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XD-385 — An Impossible Quest Pt 2
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Description Upon reaching the lobby, everyone waited for Lucash and Sapphire to join them. They did not wait long as the two Lucario children emerged from the hall. Lucash sighed, "Wow… Grandma makes awesome waffles." Sapphire then looked towards the group, "Mommy, you're awake! Did you sleep well?" Ruby nodded, "Yes. So well, I didn't want to wake up." Lucash then ran over to his father and gave him a hug, "You were out all morning, Daddy. Where've you been?" Ashton gulped as he discreetly made a quick gesture. In response, Ash reached out and tenderly rubbed his son's head. But the Lucario child raised an eyebrow, "Daddy, why are you so…cold?" Chiara gulped, "Um… Your father has fallen ill and has an unusually low body temperature at the moment. He is also prone to exhaustion and does not speak well right now." Lucash then looked up at his father to see him looking down at him with a blank expression, his lifeless eyes half-open. Lucash smiled, "OK. I'll be gentle."

Ashton spoke, "Now then, is everyone here and accounted for?" Everyone raised a hand. After a quick head count, Ashton nodded, "Yes, that seems to be everyone. Now then, we're heading out now, so if there is anyone who does not yet have their belongings together, please return to your rooms and retrieve them. We will then regroup at the eastern gates of the city." With a nod, Kazeerah, Rukaria, and Chiara headed for the elevator and took it up to the upper floors to retrieve their gear and belongings. As the others went outside, Ashton asked, "Anyone know of a good place where we can start looking?" Lucy replied, "I think Oreburgh City would be a good place to start. It's directly east of us." With a nod, Ashton led the group to the east. Much to his surprise, he found that the rain had stopped. A little sunlight was beginning to shine through the clouds.


Later that evening, everyone gathered around a campfire as Zandria cooked up dinner. She spoke, "Tonight's special is ramen. Enjoy." Lucy smiled, "Ramen? My favorite!" As everyone began to slurp up their noodles, Lucash noticed that Ash was just leaning against a tree nearby. "Daddy? Don't you want some of this? It's really good!" However, the young father did not offer a response. Lucash then stood up and carried his bowl over to him. "Here you go, Daddy. Open wide." He then raised a fork with tangled ramen to his mouth. Seeing this, Ashton spoke up, "Your father…er…must only eat a special diet while he is ill. Ramen is…um…not on his menu." Lucash nervously smiled, "Oh. Uh…OK! Sorry, Daddy." The Lucario child then took a seat back around the campfire with his ramen and continued eating.

After the pot had been emptied of noodles and most of its broth, Zandria dumped the pot's remaining contents. "Anyone know of a river or something nearby?" Kazeerah nodded, "Just a lil south of us. A cozy lil brook. Ya can't miss it." The Zangoose smiled, "Thanks!" But as she carried the pot away, Ashton spoke up, "I'll come along too. Ash, this way." At Ashton's command, Ash climbed to his feet and followed after his ancestor.

After trekking through the forest, Ashton and Zandria came to a flowing stream along a sandbank. "Perfect. Just what I was looking for." Zandria ran over to the water and submerged her pot while rubbing the inside with a rag. She then looked back at Ashton as he examined Ash. "Why'd you bring him along?" The viscount replied, "See for yourself." Ash then raised his arms, allowing Ashton to yank his shirt off. Zandria gasped as she saw fresh blood drip from the black undershirt. Ashton sighed, "As I thought." Blood was slowly oozing from a small gash in Ash's chest over where his heart was. "Since his body is dead, he can no longer heal. That wound will never close, allowing his blood to spill. I'm amazed his children never noticed his blood constantly soaking his shirt."

