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Description Pete’s POV

I awoke to sun streaming in through the window. Holy shit. It’s sunny again.

Yawning so widely I thought my face would break, I sat up and glanced to my side. There was Patrick, curled up in a tiny ball under the sheets like a little kid. My yawn was replaced by a smile as I watched his peaceful slumber.

I glanced at the clock on my bedside table. Four o’clock. My mom would probably be back by four thirty. I had to get out of the house before then.

Hating myself for what I had to do, I reached over and shook Patrick gently. He groaned gently and rolled over, burying his face in his pillow with a dorky little snorking noise.

I couldn’t help myself; I started to laugh. He rolled back over and yawned.

“What’s so funny?” he mumbled, giving me a lazy one-eyed stare.

“You,” I chuckled, reaching out and ruffling his angelic blond hair.

“Right, then,” he yawned, closing his eye.

“Uh, uh, uh,” I clucked. “No more sleep for you.”

“Mmph,” he grunted, turning away from me.

“No!” I said firmly, reaching out and grabbing his arm. “You need to get up!”

“Noooooooo,” he groaned as I pulled him into a sitting position. As soon as I got him sitting up, he collapsed sideways onto me, resting his head on my shoulder.

“Aaaaah, stop it!” I wailed, pushing him off, only to have him slump back onto me again like a giant stuffed doll. “Don’t go all floppy on me here! We need to get up!”

“Whyyyyyy?” he whined, slinging his arms around my shoulders and burying his face in my neck.

My reply was a few seconds in coming; I got rather distracted by his soft, warm breath on my neck. “We’re going for a walk,” I managed, gently unwrapping his arms from my shoulders. “It’s nice out for a change. You brought me the sun, babe,” I murmured, planting a gentle kiss on his cheek.

“Oh, fine,” he sighed, untangling himself from the sheets and shuffling across the room to the pile of his clothes on the floor.

I smiled to myself and climbed out of bed. Pulling on my clothes, I wondered how in the world a jerk like me ever got so lucky. Patrick was quite possibly the best thing that had ever happened to me.

“You ready to go?” I asked, pulling my belt buckle tight and straightening up.

“Yeah,” he nodded, a funny half-smirk on his face. I could almost see him laughing hysterically on the inside.

“What’re you smiling at?” I asked curiously as we walked out my bedroom door.

“You trying to get into those tight jeans of yours,” he grinned, jerking his head at my legs.

“Hmm?” I raised an eyebrow.

“Just that demented little caterpillar wiggle you have to do to get them on,” he snickered as we went down the stairs.

“What about it?” I asked defensively.

“It’s extremely sexy, Pete,” he snorted as I pushed the front door open.

“Yeah, whatever.” I rolled my eyes as he breezed past me onto the front steps. After checking to make sure the door was locked behind me, I turned back to the angel standing on the sidewalk in front of me.

“So, where are we going?” he asked curiously, adjusting his hat with one hand.

“I dunno,” I shrugged, skittering down the front steps to stand beside him. “The park? There’s one a few blocks away.”

“You’re weird, Pete,” he laughed.

“So you don’t want to go to the park?” I pouted.

“Of course I do, baby,” he smiled. “I just like yanking your chain, y’know?”

I rolled my eyes as we started out down the street. “You’re a mean little munchkin, Tricky.”

“I’m not a munchkin,” he shot back.

“Oh, yeah?” I retorted. “Then how come I can do this?”

“Do whaaaAAAH, PETE, JESUS!” he yelped as I reached down and scooped him up into my arms.

“See, munchkin boy?” I smirked as I continued walking down the sidewalk like I wasn’t carrying him.

“I don’t see how your ability to pick me up makes me a munchkin,” he pointed out.

“Well…I’m short. And I don’t work out much. So the fact that I can pick you up and carry you means you are fucking tiny, kid. So I conclude that, being both tiny and adorable, you are therefore a munchkin.”

“You’re nuts,” he laughed, slinging an arm around my neck. “I bet you can’t carry me all the way to the park.”

“Betcha I can.”

“You’re on, bitch.”



“Ahah! We’re here! I win, sucker!” I sang triumphantly, setting Patrick down just inside the front gate of the small park near my house.

“Oh, fine,” he said sulkily.

“I told you I could,” I gloated. “You said I couldn’t, but you were wrong. I was right.”

“Okay, okay, I get it,” he laughed. “Stop bragging, you big poop.”

“Mature words for Patrick,” I giggled.

“Yeah, well, growing up ain’t fun,” he shrugged, grabbing my hand and pulling me off down the path through the park’s gardens, wide beds of mud dotted with the tiny green spikes of spring’s first flowers. The park was unusually busy for this time of year, full of people taking advantage of today’s unusual sunshine.

