Comments: 22
Pokemonashono [2011-01-26 19:29:34 +0000 UTC]
Like the begining how awful .... yet funny. I wonder what would happen if Arceus was in the story. She would most like jump a Ash. I think that because I read stories that say Arcues falls in love with Ash on Fanfiction.net.
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Zimehr [2010-05-05 07:12:29 +0000 UTC]
-_-... I can see the drama in the next chapter
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Zimehr In reply to XD-385 [2010-05-05 07:47:32 +0000 UTC]
mmm good name makes me sleepy
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Shadow-Ichigo [2010-05-01 05:34:43 +0000 UTC]
Mmm, Kabobs... So tasty, and wow. Is the baby really that tired to not move? Or...
"SILENCE!"
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Ross-the-Boss [2010-04-26 21:27:57 +0000 UTC]
You got shot in the face and all you can think of saying
"is that fricking hurt!"
Anyway..
A extremely well-written chapter full of killing.
Keep it up!
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XD-385 In reply to Ross-the-Boss [2010-04-27 06:34:48 +0000 UTC]
Don't look at me. I was told that is what she says whenever Rukaria suffers a wound that would otherwise prove fatal. And it was less of a shot to the face and more of a shot to her cranium.
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cameronjc [2010-04-26 08:05:15 +0000 UTC]
A really good chapter. So glad Rukaria saw Shield again after so long
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megarock1018 [2010-04-26 00:13:41 +0000 UTC]
amazing chapter as always!
i am absolutely CRAVING for more~
--
"Humankind cannot gain anything without first giving something in return, To obtain something of equal value must be lost, That is alchemy's first law of equivalent exchange."
'-Edward Elric
Fullmetal Alchemist'
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DragonMaster2006 [2010-04-25 21:42:28 +0000 UTC]
very nice, i enjoyed reading this chapter very much. didnt see much wrong with grammer and such
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Lunis1992 [2010-04-25 21:31:47 +0000 UTC]
GO ASHTON!!!! XD
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JediMasterPest [2010-04-25 16:52:46 +0000 UTC]
Justice is served!
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JediMasterFox [2010-04-25 16:46:44 +0000 UTC]
Yet another great chapter. However, I'm sorry to say that I noticed a couple of errors.
In one of the earlier paragraphs, Pearl was mentioned at being with them. I can't seem to find it now. Also, in paragraph 34, a certain word appears to be missing from a sentence Rukaria says.
Still a great chapter though.
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AshKetchum998 [2010-04-25 16:04:25 +0000 UTC]
awesome chapter :3
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pokefan6789 [2010-04-25 14:58:23 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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Neoumbreon [2010-04-25 13:40:01 +0000 UTC]
Lots a diein
awesome chapter, very actiony
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dracologistmaster [2010-04-25 06:56:53 +0000 UTC]
wow another great chapter keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter hopefully we will learn more about rukaria.
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7tails [2010-04-25 06:20:27 +0000 UTC]
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one..... ^_^
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