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Published: 2005-09-03 18:16:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2061; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 230
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Whoooaaa!! It's been a while since da last comic I drew!! I'm come back with da original characters!! Yeahhh!! Original! means no fanart for this time hehee...XPI got inspiration from da song 'Tunjukkan padaku' (please show me) sang by Indonesia popular band, Sheila on 7!
and this comic is about a friendship between this two guys since they were kids... if you heard that song you'll know what am I trying to say here.. heheee...
gotta hear it once more...XD and I've draw Mu la fraga's (Gundam Seed) hair style at dat black hair guy!! 
If you notice I've tried to change my inking style a lil bit because I've been lectured by da editor about my lineart recently...
"Your lineart is too lame!" da editor said....>.<
aww! I feel bad!! I wanna work harder to impress my dearest editor! I wanna run away from Kaoru's(Malaysian cartoonist) style bcoz everybody have told me about da similarities between my work and hers....T____T I dun wanna be Kaoru's wannabe....!! >.<
Sorry for all da frustation.. *I'm a lil bit stressed for now* >.< comments appreciated!
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tapi... sedangkan editor pun ckp cam tu... xan rasa cam nak pengsan! X3.....
hehee... sankyuu.....
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lol same kat sini... my drawing pun kadang ala-ala kaoru ^^"
^^ np!! i like ur drawing style!!
yay FF VII : advent children dah keluar!!!!!
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Editor pun... macam la Apoh baguih sangat. 'Piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiraaah!' untuk dia(pernah tengok Pi Mai Pi Mai Tang Tu dak?).
Tapi pada pendapat aku, memang agak banyak jugak persamaan antara cara Kak dengan si Kaoru tu lukih... 'Sapa popular dulu, dia punya' la agaknya. Kalau nak aku terus terang, cara Kak boleh dikatakan 'Kaoru versi kurus keding'. Tapi bila editor sebut perkataan 'lame' tu, aku rasa tak patut la, sebab bila orang baca komik kak dengan Kaoru, 'rasa' dia tu lain. Tanya la mana-mana pelukis yang baca komik Kak dari muka satu sampai enam.
Hmm... tertanya-tanya jugak aku. Macamana 'lain' yang Kak nak buat untuk lari dari cara sekarang? Mungkin kak boleh cuba baca buku komik yang tak tipikal anime sangat. Aku cadangkan 'Psychometrer Eiji', 'A Cheeky Angel'(bukan tipikal anime. mata dia lebih sepet. cuba tengok cara dia lukih lelaki), atau 'Red Eyes'. Tiga-tiga komik tu ada dalam BM, cuma 'Red Eyes' cuma ada dalam Komik Remaja lepas-lepas. Harap dapat bagi idea sikit kat Kak.
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personally i think your lines look more lively than kaoru (no offense)
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I like your line art even if your editor don't but then agane my entire art style is prity dire!
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it's hard to impress someone that has already professional.. huhuhuhu...>.<
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you can all ways show your work to me and I will allways be impresst!
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some times I'm so impresst I'm scared to leave a coment.
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o.0 it looks soo cool.....im still learning how to setup my comic layouts o.0
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waiii!
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sankyuu! I haven't drew my original character for a long time!
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You're so good! I love it! I want more!!!MORE you hear me!!
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wahhh!!!!!
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...*cries* *sniff* Well I still hope you'll be able to post more someday..
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nyaoo~~ >.< I'll see what I can do about it.. heheee...
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhh , a new story !!!!!!!!!!!!! the characters look sooooooooooooo nice !!!!!!!!!
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Urs & her style r only roughly 30% sama aje... overall, every mangaka's style is different! Urs now is fine ^^ (& I wanna know da story!!!!! OwO) I don't have ink 2 ink my works... aiya... XD
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haa.. mau tau story ka? kena la beli utopia bila dia dah kuar nanti.. heheee...XD sankyuu naa..
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Aiya..... XD Saya tak beli Utopia oo.... Ai... Apa pun bolehlah!! XD
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jadi beli la utopia..XD xan akan britau dlm jurnal kalo ada komik baru xan kuar..
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Your editor needs a few lessons in tact, really. *macam tu pun boleh cakap? 0_0*
Maa, ganbatte in your efforts, Xan-san! ^^
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aaa!! let's hug him togetherrr!!
ahaa.. maybe bcoz da editor have seen many more interesting artworks before he sees mine..XD so I must try hard to fix it nyuu~~~~~ >.<
sankyuu Kaze san!...
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He told you your drawings were lame? That's not true at all!
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maybe my style is too obvious for em.. I must work harder yo! >.<
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ur lineart isnt simmilar 2 hers AT ALL....ur drawings r better....
personally....i dont really like her style...prefer urs evn MORE...X3
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huhuuu... Kira chan.. I totally appreciate this.. Thank you...
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just 2 let u noe...i was serious bout dat comment....^^
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sama-sama. nasib baik (good luck is what I want to say...but I don't know how 
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Ah ...I forgot to mention... (I saw your artwerk after i sent in the comment cuz i read ur comment first while the pic was loading) ... So it is friendship kaa...Shounen ai worh... Love it!
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araa!! it's not shonen aiii!!!!!!! XD and thanx for da kata2 perangsang... mesti bersemangat lagi! zettai ni!!!! >.<
guess my artworks looks to shonen ai for da viewers and I haven't read any single Shonen ai or yaoi comics before.. now that's funny...XD where did I get da influence?? hmmm...XP
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Yeshho...Shounen ai tak semestinyer pasal boys kissing etc etc...Pasal friendship di antara laki pun dah masok kategori shounen ai..Fufufufufu...Kan charas xan tu dah kawan darik kecik,mesti rapat kan...Fufufufufu..
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ooo.. cam tu ker?? x aa rapat sgt tapi adegan peluk tu ada ler.. sbb ni citer sedih maaa..>.<
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Apsal la you suker lukeh charas yg kiut2??? Aku tak blh tahan worh...Tersangat kiut worh!!!!! *glomps all* XD Apoh ker yg lectured you?? As far as i can see it, your previous linearts sumer ok jer.Zenzen tak samer ngan Kaoru pun...Tapi mebbe ur lineart terlalu tebal sgt raser nyer...But still it looks good..Duh...You've got your own style lar Xan..The moment I saw your artworks in DA during my awal2 dalam DA, i instantly recognize that it was you ( the one yg menang Bakat Baru Komik tuh... ) And i absolutely can distinguish between your style and Kaoru's style... Kaoru nyer style,,from what i saw, mengutamakan bentuk2 geometri (adakah itu istilah yg betul?? =_~ ) Anyway, don't feel down just because of that..We all know you are a gifted person and you are not a KAoru's wannabe..You are you and Kaoru are Kaoru. Feel better?
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aurgh!! kisah dua lelaki lagi??? >w<
my studiomates sume dah pikir serong about ur comics, xan!! ~3~
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waaa!!~~~ jangan aaa! XD xan buat pure manly tau! XD *mengikut firasat xan aa...
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T_T Awww~ Usually I would think the guy with the lighter hair would be the most sensitive, but this is so much more sweeter 
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sensitive... he can't see dat black hair guy becpz he's blind unfortunately...XD *ooo.. I forgot to add about it in da description...
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