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rottentaste [2007-10-25 20:22:59 +0000 UTC]

i like yur concept, though it looks a bit amateur, theres no exiting focal point, and it seems monotonus. Also, you shot half of the floor and left the beautifull building like it was less important, try playing with the angles and perspective, nice idea though.

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xiangrei In reply to rottentaste [2007-10-26 00:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Yes I know, it was originally a random shot which I later decided to crop. I tended it to represent that certain Asian concept of 'full emptiness' y'know, like the spaces in between notes in a piece of music or the hole in a donut. But nonetheless your critique raises some good points

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rdx86 [2007-10-19 07:32:41 +0000 UTC]

Interesting shot...but by making them small, you seem to have lost focus a bit, because the architecture seems like the prime subject at first glance.

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xiangrei In reply to rdx86 [2007-10-20 00:18:29 +0000 UTC]

You raise a valid concern. Personally, I wanted the couple to be put into the 'larger picture' hence the composition.

Thanks for the comments

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rdx86 In reply to xiangrei [2007-10-20 05:50:48 +0000 UTC]

No problemo

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foudroyant [2007-10-13 16:20:30 +0000 UTC]

This is a very nice photo and I think b/w works really well with it!

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xiangrei In reply to foudroyant [2007-10-14 08:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Ty

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foudroyant In reply to xiangrei [2007-10-15 17:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Yw!

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nadineada [2007-10-12 03:11:38 +0000 UTC]

beautiful building and good use of contrast. the lady with the umbrella is adorable and suits the building. very good capture.

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ladyxsilver [2007-10-08 02:36:57 +0000 UTC]

That building is intense.

I like that the man and woman are facing opposite directions

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Kickflip182 [2007-10-07 15:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice photo. I like the black and white, and how the two people are so far away now.

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xiangrei In reply to Kickflip182 [2007-10-08 00:38:25 +0000 UTC]

Ty

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hitsugayahinamori [2007-10-06 09:00:08 +0000 UTC]

i like the concept, and it's well illustrated in the photo. althought it wud be better if the figures were the center of the photo, they are a bit lost. but maybe that's a nice effect in itself, but the isolation is good.

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xiangrei In reply to hitsugayahinamori [2007-10-06 11:31:48 +0000 UTC]

That's a good point, thank you

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