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TheBookNerd [2009-05-15 15:30:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow...I liked that. I could really see the poem...at least what is happening in it. Very good.
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spyke1of24 [2009-04-22 04:51:45 +0000 UTC]
The fact that you said
She was loved.
It causes a pause and a questioning. It makes me think how often when old age is setting in everyone disappears. Very compelling. Very well done.
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