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Published: 2018-11-11 15:26:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 280; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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May have overdone it a bit on this one...Enjoy!
page 41 of chapter 13 of a comic I've decided to make as a spare time thing. this comic is based of the pen and paper rpg exalted it belongs to Onyx path. I appreciate feedback
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Its cool how you designed this page. I like the rendering on this page but it needs work. I do not know whats going on In panel 2 which I believe this should tell me where the characters are at. I do not like how all the panels are close ups of these 2 individuals. As a director to your own "movie" you want to move your camera around to capture different angles to create more of a better story. I would've picked a better font for the elf and the word balloons are too crazy. They're both too big and it leads my eye when I look at this page directly to it and not the artwork. I like your drawing for this page but make sure you reference beards or stubble for panel 1 in the future. Reference is important. Good job doing your own comic and I greatly encourage you to keep pushing yourself to get better!!
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thanks.
I've been having a bit of a "zoom in" period which I need to break.
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your welcome man. 1000 percent respect for taking this critique well for a lot of other individuals would be angry. You will go somewhere if you keep it up and push yourself
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I am always happy for constructive critique
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