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Published: 2014-10-09 22:27:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 10339; Favourites: 120; Downloads: 0
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Description My Steven Univers oc I made last year when the show first came out.  I did some changes to her design and weapons.  Also, I think its best I give her a new backstory as well.

Tali is part human and part gem like Steven.  Only difference is that somehow she can control her gem powers more easily than Steven.  She was raised by her mom for as long as she can remember.  Her father was a gem by the name of Tsavorite Garnet, who Garnet knew like a close brother.  Her mother has taken care of her ever since.  Tali came to Beach City so that she could follow in her father's footsteps and learn how to use her powers.  Embedded into her hands are the two gems that used to belong to Tali's father.  With them, she can summon two Chakrams.  She also has some control over plants.  Tali is about a year and a half older than Steven, but they get along great.  Steven keeps referring her as his cousin because of them both being semi-gems.  Garnet tends to treat her like she's her niece due to her relation with Tali's father.

She has a bond with a Gem known as Citrine


She's friends with another half gem like her who goes by the name of Nomi


Talomi (Tali x Nomi fusion)


A human/gem named Luzi who she likes a lot
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Comments: 80

Xelku9 In reply to ??? [2017-04-23 06:39:36 +0000 UTC]

I will have to fix that at some point.

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NMFergus [2017-03-29 17:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Do you mind if I give you some critiques?

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Xelku9 In reply to NMFergus [2017-03-29 19:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Is this because she's half human?  Because if it is, yes I mind.

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NMFergus In reply to Xelku9 [2017-03-29 22:06:37 +0000 UTC]

It's not the fact that she's half human because people can make good OCs with that angle. I just think maybe you should change it so that the mom was the gem since it's pretty much canon that all gems are female. And also maybe you should only have her have one gem since only fusions have more than one gem. That's just my opinion. I really do love the design and weapons, though. 

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Xelku9 In reply to NMFergus [2017-03-30 00:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh.  Okay.  Thank you.

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NMFergus In reply to Xelku9 [2017-03-30 03:37:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Xelku9 In reply to NMFergus [2017-03-30 03:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Glad to see someone likes the idea of more Human gems.

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InsomniacArrest [2016-04-24 23:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Oooohhh....okay.

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InsomniacArrest [2016-04-16 02:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Wait, is her father still alive? Is the mother human? I'm confused.

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Xelku9 In reply to InsomniacArrest [2016-04-16 02:12:49 +0000 UTC]

Mother is human, father died.

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jukalon [2016-04-02 02:51:06 +0000 UTC]

is it a fusion? 2 gems and all..

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Xelku9 In reply to jukalon [2016-04-02 02:53:17 +0000 UTC]

No.

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Marvyn1990 [2016-02-21 12:22:51 +0000 UTC]

he look cute ^^

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Xelku9 In reply to Marvyn1990 [2016-02-21 17:25:33 +0000 UTC]

Its a girl.

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Marvyn1990 In reply to Xelku9 [2016-02-21 17:34:12 +0000 UTC]

oh sorry XD
she's cute

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Xelku9 In reply to Marvyn1990 [2016-02-21 19:16:45 +0000 UTC]

Tali: Who are you calling cute?  That's because I'm short isn't it?

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Marvyn1990 In reply to Xelku9 [2016-02-21 19:28:57 +0000 UTC]

me : it's you ^^ yep

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Xelku9 In reply to Marvyn1990 [2016-02-21 20:47:22 +0000 UTC]

Tali: Look pal!  I may be short, but I'm a lot tougher than any boy you know!

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Marvyn1990 In reply to Xelku9 [2016-02-21 21:44:08 +0000 UTC]

me: oh really ? XD ^^

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Xelku9 In reply to Marvyn1990 [2016-02-21 21:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Tali: *pulls on your shirt* How much you wanna bet?

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Marvyn1990 In reply to Xelku9 [2016-02-21 21:57:33 +0000 UTC]

me: dunno xD

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Xelku9 In reply to Marvyn1990 [2016-02-22 00:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Tali: *lets go* Stop laughing!

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Marvyn1990 In reply to Xelku9 [2016-02-22 00:11:55 +0000 UTC]

me: wut ?? XD

you're so cute!

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Xelku9 In reply to Marvyn1990 [2016-02-22 04:28:03 +0000 UTC]

Tali: *gets mad and tackles you*


Me: You better quit while you're ahead.  She's gonna mess you up.