“It’s a nice day,” I remarked happily as we wandered down the path.

“Yup,” Patrick nodded cheerfully, swinging our hands back and forth like a high-spirited toddler holding his mom’s hand. “The daffodils are coming up.”

In confusion, I looked from him to the tiny green sprouts just peeking up out of the black mud. I couldn’t see the connection to flowers.

“Those things are flowers?” I asked blankly, jerking my head at the green spikes.

“Yeah,” Patrick nodded. “They’re some of the first flowers that come up.”

“How do you know this?” I asked in wonder.

“I know everything, Pete,” he grinned mischievously.

“Ah, I should have remembered that,” I nodded wisely.

He laughed and moved closer to me until we were practically walking as one person, bunched tightly side by side.

“How long is this walk going to take?” he asked after a brief comfortable silence.

I shrugged. “I dunno. I guess a while; we need to wait for my mom to get home.”

“Ah, so it looks like we met on your walk?” he suggested understandingly.

“Yeah,” I nodded. “And not like you climbed into my backyard and started pegging rocks at my window.”

He flushed. “Hey, do you think I didn’t try the front door first? You didn’t answer the doorbell. I was desperate.”

“Aw, I’m sorry, babe,” I smiled, releasing his hand and slipping my arm around his shoulders. He smiled shyly and slung his arm around my waist, hooking his fingers into the back pocket of my jeans.

I glanced over and saw him smiling at me. Leaning over slightly, I planted a quick kiss on his lips.

“You’re beautiful, angel,” I murmured.

He smiled again and looked bashfully at his feet, his face faintly pink. I laughed at his sudden shyness and squeezed him closer to me as we walked.

A happy, comfortable silence fell over us, filled with all the everyday sounds of life that I had missed for so long. A few birds, back from their winter vacation down south, twittered brightly in the budding trees. A squirrel chased another squirrel across a muddy flowerbed. Kids screamed on the playground, while teenagers laughed and gossiped and adults chattered cheerfully.

As we approached a sharp bend in the path, I couldn’t help overhear some odd noises coming from around the curve. Peering around the bend, I smiled to myself as I saw the couple entwined on a park bench, firmly attached at the lip.

That smile sort of weakened as we came closer and I realized that the couple on the bench seemed…very familiar…Dark hair, pale skin, skinny legs…I knew I’d seen it all somewhere before…

And then it hit me.

“Hey, Trick,” I whispered in his ear. “Don’t those guys look like…”

“Oooh, Ryan…”

“Oh, Brendon, baby…”

Patrick looked up at me, eyes wide and startled, as their voices floated up to us as we passed by.

“Freaky,” he breathed, glancing over his shoulder as we left them behind.

“Yeah,” I grunted, running a hand through my hair.

“Oh, well,” he shrugged, turning back to me with a smile on his face. “I’m happy for them.”

“Yeah, they deserve each other,” I snorted sardonically.

“No, honestly,” he said earnestly. “Everyone deserves someone.”

“True,” I nodded. “I just hope they stay with each other and don’t go killing people again.”

“I doubt they’ll kill anyone,” Patrick shrugged. “I mean, once you’ve got someone you love, the rest of the world kind of stops existing.”

“That is definitely true,” I agreed with a smile.

Patrick looked back over his shoulder again and stopped dead in his tracks. I stopped, as well, and turned to see what he was looking at.

The park bench that had been most definitely occupied just a few minutes ago was empty.

“Oh, god,” Patrick murmured, turning around and pressing closer to me with a shiver. “Now I’m kind of scared.”

“I guess I’ll just have to keep you safe tonight,” I grinned, putting my arms around him once again.

He laughed but kept his arms tight around me as we ambled down the path and out the front gate, leaving the lengthening shadows of the park behind us.
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Comments: 71

sambug56 [2013-05-10 20:53:41 +0000 UTC]

That was beautiful, I read every single one of the PTDOTP and it was amazing!!! (Although it took three days) I really enjoyed it. Thank you!!!!

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KarmaThe [2012-08-27 09:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Amazing Story!!!!!
God I wish I could write stories like you...
More like this maybe?
Please?

