VoidColor-Sans [2018-09-12 03:50:05 +0000 UTC]
Braun kinda reminds me of Tinker Bell, but nicer & not jealous. I love him. I found another good comic focusing on some oc characters that aren't alternate versions of characters. Ur doing it in a very good way, introducing & focusing on oc characters like Fae & Braun & others, while still focusing on & having characters we all know and love like the Skeleton family, Sans & Papyrus & Gaster depending on ur view of him, Undyne probably soon, & maybe Griliby, & then there is Flowey, & anyways u are doing really well endearing us to new & old characters like, & have some other favorites like SoulTale & Undertale Green (though that may not count since it does focus in the green soul, but she seems really original, & there is many different original characters & alernate versions, in that plus it is just an interesting take on Undertale) to name some from the top of my head, anyways u are doing really well, I love ur comic(s), work. I love the name Spirit, though sometimes because I like it, I call it SpiritTale. And I like ur more slow pacing of pacifist into something, kind of reminds like in the OtherTale animation series, the genocide run is much slower, with monsters going missing, I know Spirit & OtherTale are very different that just reminded me of each other. Anyways, ur pacing is really good, a little slow at times, but that it makes better to introduce & ease readers in, & to have a gradual but definite build up, anyways love this, can't wait for more, gonna continue reading & catching up. Also remember breaks & pacing yourself is also good, I love how many pages & stuff we get from u, but we don't wait u hurting yourself.
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XJunjoX In reply to VoidColor-Sans [2018-09-12 04:24:46 +0000 UTC]
I really love how much thought you put into your comments. It makes me really happy you feel strongly enough about my work to put so much effort into responding.
I haven't heard of those comics before, but I might have to check them out!
I do worry that my pacing it kind of slow, but things are starting to pic up now in the more recent pages of the comic. I really wanted make sure that people would have a good foundation on the setting even if they didn't play Undertale.
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