Ashton walked over to the stream and shook the undershirt under the surface, trying to get the blood out. "Zandria, fill that pot with water and wait for me." Zandria nodded and filled her cooking pot as full as she could without making it too heavy for her to carry. Once Ash's shirt had been effectively rinsed, Ashton tossed it onto a large rock nearby and approached the corpse. In response, Ash lied down on his back. Ashton then kneeled down next to him and seemed to examine the wound on his chest. "This should do it." With a deep breath, Ashton blew a very small Flamethrower at the wound. Zandria gagged as the odor of burning flesh filled the air. As expected, the flesh around the wound on Ash's chest ignited. After several seconds, Ashton called, "Now! Douse him!" As instructed, Zandria hobbled over to them and dumped the load of water she carried onto her descendant. The flames were instantly snuffed out. Ashton then took a closer look at the corpse before him. The flesh around the wound on Ash's chest had been scorched black, but at the same time the flesh had melted a bit over the wound, effectively sealing it. "That should stop his blood from flowing." He then retrieved Ash's black undershirt and slid it back over him. "Did you finish cleaning that pot yet?" Ashton turned to Zandria. She nodded, "Yeah. It's ready for breakfast tomorrow." With a nod, Ashton motioned for Zandria to follow him back to their companions with Ash in tow.

After a few minutes of walking, Zandria froze. Ashton noticed his Zangoose lover's sudden halt and stopped. "Something catch your eye, Zandria?" The Zangoose replied, "More like caught my nose." She sniffed the air again. "This faint scent….. It smells like……me." Ashton asked, "You? A Zangoose?" But she shook her head, "No… Spectral. It's a scent I got used to after taking on this form as a specter." Ashton shrugged his shoulders, "So you smell…a ghost?" Zandria nodded, "Just up ahead." She then dropped to all fours and slowly made her way ahead while trying to remain silent. Ashton followed after her as quietly as possible.

After a short walk, Zandria stopped behind a tree. "Over there. See it?" Ashton peeked out from behind the tree to look ahead. "Hm? Just a Lucario?" Standing ahead of them was what seemed to be a Lucario. However, it was looking north. Zandria whispered, "Is it watching the others? Should I kill it?" Ashton chuckled, "How? The chap is already dead, right? Hold on, I'll speak to him." Ashton then stepped out from behind the tree and casually approached the Lucario. "Excuse me, sir. Are you lost?" The Lucario jumped slightly and looked over its shoulder. Ashton raised an eyebrow at the sight of its eyes. Instead of red, they were a royal purple. And now that he was closer, Ashton noticed that the Lucario had a sword in a scabbard that was strapped to its back, the hilt extending over its right shoulder. But the Lucario then surprised him as it spoke, "Sir? I'm afraid you have the wrong sex." The Lucario then turned around to face him, revealing her feminine upper body. Ashton blushed, "Oh….. My apologies, madam."

Ashton bowed before the Lucario, "I had assumed that you were a man at first glance. You…..hm?" Ashton then noticed that there were more peculiarities of the Lucario. The coloration of her fur brought to mind Lucy when she assisted him against Ash while he was possessed by Soul Edge, although the hues were not as bold. The fur on her upper arms, upper legs, head, and tail that were supposed to be blue were a pale gold color. The fur that covered her upper torso was, instead of yellow, a lovely turquoise blue. The black fur on her body was also a slightly paler tone than normal as well. "You…have quite an unusual color scheme, miss." But it was then Ashton noticed something else. He brought his hand to the top of her ears and measured her height. She was only barely below the base of his neck. "Miss, how tall are you?" The Lucario replied, "Last I checked, five feet." Ashton let out a whistle of surprise before looking back over in Zandria's direction and calling, "It's fine! She's not a threat!" At his words, Zandria came out from behind the tree and approached them with Ash behind her.

Upon approaching the Lucario, Zandria spoke, "Wait… You're a woman?" The Lucario nodded, "Yes. I mean, isn't it obvious?" Zandria laughed, "Now that you're facing me, yes!" Ashton then asked, "Excuse me, miss. What is your name?" The Lucario smiled, "My name is Shield." Zandria raised an eyebrow, "Shield? How'd you end up with a name like that?" The Lucario explained, "My husband's nickname was 'Sword', so I was called Shield. We were blacksmiths with our own preferences." Zandria then asked, "OK… But why are you here?" Shield replied, "Pardon?" Ashton explained, "Zandria here is really a ghost of sorts. A specter. And she can detect the presence of other spectral entities." Zandria pointed at Shield, "You smell just like me. Are you a ghost or not?" Shield hesitated before replying, "You got me." As she said that, Shield dispersed into a cloud of white mist. The cloud then moved along Ashton's feet and reformed behind them. "I am a specter. I've been dead for quite some time."

