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XigiXhio — 7: A Quick Kiss
Published: 2011-03-15 22:33:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1164; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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Description She led him to the navigation under a room full of messenger lizards. "Why are you up, anyway?"
"Oh, I couldn't sleep."
"What's wrong?"
"It was what happened to Newkirk. It's left me dead shattered."
(Behemoth: page 88-91, starting on line 11 of page 88 to the end of page 91. You may have to adjust a few things.)
"I think you're brave, serving on this ship."
"Aye, or mad. Don't you think it's daft? Like I'm trying to burn to death, same as he did?"
"No, Deryn." His hand tightened on her arm. "I think he would be proud of you for not letting anything stand in the way of you and your dreams." He sighed. "I know I've always had trouble with that."
"Aye?" She looked up at him then. He stared into her eyes, trying to convey what he meant. "Like when?" It didn't work.
"When?" Alek didn't know.
"Aye. When have you, a barking prince, ever had a dream that couldn't be fulfilled?"
"Well, there is a girl that I really like," the look of disappointment on her face was enough to tell him he could take this one chance in his life. "And I think she likes me too, but I could never make the first move."
"That doesn't count." She muttered, face buried in her knees. "If you had made the first move-" She never got to finish as Alek 'made the first move' and kissed her. He was too nervous to really enjoy the kiss until he felt Deryn press back; then he began to thoroughly enjoy it, until she stopped it.
"Alek?"
"Yes?" She's going to hit me! She's going to hit me!
"Am I the girl?"
"Yes."
"Oh." After a minute of awkward silences, "I, um, I-" Starts to cry, "I don't like you.













I know this is really short and I'm sorry for not posting sooner, but the next one is coming up REALLY soon, so don't yell at me please! I can't take the yelling!!
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Comments: 42

Jorely-JellyLovesYou [2011-04-13 22:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Love it!! cant wait for the next part ^-^

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XigiXhio In reply to Jorely-JellyLovesYou [2011-04-14 15:22:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks! it coming i promise! i'm just have some trouble with writing seriously.

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SwagSodas [2011-03-17 01:02:48 +0000 UTC]

WTF?! DERYN WUT R U SMOKING?! SUCK HIS FACE OFF!!

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XigiXhio In reply to SwagSodas [2011-03-17 01:08:02 +0000 UTC]

well i think thats a little aggressive... (^.^)'

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SwagSodas In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-17 01:14:15 +0000 UTC]

xDD then in crawls Volger.

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XigiXhio In reply to SwagSodas [2011-03-17 01:15:27 +0000 UTC]

yes

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SwagSodas In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-17 01:17:21 +0000 UTC]

xDD that wud suck, but wud be totally hilarious. "WTF VOLGER?! HOW R U SMALL ENOUGH TO DO THAT?"

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XigiXhio In reply to SwagSodas [2011-03-17 01:21:10 +0000 UTC]

lol! that would scare me.

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SwagSodas In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-17 01:22:32 +0000 UTC]

xDD ikr? well i posted the next part in the Alek-Artemis bit.

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XigiXhio In reply to SwagSodas [2011-03-17 01:23:38 +0000 UTC]

OMG U DID!! i will read it right now!!

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SwagSodas In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-17 01:25:18 +0000 UTC]

awesome! ^-^ sweet

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Stargirl8 [2011-03-17 00:45:11 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! WHAT ARE YOU WRITING????? Deryn does love Alek very very very very very much but she has this daft thing in her head that he's an archduke and she's pretty much too low on the social ladder for him... but otherwise for that little daft thing she DOES LOVE HIM!!! Why did you write that she ain't lovin' him back???

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XigiXhio In reply to Stargirl8 [2011-03-17 01:10:11 +0000 UTC]

please read the first 7 before u yell at me again! there is a back round and this is a series.

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Stargirl8 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-20 01:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Oooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I shall! Thanks 4 da tip!

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XigiXhio In reply to Stargirl8 [2011-03-20 02:29:30 +0000 UTC]

welcome, and thank you!

