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Xia22 — Crayon Academy Assigment
Published: 2012-08-29 22:49:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 274; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 2
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For ! It's the 'back to school' assignment. <3Characters are (left to right): Okto (~Xaegexx ), Niel (=Xia22 ), Kayne (~coracat ), and Peter (~Zdroyd )
Yes, I realize the anatomy is way off, especially Peter's arm and that the faces are weird, especially Niel's chin, the coloring is bland and terrible to boot, but despite all the flaws, I really like this. XD I seriously do. So critique it. <3 But please be gentle.
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Wait, so do i have to critique this one too as a roomie? T-T
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Oh... Dang it... I thought I was free T-T...
Anyways, this pic is AMAAYZAHHH! But... I'm sorry to say this, the torso's drive me insane! So is Okto supposed to be short? I don't know, I sorry. And Peter seems to tilt a little way more - try and balance it a little since it looks like his arms are too long when he'll put it to his side. Background? I don't know... You could've maybe added at least a window or outdoors one, but you may have been too busy. I guess that's it... For now.
Nice pic, and i'm sorry if i sound harsh or anything...
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This isn't harsh at all! <3 I really appreciate it! 
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Your welcome anytime and I hope you enjoy your drawings?
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Really? ;A; I thought I messed him upppp
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Okay...first and foremost, if it weren't for his stretchy arm, Peter here would be the best boy drawing I've seen from you. Other than that...Kayne (Not going to screw myself over here by guessing the wrong gender) seems to have little emphasis on them, seeing that they are the only character standing behind others. Also, most of the hands actually drawn here seem to have pointy fingers.
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Kayne's a boy. XD And yeah...he was the last one I sketched and my paper was too small to put him to the side. 
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Very nice work! ^^ At least you color better than I do! Peter's arm must've been stretched out from Gym!! :U
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XD Thaaaat's what happened to his arm, sure. And thank chuuu ;u;
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