Shield asked, "Does the fact that I am dead scare you?" Ashton chuckled, "Of course not. Even if you are dead, you seem very much alive to us." Shield let out a giggle, "Very true! Sometimes I even forget that I am a specter." But at that moment, Ashton noticed something about Shield that he had overlooked. The spike on her chest seemed to be missing. "Shield, did you never grow in your chest spike?" The Lucario looked down at herself and replied, "Oh, that? I did grow it in, but I lost it due to an accident in my forge. Not a big deal, really." Ashton nodded in agreement, but soon noticed something while staring at her chest. Her turquoise fur seemed to be straining against her shapely breasts. "Er….. Your fur looks a bit odd. Why does it seem to not be attached to you?" Shield chuckled, "Because it's not! Upon evolving, the fur on my torso and upper legs became a vest and a pair of shorts." She then asked, "But since I have introduced myself, it would only be fair for you to do the same." Ashton nodded, "True. I am Ashton Redford Crimson. But please, do not refer to me by my last name…" At the mention of his last name, Shield's eyes went wide. "Crimson? Wait….. Ashton Redford Crimson….. The name of the Vulcan Warrior?" Ashton began to sweat nervously, (Oh man, is she….?) He then asked, "Um… Which clan do you hail from?" Shield replied, "The Ironspike clan. Why?" He then quickly backed away, "Not you too! Don't you dare go wild on me!" Shield asked, "Judging by your reaction……hm?!" She then noticed a sword's hilt extending up over his right shoulder from under his cape. "Sir…… Answer me truthfully. Are you…..THE Vulcan Warrior?" Ashton hesitantly nodded, "Some called me that. Others refer to me as the Angel of the Eternal Flame."

At the mention of Ashton's title, Shield's eyes went wide in wonder. The viscount stood ready, prepared for an outburst of any sort. But instead of going wild in admiration, Shield calmly smiled, "It is an honor, sir. I never dreamed I would actually meet the legendary Vulcan Warrior in the flesh." Ashton gulped, "Well….. This is a pleasant change. You're much more in control of yourself than that Rukaria was." Shield smiled, "Ah, yes. How is she? Have you been treating her well?" Ashton raised an eyebrow, "Hm? I know you share the same clan, but….. Do you actually know her?" Shield nodded, "She was my apprentice. I taught her how to forge weapons. She showed you her Hyup Do, did she not?" Ashton looked back to the north for a moment, "You taught her how to make that?! Your skills with the hammer and forge must be impressive for her to have acquired the skill to craft that work of art." She then turned to Zandria, "And your name….. Zandria? Does that make you the Zangoose who bore the child known as Atlas?" Zandria chuckled, "I'm amazed you know that much about me and my boy. Yes, I am Zandria." Shield stepped forward and shook her hand, "It is an honor, my lady."

Ashton then asked, "Now that I think of it, how do you know Rukaria?" Shield replied, "I knew her in life when she was just a little girl. Her mother's name was Solaria and her father's was Frederick. My husband and I never had any children of our own, so I came to view Rukaria as my own over time." She sighed, "I guess…..that is why I'm still here. I couldn't leave her alone like that." Ashton then asked, "If that is the case, would you accompany us back to her?" But Shield shook her head, "No, not now. I only reveal myself when Rukaria absolutely needs me. Please do not alert her to my presence." Ashton nodded, "If you insist. Zandria. Ash. Come." But before the three could leave, Shield spoke out, "Um, a moment, Sir Ashton." The viscount stopped and faced her, "Yes?" She asked, "May I…examine your weapons?"

