Comments: 71
sambug56 [2013-05-10 20:53:41 +0000 UTC]
That was beautiful, I read every single one of the PTDOTP and it was amazing!!! (Although it took three days) I really enjoyed it. Thank you!!!!
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KarmaThe [2012-08-27 09:13:19 +0000 UTC]
Amazing Story!!!!!
God I wish I could write stories like you...
More like this maybe?
Please?
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Betawolfy [2010-10-10 08:25:32 +0000 UTC]
omg so amazing <333333333333
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AdmiralPeach [2010-07-22 08:43:59 +0000 UTC]
Aloha. I've just spent the last few hours reading your fic and I gotta say, I am impressed. You asked at one point to be told why people like it, writing and story, so here: the plot was very well thought out, you clearly know your pop culture as well as your cop culture (yes, that rhymes, but it wasn't meant to be a witty). The story did seem to slip away from you at some parts but you rectified it well 90% of the time. Congats on the smut - you wrote it well without being squee-fest-ish or unbelieveable. You seem to have a decent grasp of changing personallities that went well with the skipping of POVs and you had a very small amount of spelling mistakes. You were clearly trying and all in all I think you should be very proud of this. I found it very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.
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kurokimono-268 [2010-04-05 17:49:46 +0000 UTC]
omg, i've loved like EVERY chapter of this story (even lewis's pov; isn't rape if u like it ^_^). but this is like totally fluffy. and the little arguement was cute 2! something else to applaude u on.... SEME PETE THROUGH AND THROUGH!! it's so hard to find fanfics with seme pete and uke patrick for the whole thing, but i <3 this! ^w^
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GothicaWay [2010-03-17 22:43:48 +0000 UTC]
Awww! That was so sweet. They should always be together.
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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to OoberAuthor [2010-01-19 13:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. I really enjoyed reading your comments, they were so sweet and thoughtful. It's readers like you that make me want to keep writing. C:
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Daysii-dacnomania [2009-11-12 02:59:20 +0000 UTC]
awwwwh, thats sucha sweet ending, i really like that you included ryan and brenny bear too x3
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Daysii-dacnomania In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-11-12 14:30:03 +0000 UTC]
haha, yeah i did comment quuiite a bit... xL
and yeeaah, it's one of the best ones ive read in a while ^^
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sashabrambleshadow In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-11-12 03:27:28 +0000 UTC]
r u kidding? of course i loved it lol i read it all in one day (homework can wait )it was tHat good !!!
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honey-daisy-911 [2009-09-23 05:20:00 +0000 UTC]
(: I finished the whole series in roughly two hours(:
Tells you how good the writing is huh(:
I love it! Best thing I have read in a long time.
Original.
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DragonBoosterGirl [2009-07-25 20:16:15 +0000 UTC]
You know who Pete reminds me of? The Green Goblin. xP
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Kitten-Kitty [2009-06-12 05:25:31 +0000 UTC]
Ended nicely. ♥
Aww- where did Ryan and Brendon goooo? That kinda freaked me out. But, they just kinda freak me out in general. :/
Cuuuuteeee! ♥♥
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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to Kitten-Kitty [2009-06-12 15:58:00 +0000 UTC]
I don't actually know. They could be hiding in my closet for all I know. Although that would be hard, seeing as my closet has no door. It would still be creepy, though.
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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to Kai-kai77 [2009-05-18 00:19:39 +0000 UTC]
Well, gosh, thanks so much. I definitely plan to write more dark, macabre fantasy-type stuff in the future...I actually have one going right now, called Cemetery Boys that you might like. I dunno, I try not to write the same thing twice, but it's got the same dark feel.
Oh, and I trotted over to your page and noticed you'd mentioned my story. I almost died of happy. XD
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Kai-kai77 In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-05-18 00:24:20 +0000 UTC]
Well, your story is worth mentioning! I'll will check out Cemetery Boys next weekend...
LOVE FOR LEWIS WENTZ!
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rAbIDMCRgurl [2009-05-06 05:35:43 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy the fluff it makes me d'awwww.
I loved the story it was gorgeous.
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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to rAbIDMCRgurl [2009-05-06 21:15:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
Alright, I have to admit: when I saw that you'd commented on my stuff, I started grinning. I love your art, so it was amazing to see that you'd read my stories.
Sorry if that was creepy, I just had to share. XD
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cantturnaround [2009-05-02 06:29:24 +0000 UTC]
this would have been perfect, but that part where ryan and brendon dissapear...GAH! bugs the hall outta me.
ooooooh i think your should start a new story from that!
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cantturnaround In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-05-02 18:58:30 +0000 UTC]
it doesnt really bug me as mcuh as it feeds my unhealthy obsession, all morning i kept getting "what could have happened" stories stuck in my head
but i guess it worked for what you were trying to do, its semi "they all lived happily ever after, or did they?"
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XpeterpandaX [2009-01-05 02:22:25 +0000 UTC]
more rydon yay
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animeluver282 [2008-11-26 23:13:43 +0000 UTC]
this is a wonderful story! i loved it!
your so good at writing details!!!
but the one thing that gets me is that pete never said i love you back to Trick...
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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to animeluver282 [2008-11-27 19:28:39 +0000 UTC]
Why, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. And I could have sworn Pete said I Love You back...I think in Ch. 24. It might not have been those exact words, but I'm pretty sure it's in there. ^^
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CocoPankakes [2008-10-05 16:59:21 +0000 UTC]
lolz, CUTE ending!!
ryan and brendon... better watch ur back
they gonna get chuuuuu!
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pilsberydoughgirl [2008-10-05 01:58:18 +0000 UTC]
oook
its over
umm yey?
i really cant say much about dis but im commenting on it anyway. im not a big slash fan... and it amazes me and scares the pants off of me that u can write that. AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!1
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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to pilsberydoughgirl [2008-10-05 17:34:51 +0000 UTC]
...um...
If it scared you so much...honestly, why did you keep reading? I don't mean for you to be all disturbed...
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pilsberydoughgirl In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2008-10-05 18:36:50 +0000 UTC]
caus ilu and i want to support u in everything u do
caus secretly im ur mom
well no but thats wut it feels like to me
about all u guys really
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stump-it-up [2008-10-04 03:41:28 +0000 UTC]
i like this
gave meh that warm and fuzzeh feeling
until ryry and bden showed up
then i got the RUN!!! feeling
this is a nice sum up for a good, dark,and edge-of-the-seat story
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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to stump-it-up [2008-10-04 21:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you. I figured I couldn't make the ending TOO fluffalicious.
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stump-it-up In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2008-10-05 17:55:15 +0000 UTC]
yeah
all good slash stories have a balance of fluff and...uhh...everything else
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