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Ryroherewego [2012-04-17 19:15:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I just read this the whole way through and I've been mesmerised :'D I sort of have a general rule not to read fanfition, but I really liked your writing...and well, I really really enjoyed it Not just the plot, but you write really well - getting inside the mind of a psychopath can hardly be easy :') I'm glad there's a happy (ish) ending; everyone DOES deserve someone :') Well done, it was awesome

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Betawolfy [2010-10-10 08:25:32 +0000 UTC]

omg so amazing <333333333333

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AdmiralPeach [2010-07-22 08:43:59 +0000 UTC]

Aloha. I've just spent the last few hours reading your fic and I gotta say, I am impressed. You asked at one point to be told why people like it, writing and story, so here: the plot was very well thought out, you clearly know your pop culture as well as your cop culture (yes, that rhymes, but it wasn't meant to be a witty). The story did seem to slip away from you at some parts but you rectified it well 90% of the time. Congats on the smut - you wrote it well without being squee-fest-ish or unbelieveable. You seem to have a decent grasp of changing personallities that went well with the skipping of POVs and you had a very small amount of spelling mistakes. You were clearly trying and all in all I think you should be very proud of this. I found it very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.

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kurokimono-268 [2010-04-05 17:49:46 +0000 UTC]

omg, i've loved like EVERY chapter of this story (even lewis's pov; isn't rape if u like it ^_^). but this is like totally fluffy. and the little arguement was cute 2! something else to applaude u on.... SEME PETE THROUGH AND THROUGH!! it's so hard to find fanfics with seme pete and uke patrick for the whole thing, but i <3 this! ^w^

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GothicaWay [2010-03-17 22:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Awww! That was so sweet. They should always be together.

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OoberAuthor [2010-01-18 08:09:31 +0000 UTC]

This was one of the best stories I have ever read. Not only was the writing beautiful and the plot perfect, but you wrote the characters like you knew them inside and out. I am in awe of you and I can't wait to read more of your work

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to OoberAuthor [2010-01-19 13:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. I really enjoyed reading your comments, they were so sweet and thoughtful. It's readers like you that make me want to keep writing. C:

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Daysii-dacnomania [2009-11-12 02:59:20 +0000 UTC]

awwwwh, thats sucha sweet ending, i really like that you included ryan and brenny bear too x3

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to Daysii-dacnomania [2009-11-12 13:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm really glad you liked it. ^^

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Daysii-dacnomania In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-11-12 14:30:03 +0000 UTC]

haha, yeah i did comment quuiite a bit... xL

and yeeaah, it's one of the best ones ive read in a while ^^

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sashabrambleshadow [2009-11-11 21:54:42 +0000 UTC]

Can i just say that was A-maze-ing . love the Fluff love teh smut my (delayed )compliments to the genius behind the writing

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to sashabrambleshadow [2009-11-12 01:45:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed all of it. ^^

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sashabrambleshadow In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-11-12 03:27:28 +0000 UTC]

r u kidding? of course i loved it lol i read it all in one day (homework can wait )it was tHat good !!!

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honey-daisy-911 [2009-09-23 05:20:00 +0000 UTC]

(: I finished the whole series in roughly two hours(:
Tells you how good the writing is huh(:
I love it! Best thing I have read in a long time.
Original.

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to honey-daisy-911 [2009-09-24 02:49:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh my. I'm so glad you liked it so much! Thank you so much for reading. ^^

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honey-daisy-911 In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-09-24 03:52:27 +0000 UTC]

Since there are so many comments, I'm going to reply to one to save me and you trouble(if you want me to reply to all of them tell me)
Anyways (: That was cute.

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to honey-daisy-911 [2009-09-24 14:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah, it's all good. I'm glad you enjoyed. ^^

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DragonBoosterGirl [2009-07-25 20:16:15 +0000 UTC]

You know who Pete reminds me of? The Green Goblin. xP

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Kitten-Kitty [2009-06-12 05:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Ended nicely. ♥
Aww- where did Ryan and Brendon goooo? That kinda freaked me out. But, they just kinda freak me out in general. :/

Cuuuuteeee! ♥♥

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to Kitten-Kitty [2009-06-12 15:58:00 +0000 UTC]

I don't actually know. They could be hiding in my closet for all I know. Although that would be hard, seeing as my closet has no door. It would still be creepy, though.

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Kitten-Kitty In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-06-12 18:10:03 +0000 UTC]

Very creepy. D:

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Kai-kai77 [2009-05-17 23:26:11 +0000 UTC]

Sweet story! It really beats my Peterick story by a long shot. For a second when when Pete woke up from Lewis dying, i thought, "Awww shiz, she brought Lewis back!!!"

For a strange reason, (Huge Joker fan right here!) I loved Lewis because he reminded me of Joker. I YOU! Write more stories like this one! YOU ROX!♥♥♥

Make a clone of this story or something...

