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KraangTheConqueror [2014-07-12 14:24:29 +0000 UTC]
Another abandoned story, I guess?
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xenoneal In reply to KraangTheConqueror [2014-07-15 02:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Yes and no. I foolishly attempted this when I had no idea how much time would go into drawing everything, a fact made only worse by the fact I was doing it with vectors. I've since adapted it into a simple, words-only story. So it goes. If you're curious, these are the first chapters xenoneal.deviantart.com/art/Wh… . Same story, just different presentation.
Hope that answers your question.
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ZDForrest [2014-02-02 03:19:58 +0000 UTC]
Well done!
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angelmarilena [2013-11-04 12:18:37 +0000 UTC]
can't wait for the next page!
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herobrine67 [2013-10-26 12:17:07 +0000 UTC]
I'm going to assume "trickster" is for Discord. So does that mean Discord is considered the devil in this pony universe?
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MLPWhovian10 In reply to herobrine67 [2014-10-04 03:48:33 +0000 UTC]
When I read it I felt that "The Trickster" would be for Pinkie, as she is kinda a trickster.
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TrueMadayar [2013-09-09 00:34:10 +0000 UTC]
Might I say, your wording and phrasing is lovely. Very close to the show's flow. The "smooth sailin'" of Applejack threw me off a little, cause, you know, farm girl, sailin, not the first one I'd consider.
But all in all great work, really!
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xenoneal In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-09-09 12:07:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much, that's a huge compliment and relief for me! Yeah, in my mind, it's really important for the characters to sound like themselves; can't rely on people reading them in their voices to make up for bad dialogue! I see your point about Applejack, I mostly chose it to limit the size of the balloon, and at the time it seemed like a down-home, rustic idiom that wouldn't clash too much.
Thanks again, really appreciate the input!
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TrueMadayar In reply to xenoneal [2013-09-09 12:41:07 +0000 UTC]
No prob. Need to get into the flavour of Applejack? I used an entire tumblr full of southern US proverbs to get into the mood for her whilst translating a comic. For consideration only, of course.
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xenoneal In reply to RecklessKaiser [2013-09-09 12:09:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! This is just my opinion as writer, but an audience needs to be wooed before you throw them into the middle of the story.
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matty4z [2013-09-08 12:12:21 +0000 UTC]
gotta love the scene in this page
very nice work
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matty4z [2013-09-08 12:11:05 +0000 UTC]
gotta love the scene in this page
very nice work
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matty4z In reply to xenoneal [2013-09-09 05:09:59 +0000 UTC]
.........? your kidding right?
this scene is set out brilliantly
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DewlShock [2013-09-08 10:19:57 +0000 UTC]
Great work again, honestly can't wait for the rest of this chapter.
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xenoneal In reply to DewlShock [2013-09-08 13:06:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks man, I definitely appreciate the encouragement!
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Tearahk [2013-09-08 07:09:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm really liking how this is coming together. ^_^
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xenoneal In reply to Tearahk [2013-09-08 13:03:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, that's a bit of relief. I was afraid things were getting boring and taking too long.
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Tearahk In reply to xenoneal [2013-09-08 19:02:46 +0000 UTC]
Nah, I like the pacing for it. ^_^
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