Ashton raised an eyebrow at her request, "I beg your pardon? My weapons?" Shield nodded, "As a blacksmith, I am naturally curious of all sorts of weapons and armor. I may also be able to find any problems or damages to them. Please, sir." Ashton glanced at Zandria, who nodded while extending the claws on her right hand as a precaution. Ashton then nodded to Shield, "Very well, but we'll start small." He then reached for something behind his right hip. A moment later, he held out a leather pouch. "Take a look." Curious, Shield took the pouch and opened it. Inside, she found multiple black kunai daggers and shuriken. "Hmmm. These are weapons of the Far East, are they not?" Ashton nodded, "Yes. Being one who has been trained in the use of Ninja Arts, I carry with me various ninja tools." Along with the kunai and shuriken, Shield found steel wire and numerous slips of paper with incantations written on them in black ink. She took one such piece of paper in hand, "What do you call these?" Ashton gulped, "Handle those with care. They are…" But before he could finish, the slip of paper she held ignited at one end. "PAPER BOMBS!!!"

Ashton, Zandria, and Ash took cover behind some trees. Instinctively, Shield closed the pouch and threw it away from her. An instant later, the paper bomb detonated, engulfing the immediate area with a fiery explosion. After the blast had run its course, Ashton peeked out from behind the tree and saw that nothing remained of Shield except for a puff of white mist. "Um….. Shield?" A voice replied, "Those paper explosives pack quite a pop, don't they?" The mist quickly solidified, taking on the form of the Shiny Lucario. She then gasped, seeing that some of the trees were beginning to burn. Ashton extended a hand, "Allow me." As he closed his hand into a fist, the flames steadily shrank until they were no more. Shield only stared silently in awe as Ashton turned to her and asked, "My gear?" Shield silently pointed in the distance. In response, Zandria dashed over to the spot the Lucario was pointing at and retrieved the pouch. Upon bringing it back to Ashton, Zandria smirked, "And to think I thought you were a goner. I guess specters really do have nothing to fear."

Once Ashton had placed his pouch of ninja tools on the back of his right hip, he spoke, "Now then, do you wish to examine something more refined?" Shield nodded, "Yes, sir!" In response, Ashton gripped the hilt of the Flamberge and pulled it out from under his cape. "This is the Flamberge. Grip it with both hands, if you please." Tenderly, Shield gripped the hilt with both hands. Being a Fighting type Pokémon, she was unfazed by its weight. She then began to eye the blade and hilt while moving the sword around on various angles. "Exceedingly high quality steel with no impurities. Perfect pattern of grooves in the flame blade design with no errors. Sturdy oak wood composing the hilt. Still very sharp and not a hint of rust." She then looked at Ashton with a gaze of amazement. "Sir Ashton." He replied, "Yes?" The Lucario blacksmith spoke, "This is one of the finest weapons I have ever held, if not THE finest. I find it hard to believe that this blade was forged around 600 years ago and is still in such great shape." She then handed the sword back to him, "If it is ever in need of repairs or tempering, I would be honored to lend my services to you." Ashton gave her a grateful smile, "Should a time come where I need such aid, I will let you know promptly." He then placed the Flamberge on his back with only the hilt sticking above his cape.

Ashton smiled, "You truly have an eye for fine weapons, Shield. This sword was quite costly for me to commission." But before he could say anything else to her, Shield noticed what seemed to be a sword's hilt slightly extending past his left hip. "Seems I missed one. May I examine that sword as well?" Ashton quickly glanced at where Shield was pointing, but soon shrugged, "Normally, I do not let strangers hold that one. But you did not attack me when handling my ninja tools. I believe that warrants an exception." Ashton then drew the sword from its scabbard and held it out to her. As Shield took the sword in hand, she gasped, "This two-pronged blade. This blue coloration….. Is this…Soul Calibur?" A woman's voice replied in a sage-like tone, "Indeed." Shield froze for a moment before speaking, "This is a blacksmith's dream come true… I'm actually holding the spirit sword in my hand…"

