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Xefino — 35 Years After
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Published: 2019-05-06 12:06:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 170; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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[EN] The main ideas are there, but the colors of gray are not there. I told myself that doing my OC 35 years later could be a great idea, especially since it's a teaser for the distant future of comics. My Character is in a capital Ship, I let you know.[FR] Les idées principales sont là, mais les couleurs de gris ne sont pas là.
Je me suis dis que faire mon OC 35 ans après pourrait être une excellente idée, surtout qu'il s'agit d'un teaser pour le future lointain de la BD. Mon protagoniste est dans un vaisseau Capital, je vous laisse connaitre la suite.
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Il y a quand même plein de problème restant, de proportions, d'ombre mal fait, et autre truc dans ce genre, je pense le refaire.
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Perso j'adore le décor et la barbe magnifique du perso ^^
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Oh dear, that has some problems. The legs are too narrow and the feet are way too small. The crotch part of the hips seems unnaturally large and round-the wrong shape. And why aren't there shadows from the character and control console on the right? There doesn't appear to be any shading on the character and controls themselves. The hands also seem strangely small. Another thing that's bothering me is the perspective of the room; it seems weirdly barren for a bridge on a large starship, and this is probably made more pronounced by the lack of shading on the character.
Things I would recommend for future reference; maybe find some tutorials on how to draw legs and hips-it's not that you did them wrong, just the strange proportions. I'd also recommend applying more shading to all aspects of a picture, especially one like this where perspective matters.
But other than that, this picture isn't bad. I'm still kinda exploring the idea of facial hair like beards and mustaches on anthropomorphic characters, so I can't really comment on that.
Now keep in mind, this comment is meant to be constructive, no hostilities are intended.
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Thanks for this comment, I think I redraw again this no-Artwork, because I forgot lot of things, and yes, it's the cockpit of a capital ship.
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