Comments: 5
XcOm01 [2004-10-04 23:17:56 +0000 UTC]
bahahahaha i liked your critisim, i especialy liked the eye comment, her left eye is way to small, i didnt even notice.....I NEED NEW GLASSES LMAO!
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kage-no-tenshi [2004-10-01 06:37:58 +0000 UTC]
Well, if you did that all with a mouse, I'd say that's pretty good. Your cg style is interesting...
Anyway, I'd like to point out a few things. The proportions seem slightly off... and maybe it's just me, but the eyes seem a) too small, and b) spaced too far apart. It doesn't particularly seem like a 3/4 view, so maybe that's why it kinda bothers me.
Then, there's the fact that the head seems wide for the shoulders. Yes, I know she's leaning forward... that's a slightly tricky pose, I guess. Hmm.. one more thing. The shoulders seem slanted... sort of unnaturally... Also, I'd say that the legs are a bit skinny... but... *shrug* If this is your first time, it's better than my first, that's all I can say. At least you don't have the problem with flat heads that I used to have.
Just keep practicing, 'kay? And while you're at it find somebody at a higher drawing skill level than you and get them to critique your stuff. It really helps... trust me on that...
Pardon if I seem rude... I'm just (unfortunately) tactlessly blunt. *shrug*
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XcOm01 In reply to kage-no-tenshi [2004-10-01 07:52:26 +0000 UTC]
btw i tried to make the legs skinny and narrow because of the camera angle, unless your comments were compensating for that aswell, its hard to draw things perfectly.....
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kage-no-tenshi In reply to XcOm01 [2004-10-03 02:14:38 +0000 UTC]
Sorry... I'm just a little hypercritical. Hmm... but they did seem a little too much, ne? If I offended you, I'm sorry. I wasn't trying to flame you or anything... I just wanted to leave a little constructive criticism... since you didn't seem to be getting much of that. If you want me to not leave comments anymore, just tell me.
I know it's not possible to draw things perfectly. Everyone in the art world knows that... I'm not expecting you to be perfect. I was just trying to offer a tiny bit of aid in maybe getting near that point. Nobody's going to be perfect... in fact nothing is perfect, no matter how flawless it might seem.
Heh... sorry to bother you. I saw your comment on ~kuro-neko's... I think... deviation, and I decided to see what you had.
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Iksue [2004-10-01 05:40:59 +0000 UTC]
I like this pic. not bad at all for a first attempt. my fifth attemps suck way more than this one. not that yours sucks.
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