After regaining her composure, Shield began to examine Soul Calibur closely. "……………this is….." Zandria asked, "What is? Did you find something?" The Lucario replied, "I can't even begin to imagine what this is made from! This alloy is utterly mysterious! I am at a complete loss of words." She then handed the spirit sword back to Ashton, "I apologize. I could not effectively judge this blade." But the viscount smiled as he returned the sword to her scabbard, "Don't be. I wasn't expecting you to understand it." He then held out his hand, "A pleasure meeting you, Miss Shield. I hope we meet again." The Lucario gave him a hearty handshake, "As do I, Sir Ashton. I will be nearby should you need me. Just please do not speak of me to Rukaria." The viscount nodded, "If you insist. Come, Zandria." Ashton turned to the north and continued on ahead with Zandria by his side. But before they could get far, Shield called out, "Hold on a minute! Who's this? I almost didn't notice this boy."

Ashton turned around as Shield stood before Ash. "He is ill at the moment. Do not mind him if he does not say much." Shield sighed, "Poor lad. I hope you heal up soon." At that moment, Ashton eyed the sword on Shield's back. "Shield. A moment?" The Lucario turned to him, "Yes?" He then pointed, "Seeing as how I showed you my weapons, I believe it would only be fair for me to examine yours." Shield was at first baffled, but then remembered the sword on her back. "Oh, yes! Completely slipped my mind!" She then drew the sword from its scabbard and held it out to him. "Take your time." Ashton carefully took the sword in hand and looked it over.

Shield's sword was a single-handed sword with a fairly slender blade. The hilt was a bronze color and had a pointed tip. The cross-guard was quite long and curved upward like horns. The blade itself was a lovely blue color, but not the same shade as Soul Calibur. Ashton fiddled with the hilt, "I can't help but suspect there is something to this sword that I am missing…..eh?!" As he twisted the hilt some, the blade fell apart and went slack as it broke into eight segments with a steel wire running through them, connecting them to the base of the hilt. "Well, hang bananas from my neck and call me Tropius. It's a snake sword!"

Zandria looked at the strange sword as the blade hung down like a vine. "A snake sword?! Just like Black Mist, huh?" Ashton nodded, "Yes… It brings to mind the Viper Edge she wielded. Never imagined I would see a different one." He then turned to Shield, "And what do you call this particular model?" The Lucario smiled, "This style of snake sword is called a Mirage Blade." Ashton then held the sword out to her, "Interesting. I would put this back together, but….heheheh…" Shield calmly took her sword in hand. With a quick flick of her wrist, the eight segments of the blade retracted, becoming whole again. After returning the Mirage Blade to its scabbard, Shield grinned, "You take care, Sir Ashton. May we meet again soon." With a friendly wave, Ashton led his two companions back to camp to the north.


That night, everyone was sound asleep after setting up camp. But as Ashton slept in Chiara's embrace while she slept on her back, his right eye popped open. "Young master, your sword of the flame has been taken away." The voice of Soul Calibur whispered in his head. While hardly moving, the viscount scanned his surroundings. The campfire in the center of the clearing the campsite had been set up in still burned weakly, providing a little light. When he glanced at the tree he had left the Flamberge leaning against, he saw that it was indeed no longer there. Curious, he examined his sleeping companions. Sitting against a tree was Ash's corpse while Lucash slept near him, still believing him to be alive. Much to Ashton's surprise, Shadow was sound asleep as well. "So much for the sentry….."

After scanning his companions a bit longer, Ashton noticed that Ruby's sleeping bag was empty. "Ruby? With the Flamberge?" Not wanting to awaken Chiara, Ashton made a hand sign. A second later, Chiara was embracing Kazeerah in her sleep, the Blaziken completely unaware of the change. Nearby, Ashton smiled, "She's probably similar in size and weight to me." He then gripped the hilt of Soul Calibur, "Which way did Ruby go?" The spirit sword replied, "Northeast." Without a word, Ashton dashed through the trees in the direction Soul Calibur had pointed him in.


