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xdream-chaserx — Commish: Lilanie-kun

Published: 2011-08-16 17:02:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 1127; Favourites: 94; Downloads: 8
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Description This was a commission for of their OC's. I love these characters ^^ I think they're great and they were SOOO much fun to draw Thanks for commissioning me! Hope you enjoy!

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Comments: 31

LaEmperatrizMariana [2011-08-16 17:18:41 +0000 UTC]

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What drew me to this piece was the cleanness of the shading and the texture, especially on their hair and clothing. It makes a rather simple looking outfit better visually.

Anatomy-wise, the only thing that threw me off was the hands. I don't know about you, but when I see somebody's hand or even my own, the thumb doesn't start alongside the other fingers. The thumb tends to start much lower and around where it ends, (the tip) that's about where all the fingers start. The hand that's gripping the cards also seems to lack the curve, in the back of the hand. To me, that makes it look a little bit unnatural. I hope this didn't come off sounding rude or anything.

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xdream-chaserx In reply to LaEmperatrizMariana [2011-08-16 17:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much ! I really appreciate the criticism.

Now that I'm looking at the hands again I do see what you mean. I'll keep that in mind for my next piece and make sure to correct it. It didn't take it offensively, I'm actually very grateful. (: thank you!

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LaEmperatrizMariana In reply to xdream-chaserx [2011-08-16 17:28:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

If it helps you or anyone reading this, improve a little more in their art, I've done my job.

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xdream-chaserx In reply to LaEmperatrizMariana [2011-08-16 17:35:02 +0000 UTC]

well it'll definitely help me so thanks for taking time to critque

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sandy3697 [2012-10-29 19:12:00 +0000 UTC]

wow just wow.....O_O in the good way ^^

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rena212 [2012-02-18 01:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww, so cute! I love how you drew Lilanie!

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xdream-chaserx In reply to rena212 [2012-04-12 16:57:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you!~

Sorry for the late reply..

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rena212 In reply to xdream-chaserx [2012-04-12 20:30:37 +0000 UTC]

That's okay~!

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PrincessDaisy92 [2011-08-19 00:54:15 +0000 UTC]

i like the blue one!! ^^ but really good 'mommie' ;3

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xdream-chaserx In reply to PrincessDaisy92 [2011-08-19 03:08:57 +0000 UTC]

so do I! ^^ thanks!

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PrincessDaisy92 In reply to xdream-chaserx [2011-08-21 02:15:45 +0000 UTC]

welcome!!! <3

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windwalker035 [2011-08-17 13:21:23 +0000 UTC]

uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh~!!! this is so cool!!! i'm glad i commissioned you!

they look awesome and i love the gradient colors you used it kinda fit their personalities~
i hope you didn't have a lot of difficulties with their hair *i know lilanie's hair is very weird, even i have hard times with it sometimes! XD* and i wanna compliment you on drawing my chizuko perfectly! *that's what she looks like whenever she's in battle!... the ponytail, i mean *

overall, i really liked it! thanks so much for this and i hope to commission you again someday!

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xdream-chaserx In reply to windwalker035 [2011-08-17 15:54:07 +0000 UTC]

yay!!!~ I'm so glad you like it!!

aww thank you!

good! I was super worried about using two seperate gradient colors like that, so I'm glad you think it turned out ^^

I love drawing hair of all types so no worries there (:.
and chizuko was super fun to draw! I really like that character alot!

Great! I'm so glad!

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Mercy-kun [2011-08-17 12:09:10 +0000 UTC]

The look realy cool!

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xdream-chaserx In reply to Mercy-kun [2011-08-17 15:54:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much!!~ ^^

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Mercy-kun In reply to Mercy-kun [2011-08-17 12:09:20 +0000 UTC]

They* sorry about that. XD

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LightningEffect [2011-08-16 20:46:30 +0000 UTC]

I really like how this turned out, the colors you chose go well together. I love how you shade and make the clothing and hair and all look so realistic with the wrinkles. (:

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xdream-chaserx In reply to LightningEffect [2011-08-16 21:46:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks I'm so glad you like it!! ^^ btw I just have to finish up shading ur pic then I'll upload it. sorry about the wait!

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LightningEffect In reply to xdream-chaserx [2011-08-16 21:49:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

It's okay. I don't mind waiting as I've said before. ^^

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xdream-chaserx In reply to LightningEffect [2011-08-16 21:59:03 +0000 UTC]

oh i know I just feel really bad about how long its taken

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LightningEffect In reply to xdream-chaserx [2011-08-16 22:04:43 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm sure it will look amazing so it'll be worth the wait

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xdream-chaserx In reply to LightningEffect [2011-08-16 22:06:50 +0000 UTC]

alright ^^

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LightningEffect In reply to xdream-chaserx [2011-08-16 22:09:35 +0000 UTC]

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crysanthemum963 [2011-08-16 18:13:28 +0000 UTC]

Ooh...I love this. The shading is so awesome.

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xdream-chaserx In reply to crysanthemum963 [2011-08-16 18:16:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much I'm glad you like it ^^

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crysanthemum963 In reply to xdream-chaserx [2011-08-16 18:25:58 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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CoyoteTony [2011-08-16 17:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Nice! It looks pretty good for traditional media. How did you get that blend effect with the OC on the left?

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xdream-chaserx In reply to CoyoteTony [2011-08-16 17:27:17 +0000 UTC]

do you mean the color?

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CoyoteTony In reply to xdream-chaserx [2011-08-16 17:33:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah!

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KellyK-Chan [2011-08-16 17:07:20 +0000 UTC]

looks amazing 8D

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xdream-chaserx In reply to KellyK-Chan [2011-08-16 17:10:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks!! ^^ I hope they like it

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