
I love how everything flowed just right plus the feeling of despair.
Wonderful!

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xalmuz In reply to EetTheChildrenRAW [2012-07-29 06:11:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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EetTheChildrenRAW In reply to xalmuz [2012-07-29 06:19:05 +0000 UTC]

No problem(:

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