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Gamal-the-rookie [2012-10-30 15:55:10 +0000 UTC]

From :anthro-feedback:

Thanks for joining the group! I hope you will like the feedback/comments we can provide. (Mostly just me XD )

Let me start be saying that it is wonderful to see avian aspects in anthro art. As of late I have not seen a lot of it, this is a refreshing sight for me

For a traditional piece this is very well done, I could never see my self doing something this good on a paper. It is clean and crisp, giving a sharp and In-you-face-directness, while the character still gives a softer edge to the overall drawing.

Aside from "normal" Anthro anatomy there is only a single thing that stands a bit out to me in this piece; The hands. I can't help but feel they are too small, while it does give it a lot more feminine look such a thing could have been perhaps different? ( And I totally understand hands are seriously hard to do, but as a main rule, a hand should be big enough to cover the face. But keeping style and impression is important too. xD )

You seem to have a solid insight on how the body works, nonetheless. Her curves and pose are done with a great skill and the wings look believable.

One last thing, her left boob ( to our right ) looks a bit... dis-formed compared to the other, but It could very well be the angle of things, at any rate, now we know

Again thanks for joining, If you feel you want to help the group with comments, then by all means please do

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A3Kitsune [2012-10-11 08:11:07 +0000 UTC]

I like.

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skyworthy [2012-09-22 02:33:33 +0000 UTC]

adding the blue beak was geinus I have decided to name her Chicilia

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CecilyRoseMidnight [2012-09-21 22:55:32 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool!!!

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