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Stargirl8 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-21 18:35:29 +0000 UTC]

Ya no prob!

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ShadowCreeper2 [2011-03-16 02:16:24 +0000 UTC]

=O!!!!!!!!! POOR ALEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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XigiXhio In reply to ShadowCreeper2 [2011-03-16 02:35:17 +0000 UTC]

yes heart broken...

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ShadowCreeper2 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-16 02:40:33 +0000 UTC]

poor him...aww.. no be sad, alek! *glomp*

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XigiXhio In reply to ShadowCreeper2 [2011-03-16 02:46:31 +0000 UTC]

i really want to do that to characters sometimes. just give some one that doesn't exist a big imaginary hug!

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ShadowCreeper2 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-16 02:48:58 +0000 UTC]

XD i do that like all the time. its fun =3

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XigiXhio In reply to ShadowCreeper2 [2011-03-16 15:58:26 +0000 UTC]

and sad cuz i only doit when people are sad.

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ShadowCreeper2 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-18 01:55:27 +0000 UTC]

lol. IM HAPPY!!!!!!!

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XigiXhio In reply to ShadowCreeper2 [2011-03-18 01:58:22 +0000 UTC]

in glad!

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ShadowCreeper2 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-19 02:59:15 +0000 UTC]

I FINISHED BEHEMOTH!! AND I JUST HAD A FASION SHOW SO IM HYPER!!!!!!!!

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XigiXhio In reply to ShadowCreeper2 [2011-03-19 15:23:44 +0000 UTC]

again? wow, i think u like being hyper.

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ShadowCreeper2 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-19 16:36:58 +0000 UTC]

YEP. IM NOT HYPER ANYMORE THOUGH.

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XigiXhio In reply to ShadowCreeper2 [2011-03-19 17:00:29 +0000 UTC]

yeah! but ur still in all caps. also im almost done with the last ch. of the We Are What We Are thingy.

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ShadowCreeper2 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-19 21:07:55 +0000 UTC]

lol. sorry. i sometimes leave the cap button on with out meaning to. then im to lazy to retype it when i notice!! XD

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XigiXhio In reply to ShadowCreeper2 [2011-03-19 21:22:04 +0000 UTC]

haha, thats alright!

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ShadowCreeper2 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-19 21:58:26 +0000 UTC]

XD lol, and welcome!

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awesome-o-clock [2011-03-16 02:07:44 +0000 UTC]

How does he know her name?! 8D Good fic XD

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XigiXhio In reply to awesome-o-clock [2011-03-16 02:11:14 +0000 UTC]

oh! well this is the 7th and its all off of 'what would happen if she got to finish her sentence at the end of Leviathan?' would you be willing to read the others? because it all leads up to this.

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myst47 [2011-03-16 02:01:28 +0000 UTC]

GASP!!!! DERYN!!! WHAT ARE YOU SAYING!!!! OMG!!!! Please write more soon!!!! I <3 your fanfics!!! Quick Question- Are you going to continue The Blue Dress fanfic? Sorry if I'm pestering you about it.. It's SO AMAZING!!!!

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XigiXhio In reply to myst47 [2011-03-16 02:12:14 +0000 UTC]

this is the next one and 'the blue dress' is the 6th, so i did continue it.

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myst47 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-16 02:30:06 +0000 UTC]

OHH!!!! That makes it even MORE AWESOME!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!! I <3 the stuff you write!!!

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XigiXhio In reply to myst47 [2011-03-16 02:34:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks! i love it when people say that! it makes all my writers block worth it!!

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myst47 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-16 02:35:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!! Can't wait for the next part!!!!

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XigiXhio In reply to myst47 [2011-03-16 02:36:56 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAAAAAALright!!

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myst47 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-16 02:42:33 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!!!!

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XigiXhio In reply to myst47 [2011-03-16 02:44:27 +0000 UTC]

WELCOME!!!!

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myst47 In reply to XigiXhio [2011-03-16 02:49:06 +0000 UTC]

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