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Published: 2003-06-12 20:46:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 644; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 161
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Description I'm still in Athens, but we've got some spare time, so I'm trying to submit a couple before I leave, but I definitely wanted to put this one on here because it's one of my absolute favorite pictures from this week, but also that I've ever shot, at least as far as portraits go. The girl in the foreground is Lauren ( ~righteousbabe ), my photo-muse from the week, and next to her in the white is the other (but still cool) Lauren. I took this the other night on a UGA bus after bowling night... it was around 10:30 or 11, so it was dark outside, but the inside of the bus was lit (obviously), but I sort of just shot this one at random because Lauren and Jeff (I think) off camera were having an entertaining conversation. I didn't realize how great the lighting was until I got the negatives back and scanned this one in... I like the depth of field, how the emphasis is clearly on Lauren in the foreground, but you can still see the other people, but keeping the emphasis on her. The other thing that I love is her expression.. I forget who she was talking to off frame, but she had this wonderful expression the whole time. I could keep rambling on about how I love the lighting and the background and stuff, but I guess I'll stop... just know that I absolutely love this one... new featured deviation I think!


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1/30 sec | f/2.8
Kodak 800 speed
Canon AE-1p
28 mm Canon FD lens
Polaroid SpiritScan 35 negative scan
Slight level adjustments in PS6 for added contrast.



4.21.04 edit\\\\
I just went back to featuring this one... I've been wanting to get back into portraiture recently, and this is one of my favorites I've got around here. I just went in today and got rid of a pesky white light in the background that really drew too much attention. I also tweaked the levels a bit more (like I haven't already dont that enough to this one), but I think I got it just about where I liked it. Before, the shot was a bit too green from the flourescent lighting, so I added some reds and a slight bit of yellow to give it a more natural feel. I think I've finally got this shot right where I like it.


okay, last edit 4.22.04\\\\
so i got rid of the third girl in the background. no one said anything about her but to get rid of her... she didn't do anything for the photo, plus the girl in real life never liked my work, so she shouldn't deserve to be part of one of my favorite shots. i also cleaned it up in a couple minute spots. please, god, let me be done with it now... i've been coming back to this shot off and on for the past 10 months or so, something i've never done with any other shot. i'll leave it at this final form for now.
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Comments: 26

tund [2004-07-09 10:14:13 +0000 UTC]

i cant believe i never commented on this. this is a brilliant shot, the focussing is totally gorgeous. Here have my baby.

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Zlatty [2004-06-01 03:29:28 +0000 UTC]

why did you get rid of the last girl
thats what made the shot complete ... gargh ... you are the artsit but ..... humbug

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untrendy [2004-05-28 18:32:28 +0000 UTC]

i like this shot. i dont like the editing though. i can really see where you took out that person, and where you touched it up. a good editing job is where the viewer cant tell you did it. in this case, i can see plainly where you did it. if you want me to clean this up or give you tips, i will.

otherwise, i really like the expression and composition of this shot. enough for me to it.

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xdavidfotox In reply to untrendy [2004-06-02 20:03:09 +0000 UTC]

have you seen the original of this? i'd be more than happy to show it to you (though i am considering updating the image with the third person in it again), because i'm pretty sure it's near impossible to tell what i did to it.... the background was already basically black. where do you think the other person was? just curious, since it was so obvious to you. but thank you for looking at my work and the favorite.

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untrendy In reply to xdavidfotox [2004-06-05 21:08:29 +0000 UTC]

i can see edit spots in the top right hand corner.

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xdavidfotox In reply to untrendy [2004-06-07 19:54:42 +0000 UTC]

whoa! i just got on my new powerbook and was checking out my site when, lo and behold, i saw the HUGE edit spots you were talking about... how sloppy. they aren't visible at all on my pc's monitor.... time to clean it up. thanks for mentioning it!

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untrendy In reply to xdavidfotox [2004-06-07 19:57:30 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome

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falling-ashes17 [2004-05-04 04:17:19 +0000 UTC]

yeah its great... good work..

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lazychump [2004-05-02 19:25:24 +0000 UTC]

man, i can't get these type of portraits at all! It's really frustrating.

enough of my ramblings, awesome shot, i'm envious.

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vacant-capsule [2004-04-24 03:17:01 +0000 UTC]

it's perfect!

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Zlatty [2004-04-22 03:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Whoa dude this is an awesome shot ... the composition is soo friggin awesome ... great work !

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daylikeforever [2003-09-23 04:16:48 +0000 UTC]

awesome shot!! where am i? haha just kidding, not ALL laurens huh.

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eldiavolo [2003-09-15 01:54:31 +0000 UTC]

loved this picture dude!

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defyjane [2003-09-05 22:56:11 +0000 UTC]

unless of course you are talking about athens georgia...there is an athens in georgia right?

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defyjane [2003-09-05 22:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh I defintily agree on that. There is some awesomeness to this photo. I love the way her face is the only face fully in focus, I love how the three people are at an angle going away from the camera. And I love the lighting too, the green tones are nice. Great work.

You know...the overall style of it kinda makes me think of Greece. Funny how that works out.

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indierockboy [2003-09-02 06:40:09 +0000 UTC]

normally the grain on 800 speed film is a bit perturbing, but in this case it actually works well with the shot. the focal point was very well selected; you managed to have one, and only one, aspect of the photo in focus, but without obscuring the rest of the photo. the composition of the first two girls and the negative space they create is very well framed, but i think if the girl in the far back were removed, the image would progress much more smoothly from top left to bottom right.]

great shot.

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skantfa [2003-09-01 21:13:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow...love the focus, the movement, and the gradual stepping down of the photot. Great work. Love the darkness in the background. Amazing

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timecreepsby [2003-08-30 08:56:19 +0000 UTC]

yeah, this shot is awesome... I love it.. her expression is good heh...niiice

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parisinflames [2003-07-27 02:10:53 +0000 UTC]

this is just awfully lovely. she's so happy and everything, and she's so lovely. i absolutely love this.

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osix [2003-06-12 21:55:45 +0000 UTC]

- well i really don't know how to commnts on the photo

but the words MUSe kinda caught me -

i hope i got a Muse to make my feel better and make my life better

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yachtclub [2003-06-12 21:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous capture. You did a great job capturing a beautiful moment. Her expression is endearing. Looks like a great time. Nice job.

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roninbearz [2003-06-12 21:26:52 +0000 UTC]

It's astonishing how often photographs create themselves this is a classic image and spontaneous composition nothing but feeling and good energy here

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calibrettoslam [2003-06-12 21:26:23 +0000 UTC]

another AWESOME one. good job eh.

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alannon [2003-06-12 21:01:28 +0000 UTC]

i also love the expression on her face. the girl in the backround is great too. the whole picture makes me want to smile. it's amazing how things work out so well sometimes.

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duple [2003-06-12 20:58:55 +0000 UTC]

she has a nice smile. very cute, yeah good snap

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liquidmorphine [2003-06-12 20:55:18 +0000 UTC]

The yummyishness is incredible. I want to squeeze her.

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