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to Kai-kai77 [2009-05-18 00:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Well, gosh, thanks so much. I definitely plan to write more dark, macabre fantasy-type stuff in the future...I actually have one going right now, called Cemetery Boys that you might like. I dunno, I try not to write the same thing twice, but it's got the same dark feel.

Oh, and I trotted over to your page and noticed you'd mentioned my story. I almost died of happy. XD

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Kai-kai77 In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-05-18 00:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Well, your story is worth mentioning! I'll will check out Cemetery Boys next weekend...

LOVE FOR LEWIS WENTZ!

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rAbIDMCRgurl [2009-05-06 05:35:43 +0000 UTC]

I enjoy the fluff it makes me d'awwww.

I loved the story it was gorgeous.

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to rAbIDMCRgurl [2009-05-06 21:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

Alright, I have to admit: when I saw that you'd commented on my stuff, I started grinning. I love your art, so it was amazing to see that you'd read my stories.

Sorry if that was creepy, I just had to share. XD

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rAbIDMCRgurl In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-05-07 20:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Why you're welcome!

And thank you!

I'm flattered that you like my art

I love your stories.

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cantturnaround [2009-05-02 06:29:24 +0000 UTC]

this would have been perfect, but that part where ryan and brendon dissapear...GAH! bugs the hall outta me.

ooooooh i think your should start a new story from that!

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to cantturnaround [2009-05-02 15:37:16 +0000 UTC]

Sorry it bugs you...I just figured it'd be a good way to end, cuz I didn't want to make it all fluffy unicorns and rainbows.

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cantturnaround In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2009-05-02 18:58:30 +0000 UTC]

it doesnt really bug me as mcuh as it feeds my unhealthy obsession, all morning i kept getting "what could have happened" stories stuck in my head
but i guess it worked for what you were trying to do, its semi "they all lived happily ever after, or did they?"

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XpeterpandaX [2009-01-05 02:22:25 +0000 UTC]

more rydon yay

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to XpeterpandaX [2009-01-06 03:25:41 +0000 UTC]

Yehp, couldn't end it without a wee bit o' Rydon in there. ^^

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animeluver282 [2008-11-26 23:13:43 +0000 UTC]

this is a wonderful story! i loved it!
your so good at writing details!!!
but the one thing that gets me is that pete never said i love you back to Trick...

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to animeluver282 [2008-11-27 19:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Why, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. And I could have sworn Pete said I Love You back...I think in Ch. 24. It might not have been those exact words, but I'm pretty sure it's in there. ^^

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animeluver282 In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2008-11-27 20:21:47 +0000 UTC]

oh ok!

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CocoPankakes [2008-10-05 16:59:21 +0000 UTC]

lolz, CUTE ending!!

ryan and brendon... better watch ur back

they gonna get chuuuuu!

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to CocoPankakes [2008-10-05 17:31:03 +0000 UTC]

You're gonna die first.


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pilsberydoughgirl [2008-10-05 01:58:18 +0000 UTC]

oook
its over
umm yey?
i really cant say much about dis but im commenting on it anyway. im not a big slash fan... and it amazes me and scares the pants off of me that u can write that. AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!1

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to pilsberydoughgirl [2008-10-05 17:34:51 +0000 UTC]

...um...

If it scared you so much...honestly, why did you keep reading? I don't mean for you to be all disturbed...

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pilsberydoughgirl In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2008-10-05 18:36:50 +0000 UTC]

caus ilu and i want to support u in everything u do
caus secretly im ur mom
well no but thats wut it feels like to me
about all u guys really

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to pilsberydoughgirl [2008-10-05 19:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Lol, srsly. You make a good mummy.

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pilsberydoughgirl In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2008-10-06 21:57:00 +0000 UTC]

yes dear
thank you

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batbeater [2008-10-04 20:36:42 +0000 UTC]

the fluff
story

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to batbeater [2008-10-04 21:33:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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stump-it-up [2008-10-04 03:41:28 +0000 UTC]

i like this
gave meh that warm and fuzzeh feeling



until ryry and bden showed up
then i got the RUN!!! feeling

this is a nice sum up for a good, dark,and edge-of-the-seat story

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XhopelesslyXhopefulX In reply to stump-it-up [2008-10-04 21:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you. I figured I couldn't make the ending TOO fluffalicious.

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stump-it-up In reply to XhopelesslyXhopefulX [2008-10-05 17:55:15 +0000 UTC]

yeah


all good slash stories have a balance of fluff and...uhh...everything else

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RubellaInfectious [2008-10-04 03:29:36 +0000 UTC]

"Demented little caterpillar wiggle"? My metaphor's still cuter.

An excellent fluffball of an ending, dear. Like one of those pink Snowball snackcakes.

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