In a small clearing, Ruby tightly hung the Flamberge from a tree branch that was sturdy enough to hold it with numerous vines. After waiting for the sword to stop swaying, she carefully lied on her back while making sure her head was parallel to the blade. She then gently gripped a sharp stone in her hand. "I'll be right there, dear….. I'll prove that I still love you." With a very careful aim, the Lucario threw the stone at the vines, cutting the Flamberge free. With a calm smile, Ruby closed her eyes.

There was the sound of a heavy blade striking the ground. A few seconds passed before Ruby realized that the blade did not strike her. "Wha… I know I was right under it." After opening her eyes, Ruby found the massive blade of the Flamberge embedded in the ground right next to her head, barely touching her. She sat up, "For the love of…. WHY?!" Upon closer inspection, Ruby noticed a line of engravings along the blade. "What's this? To defend the beloved and slay the wicked?" She growled, "What is this, a safeguard?!" The young mother yanked the sword out of the ground and tried to strike herself on the head with the blade. "You're a sword! Kill me!" However, no matter how hard she strained, the Flamberge would constantly resist her or otherwise miss. "Fine. If you won't strike me, I'll strike you."

Minutes later, the Flamberge was sticking straight up out of the ground, its round pommel firmly buried in the ground. Ruby nodded, "That should do it." She then climbed the closest tree and bounded from branch to branch until she was a good fifteen feet off the ground at least. She carefully walked to the edge of a branch that was directly overlooking the Flamberge. The young mother took a deep breath and closed her eyes, "Just a minute more, dear. I'll see you soon." With that, Ruby fell forward and fell towards the Flamberge with the intention of impaling herself upon it.

Much to Ruby's shock, she hit the ground hard in a belly flop, knocking the wind out of her. After catching her breath and recovering from the force of the impact, she looked up and saw Ashton standing before her with the Flamberge in hand. "It is not wise stealing a warrior's sword." But the Lucario begged, "What are you waiting for…?" As she slowly climbed to her feet, Ruby screamed, "KILL ME!!!" Ashton took a step back, but soon placed the Flamberge on his back, "I don't think Ash would approve of that." But Ruby wept, "What are you talking about?! I deserve it! Do it! Please!"

Ruby practically dropped to her knees and begged Ashton, shedding a river of tears. The viscount only looked down at her in pity, "Why…?" The young mother cried, "Because it was my fault… I was too obsessed over the past… If I had just let the past go, he never would've run off. He never would've run into that assassin. And he never would've died! It's all my fault! I'm the one who killed him!" She dropped to her hands in sorrow, "He saved my life. He gave me a reason to live. He gave me his children……. And as thanks, I killed him! It should've been me!" By then, Ashton let out a sigh and slammed the flat side of the Flamberge onto Ruby's head, sending her face into the ground. "Enough of this! I already told you, did I not?! We are searching for Ho-Oh. She will restore him!"

As she rubbed her head, Ruby climbed to her feet, "Yes, I haven't forgotten. But do you think we can really find her?" Ashton remained silent. "Ho-Oh constantly circles the globe! What are the chances of us actually finding her?!" She then sobbed, "Face it…. Ash is gone… Forever…" As he watched Ruby weep, Ashton frowned, "So be it…" He then turned to leave, "Thirty days."

Ruby looked up at Ashton, "Thirty…days? What?" The viscount turned to face her, "If we are unable to locate Ho-Oh in thirty days, I will revive Ash myself." Ruby gasped, "Wait… So you CAN revive him?" She grabbed his hand, "Well, what are you waiting for?! Let's go!" But Ashton grumbled, "Hold on. You didn't let me finish." The Lucario stopped pulling, "What else is there?" Ashton explained, "It is true. I can revive Ash by transferring my own power of the Eternal Flame into him. However……" He looked to the night sky, "To do so is the same as slitting my throat. Transferring enough power of the Eternal Flame into another to revive one from death results in death for the donator. And I have died once already. If I were to do it again……"

At Ashton's revelation, Ruby froze. "You would…..give up your life…for my lover?" Ashton slowly nodded, "I view him as my own… And it will not be a permanent demise. I will return in 500 years time." But Ruby pleaded, "But what of Zandria?! And Aurora?! And Chiara?! What about them?!" Ashton sighed, "I know. It has been less than a year since I was reunited with them." He bowed his head, "Would they be able to endure another 500 years in my absence after such a short reunion?" Ruby remained silent for a moment before speaking, "Ashton… You don't have to do this… It was my fault. You should not have to pay for my mistakes….." But the viscount began to walk away, "Thirty days. I will go with your decision when the time comes."

