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Zethall [2011-12-25 04:29:54 +0000 UTC]
Ash and Ruby are both trying to commit suicide (Ash isn't anymore but he was), they make the perfect couple :::::::-D
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monkeymomomo [2010-07-28 05:26:43 +0000 UTC]
Well written story that makes for a good read, you've made me pull through 5 all-nighters so far (hehe) You have some amazing talents in the literary arts and the multiple girlfriends makes for plenty of smirks while reading. I hope you'll still be writing by the time I make it to your latest story
your restless fan, who forgot his screen name XD.
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jacetrafalgar [2010-01-01 09:35:54 +0000 UTC]
Well, seems he's not gonna die after all. Not that you aren't a masterful workworker and all, and the stories you write are damn good for fanfiction, I feel I must direct you to this article, which I find to be rather amusing, and hopefully you will too, given the circumstances of Ash's death, and his unwillingness to accept another chance at life from Ruby.
Please note that I am sending this article in good tidings, and do not with to offend. Merely, I find it funny that Ash has a chance of being resurrected, whether by Ho-Oh or by Ashton.
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F112233 [2009-12-31 00:06:25 +0000 UTC]
Impressive... but question..
If ash happens to be revived by ho-oh... wouldn't he get a a lot more of the eternal flame into him(meanning he'll be even more pokemon-like... and a lot more powerfull?
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XD-385 In reply to F112233 [2009-12-31 01:18:18 +0000 UTC]
No, not exactly. She will merely revive him. After all, Entei, Raikou, and Suicune were revived. And they don't have the Eternal Flame.
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F112233 In reply to XD-385 [2009-12-31 01:35:49 +0000 UTC]
Ah...good point, doesn't ashton have some kind of mental link to ho-oh, I remember something like that in forbidden love...?
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XD-385 In reply to F112233 [2009-12-31 05:09:30 +0000 UTC]
No. She only spoke to him because his life was in mortal danger and that the only way for him to survive was to learn of his true potential. Basically, it's much harder for them to contact her than it is the other way around.
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F112233 In reply to XD-385 [2009-12-31 14:43:46 +0000 UTC]
and there's no way for ho-oh to know their dire need to talk to her... ahh... understood
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Sorame [2009-12-29 19:49:26 +0000 UTC]
....mm.... I know how she feels... I'm barely holding myself back...
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AshKetchum998 [2009-12-29 12:45:13 +0000 UTC]
nice chapter rubys suicidal attempts are abit odd.....
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Ross-the-Boss [2009-12-28 08:01:37 +0000 UTC]
Lucash-Why does daddy smell like Jimmy Dean Sausage? (Dawn of the Dead 2004 reference)
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XD-385 In reply to Ross-the-Boss [2009-12-30 21:30:17 +0000 UTC]
You're the one who left that on AGNPH?
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Ross-the-Boss In reply to XD-385 [2009-12-31 04:00:08 +0000 UTC]
Maybe.
I travel this fine web of information under many guises, many names, but in the end I am what I once was. Or was it that this is all I really am. A faceless, nameless being lost in this world of false hope..
So in short yeah
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nisar1 [2009-12-28 02:12:20 +0000 UTC]
nice. Ashton has another fan. lol
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JediMasterFox In reply to XD-385 [2009-12-28 07:04:00 +0000 UTC]
Well, that still seemed somewhat similar to me. Oh well. It still was a good chapter.
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Lunis1992 [2009-12-27 17:11:29 +0000 UTC]
Ashton cares A LOT about his family, even his decendants. That's very thoughtful of him.
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XD-385 In reply to Lunis1992 [2009-12-28 07:21:20 +0000 UTC]
Where Ash gets his stubborn willpower from his Zangoose blood, Ashton gets his powerful maternal instincts from Ho-Oh's presence.
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Neoumbreon [2009-12-27 15:07:04 +0000 UTC]
awesome chapter or chapters whatever you wanna call it. I'm seeing a bit of irony here Ruby was angry at Ash for trying to kill himself but now she's trying to kill herself, though i she only wants to be with Ash again.
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megarock1018 [2009-12-27 10:08:02 +0000 UTC]
a-awesome... i wanna read more.....
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"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return, To obtain something of equal value must be lost, That is alchemy's first law of equivalent exchange."
'-Edward Elric
Fullmetal Alchemist'
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cameronjc [2009-12-27 07:23:51 +0000 UTC]
Well this was a good one. Well you got Shield right as well. And who is that mystery figure at the end?
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