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florapolitis [2016-02-01 12:27:46 +0000 UTC]

So awesome

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KrodindaGreat [2015-09-14 20:24:20 +0000 UTC]

What if you took your old Tali design and made her the new Tali's half-sister?

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Xelku9 In reply to KrodindaGreat [2015-09-14 23:03:47 +0000 UTC]

I don't know.  It would be a problem with the gems and all.

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KrodindaGreat In reply to Xelku9 [2015-09-14 23:56:24 +0000 UTC]

If by problem you mean lots of new friendz 4 Steven, then yes. BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG problem.

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Xelku9 In reply to KrodindaGreat [2015-09-15 05:14:02 +0000 UTC]

I mean how would the other version be her twin?  How did the twin get gems too?

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KrodindaGreat In reply to Xelku9 [2015-09-15 20:09:43 +0000 UTC]

The way you described. By having them forced in.

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Xelku9 In reply to KrodindaGreat [2015-09-15 22:45:46 +0000 UTC]

I abandoned that idea.

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KrodindaGreat In reply to Xelku9 [2015-09-16 00:45:35 +0000 UTC]

o_o Oh, yeah. Maybe she could just born with it, but she tries to take it out.

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clubpenguin1 [2015-05-08 23:30:32 +0000 UTC]

so very awesome and so amazing

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Flightbeat12 [2015-04-20 04:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Hey! I am planning on making my own gemsona
but I have no weapon ideas. I can easily design the gemsona since I have been told I am good at designing. But it is the weapon idea that is  giving me trouble. Got any suggestions?
Btw That sweater is awesome!

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Xelku9 In reply to Flightbeat12 [2015-04-20 04:59:10 +0000 UTC]

I'd be glad to help.  But I need some info on you gemsona.

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Flightbeat12 In reply to Xelku9 [2015-04-20 05:05:58 +0000 UTC]

I am still planning on her at the moment but I only know her gem will be Benitoite. Which is a blue gem and can be Blue-white under UV light. They are rare gems.

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Xelku9 In reply to Flightbeat12 [2015-04-20 05:10:11 +0000 UTC]

I see.  Anything else?  Like where the gem is placed?

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Flightbeat12 In reply to Xelku9 [2015-04-20 05:19:56 +0000 UTC]

Her lower back

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Xelku9 In reply to Flightbeat12 [2015-04-20 05:30:43 +0000 UTC]

 just like Citrine.


Hmmm…  Here's an idea, you could give her some kind of chain-like weapon with two different blades on each end.  She could use one end to ensnare enimes, then pull them to her so she can use the other blade to attack.

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Flightbeat12 In reply to Xelku9 [2015-04-20 05:35:50 +0000 UTC]

Sort of nunchucks?  

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Xelku9 In reply to Flightbeat12 [2015-04-20 05:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but the chain or rope thingy could be very long.  If you don't like that idea, I can discuss more with you.

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Flightbeat12 In reply to Xelku9 [2015-04-20 05:40:40 +0000 UTC]

I like it! Thanks for your help! It means a lot!
I will start designing for at school. .3.

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Xelku9 In reply to Flightbeat12 [2015-04-20 05:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Great!  Glad to help.

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Chimera-gui [2015-03-28 00:00:39 +0000 UTC]

Is Tsavorite Garnet a fusion like Garnet was revealed to be who passed his gems to Tali?

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Xelku9 In reply to Chimera-gui [2015-03-28 00:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Well…  I thought about that.  And no.  Tsavorite's gem used to be one.  But when he sacrificed himself, his gem split in two.  And then the two gems just fused to Tali's hands.

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Chimera-gui In reply to Xelku9 [2015-03-28 00:08:37 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I do have to wonder what would cause it to split though.

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Xelku9 In reply to Chimera-gui [2015-03-28 00:09:36 +0000 UTC]

I don't know.  Maybe some acident with a gem monster?

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Chimera-gui In reply to Xelku9 [2015-03-28 00:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Maybe.

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Xelku9 In reply to Chimera-gui [2015-03-28 00:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Who knows.  But I think it works.

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Icy-Cami [2015-03-22 22:15:30 +0000 UTC]

why was he on earth? and why does she have two gems if she is not a fusion

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