As Ashton walked out of sight, Ruby looked to the night sky and pleaded, "Ho-Oh… Please, let us find you in time….." She then slowly followed after the viscount, her heart heavy with remorse and dread.


To the west in Canalave City, a large cargo vessel docked just before midnight. But as the crew started to unload the cargo, no one noticed a cloaked figure leap from the ship and run down a mooring rope before slipping away into the darkness before running east. "That dark presence again. Twice in one week. Hope this isn't a bad sign…" As the cloaked figure ran, the moonlight was reflected off of the spikes on the back of the figure's black furred hands. "Hang on, sister… I'll find you yet."
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Comments: 28

Zethall [2011-12-25 04:29:54 +0000 UTC]

Ash and Ruby are both trying to commit suicide (Ash isn't anymore but he was), they make the perfect couple :::::::-D

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monkeymomomo [2010-07-28 05:26:43 +0000 UTC]

Well written story that makes for a good read, you've made me pull through 5 all-nighters so far (hehe) You have some amazing talents in the literary arts and the multiple girlfriends makes for plenty of smirks while reading. I hope you'll still be writing by the time I make it to your latest story

your restless fan, who forgot his screen name XD.

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Ultimate-Zelda-fan [2010-01-08 18:51:05 +0000 UTC]

One month, that's not a lot of time. Let's hope they can find Ho-oh by then.

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Shadowchilly [2010-01-03 03:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Awesome as always

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jacetrafalgar [2010-01-01 09:35:54 +0000 UTC]

Well, seems he's not gonna die after all. Not that you aren't a masterful workworker and all, and the stories you write are damn good for fanfiction, I feel I must direct you to this article, which I find to be rather amusing, and hopefully you will too, given the circumstances of Ash's death, and his unwillingness to accept another chance at life from Ruby.

Please note that I am sending this article in good tidings, and do not with to offend. Merely, I find it funny that Ash has a chance of being resurrected, whether by Ho-Oh or by Ashton.

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F112233 [2009-12-31 00:06:25 +0000 UTC]

Impressive... but question..
If ash happens to be revived by ho-oh... wouldn't he get a a lot more of the eternal flame into him(meanning he'll be even more pokemon-like... and a lot more powerfull?

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XD-385 In reply to F112233 [2009-12-31 01:18:18 +0000 UTC]

No, not exactly. She will merely revive him. After all, Entei, Raikou, and Suicune were revived. And they don't have the Eternal Flame.

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F112233 In reply to XD-385 [2009-12-31 01:35:49 +0000 UTC]

Ah...good point, doesn't ashton have some kind of mental link to ho-oh, I remember something like that in forbidden love...?

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XD-385 In reply to F112233 [2009-12-31 05:09:30 +0000 UTC]

No. She only spoke to him because his life was in mortal danger and that the only way for him to survive was to learn of his true potential. Basically, it's much harder for them to contact her than it is the other way around.

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F112233 In reply to XD-385 [2009-12-31 14:43:46 +0000 UTC]

and there's no way for ho-oh to know their dire need to talk to her... ahh... understood

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Sorame [2009-12-29 19:49:26 +0000 UTC]

....mm.... I know how she feels... I'm barely holding myself back...

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AshKetchum998 [2009-12-29 12:45:13 +0000 UTC]

nice chapter rubys suicidal attempts are abit odd.....

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Ross-the-Boss [2009-12-28 08:01:37 +0000 UTC]

Lucash-Why does daddy smell like Jimmy Dean Sausage? (Dawn of the Dead 2004 reference)

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XD-385 In reply to Ross-the-Boss [2009-12-30 21:30:17 +0000 UTC]

You're the one who left that on AGNPH?

