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XGamerGT03 — Killin Me Away
Published: 2004-11-21 01:46:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 24
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Description I sit here in my room
All alone wondering
Who I am
And this wonderin
Is killin me away

Who am I
Why am I
Where am I;
All these questions
I don't know
And there all
Killin me away

So here I am
Alone in my room
A sharp object
Just may consume;
The knife in my hand
Stays right at my wrist
And slowly it starts
To kill me away

Who am I
Why am I
Where am I;
All these questions
I don't know
And their all
Killin me away

The papers the next day
They all say
An innocent youth
Has gone away;
But was he innocent
Even he didn't know
And all those questions
Have killed him away

Who was I
Why was I
Where was I;
All these questions
I don't know
And they all
Killed me away.
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Comments: 5

Bunnylovinwriter [2004-11-24 03:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, quite powerful!

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sisandbro [2004-11-21 19:23:15 +0000 UTC]

i like it. this would make a really killer song. you really should put some music to it!

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Sarion [2004-11-21 02:41:45 +0000 UTC]

OOoo suicidal...Nice work, i sometimes ask those same questions.

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-forgottenpoet- [2004-11-21 01:51:19 +0000 UTC]

i think this is a pretty nifty song/poem nice job

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XGamerGT03 In reply to -forgottenpoet- [2004-11-21 01:54:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks dude, spread this around if you want, i need alot of feedback so i can get alot of confidence

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