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Published: 2005-09-07 04:29:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description There is a song
A song that time forgot
A song I've sung for just so long...

There was a land
It was bare and it was dry
All its life had turned to sand
Just to see it would make you cry

There was a life
A life that just didn't care
There was a knife,
That would make it fare
And with that knife
There came a flood
This was a flood of life
A flood made of blood

And when this blood tuched the sand
It gave life to a baren land
All the poisonberries turned toΒ Β cherries
And all the thorns grew wonderful roses
And the wind brought birds of the brightest red
It was just as the life had always read
That whenever its heart turned to lead
Anther world would end up dead
And now that the lifes heart was free
The world would show all that it could be

And as this life saw all that it had done
A song came to it
A song that it sung
With all the breath within its lungs

This is the song
The song that time forgot...

"With every soul there is a story to be told
there is a heart to hold

Every life has a meaning
every song has a feeling
every heart has a beating"

So the life sang untill it felt its last breath coming
and it stopped to find the meaning
of the life it'd been leading
and only one heard the last words
of a life that was ending

"and with every song
there's a singer to be singing
so hear what I must say
as the last petle falls from my flower
and I succumb to my dieing hour

do not see what is before you
only what is behind you will tell you what to do
never live within the past knowing that it didn't last
the present and the future are one in the same
in a land where no soul is tame

every puzzle can be solved
every quistin can be answered

just hear the sounds
the sounds of the song
the song that time forgot..."
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Comments: 8

love-dream-draw [2005-11-11 13:06:08 +0000 UTC]

thats really good

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Veltro [2005-09-07 14:57:36 +0000 UTC]

This is a really nice poem! ^__^ It seems kinda sad also ;.;

Also the spelling errors I found *shot to death*

tuched- touched
baren- barren
posinbarrys- poisonberries (did you mean that? ; )
charrys- cherries
Anther- another
comming- coming
endding- ending
pedle- petal
sucome- succumb
salved- solved

But some of them could have been just typos *does that alot* but this is a good poem overall!

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Xio101 In reply to Veltro [2005-09-07 15:00:57 +0000 UTC]

hehe wow
yeah a lot of those we're Typos I do know Cherries
Another
Coming
Ending
Petal
Poisonberries
and solved
but I wasn't sure on Succumb so uh thanks

I'm glad ya like it

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Veltro In reply to Xio101 [2005-09-07 15:13:07 +0000 UTC]

no prob! ^__^ and of course I liked it!

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Xio101 In reply to Veltro [2005-09-07 15:14:19 +0000 UTC]



hey! oke:

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Veltro In reply to Xio101 [2005-09-07 15:14:34 +0000 UTC]

haha

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Xio101 In reply to Veltro [2005-09-07 15:17:32 +0000 UTC]

grrr!!! Poke this!!! MWHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
(ok I've gotta go eat now talk to ya later... just so hungry )

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Veltro In reply to Xio101 [2005-09-07 15:19:57 +0000 UTC]

GAH! *runs away*

(alrighty! see ya! ^__^ )

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