love-dream-draw [2005-11-11 13:06:08 +0000 UTC]
thats really good
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Veltro [2005-09-07 14:57:36 +0000 UTC]
This is a really nice poem! ^__^ It seems kinda sad also ;.; Also the spelling errors I found *shot to death* tuched- touched baren- barren posinbarrys- poisonberries (did you mean that? ; ) charrys- cherries Anther- another comming- coming endding- ending pedle- petal sucome- succumb salved- solved But some of them could have been just typos *does that alot* but this is a good poem overall!
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Xio101 In reply to Veltro [2005-09-07 15:00:57 +0000 UTC]
hehe wow yeah a lot of those we're Typos I do know Cherries Another Coming Ending Petal Poisonberries and solved but I wasn't sure on Succumb so uh thanks I'm glad ya like it
Veltro In reply to Xio101 [2005-09-07 15:13:07 +0000 UTC]
no prob! ^__^ and of course I liked it!
Xio101 In reply to Veltro [2005-09-07 15:14:19 +0000 UTC]
hey! oke:
Veltro In reply to Xio101 [2005-09-07 15:14:34 +0000 UTC]
haha
Xio101 In reply to Veltro [2005-09-07 15:17:32 +0000 UTC]
grrr!!! Poke this!!! MWHAHAHAHAHA!!!! (ok I've gotta go eat now talk to ya later... just so hungry )
Veltro In reply to Xio101 [2005-09-07 15:19:57 +0000 UTC]
GAH! *runs away* (alrighty! see ya! ^__^ )