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Ross-the-Boss In reply to XD-385 [2009-12-31 04:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Maybe.
I travel this fine web of information under many guises, many names, but in the end I am what I once was. Or was it that this is all I really am. A faceless, nameless being lost in this world of false hope..

So in short yeah

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nisar1 [2009-12-28 02:12:20 +0000 UTC]

nice. Ashton has another fan. lol

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Shadow-Ichigo [2009-12-27 21:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow, one big chapter again. Heh

Damn, didn't except Ruby to be so... weak. And like Ash as well.

Cool, Shield and Sword. Good name for a blacksmith business.

Jeez, I hope they find Ho-oh soon. Hate to be Zandria, Aurora, and Chiara to endure another 500 years of being alone.

And, who is that clocked figure? Dark presence? Spiked on fur hand? A Lucario? Sister? Hmm, is it?

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JediMasterFox [2009-12-27 18:43:19 +0000 UTC]

If I didn't know any better, I'd say that Flamberge safeguard thing is similar to the sword in Samurai Jack. I also really like that Shield girl.

Anyways, fav.

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XD-385 In reply to JediMasterFox [2009-12-28 06:52:57 +0000 UTC]

I think that thing only worked when held by those with evil in their hearts. The Flamberge's safeguard prevents it from slashing those who lack evil in their hearts, regardless of whether someone is holding it or not!

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JediMasterFox In reply to XD-385 [2009-12-28 07:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Well, that still seemed somewhat similar to me. Oh well. It still was a good chapter.

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Snowfyre [2009-12-27 17:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Pretty nice of you to spilt it into two chapters.
Well, nicely introduced new character... and stranger relations.. and clan idolisations.

Though now seems time for Ruby to get suicidal. Odd. Seems to follow a pattern. o.O....

And the mysterious shadow still seeks his sister.


Man that's a lot of lucarios now.


Liked how you did that second dark struggle with Lucy's other side in the previous page.

You also took the pace well with Lucy's feelings too.. well, mostly. she gets very worn out after the whole thing and it's surprising that she's not fainted yet. But it's a suitable pace cause it seems to show she's not yet as close to Ash as she regards for her 'sister'. Cause well... there's other individuals that can resurrect...

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Lunis1992 [2009-12-27 17:11:29 +0000 UTC]

Ashton cares A LOT about his family, even his decendants. That's very thoughtful of him.

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XD-385 In reply to Lunis1992 [2009-12-28 07:21:20 +0000 UTC]

Where Ash gets his stubborn willpower from his Zangoose blood, Ashton gets his powerful maternal instincts from Ho-Oh's presence.

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Neoumbreon [2009-12-27 15:07:04 +0000 UTC]

awesome chapter or chapters whatever you wanna call it. I'm seeing a bit of irony here Ruby was angry at Ash for trying to kill himself but now she's trying to kill herself, though i she only wants to be with Ash again.

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nikku0hyuga [2009-12-27 14:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Loved the chapter bro

I think that's 18 or 19 Lucarios now in total..
It really doesn't matter in the slightest it's just something I've noticed

I also think That Aurora should become more a part of the story again. She wasn't mentioned for about 5 or so chapters and having a super speedy Pokemon like Suicune helping them out would probably prove to speed up the search a bit. There's really no reason I can see to have her not be in the story. she doesn't even really need lines she could just be there

One final thing: I thought that Ashton had some connection that allowed him to speak to Ho-oh about things. I could quite possibly be wrong but I think I remember him calling her back in Forbidden Love and her appearing to him.

Your loyal fan
~Nikku~

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megarock1018 [2009-12-27 10:08:02 +0000 UTC]

a-awesome... i wanna read more.....

--
"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return, To obtain something of equal value must be lost, That is alchemy's first law of equivalent exchange."

'-Edward Elric
Fullmetal Alchemist'

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ShadowLegionnaire [2009-12-27 09:42:56 +0000 UTC]

Amazing story

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cameronjc [2009-12-27 07:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Well this was a good one. Well you got Shield right as well. And who is that mystery figure at the end?

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