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XcrimsonangelX — Trapped - By My Sister
Published: 2006-03-23 00:52:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 28; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description I'm trapped in my own self
Trapped not knowing where I'm trapped
Trapped in a way that nobody deserves
Trapped and I saw it coming
But didn't worry about it.

Trapped between what I know is wrong
But is the best at the time
And what is right but is worst at the time
Trapped in what seems to be my mind
Replaying everything over and over.
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Comments: 4

Kikyo-Suto [2006-03-25 20:30:56 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! Me gives it a thumbs up!
to improve it: tell her to try putting what she feels in the poem. that way people can relate to it more. very cool!

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XcrimsonangelX In reply to Kikyo-Suto [2006-03-26 00:51:33 +0000 UTC]

Alright, I'll tell her.

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bewareofthesnowman [2006-03-24 14:43:03 +0000 UTC]

wow... when i was 11 i only wrote rude limericks, she should be really proud...
what i like about this is the real sense of dilemma, i think its something we can all relate to. its a very very familiar feeling for me
so yeah, nice work beth! no, it doesnt suck i want to see more where that came from

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XcrimsonangelX In reply to bewareofthesnowman [2006-03-24 22:41:59 +0000 UTC]

lol I'll tell her ya said that. (Though.. she may kill me.. I didn't tell her I was gonna put it online. )

I thought it was really good too. When I was 11.. I thought poetry was a bunch of nonsense shit. lol So.. yea. I'm quite impressed with her.. and quite proud too... So proud, that I made a copy and put it on my notebook.

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