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Published: 2011-08-24 21:52:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1178; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 39
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This is part of the prize for for winning the #Royal-Siblings ' 200 member contest. And she said I could basically draw whatever I wish
Okay this is not the full version and it might not be arranged like this. This was just a quick arrangement I have to colour it yet
But before I colour I really want your feedback on how I can improve it because something seems lacking (apart from the colour and Azula should look eviler!) Azula's pose was based on one in the finale (when she went crazy
) I'd give you the link but I have limited time Please tell me your honest opinion I hope you like!
coloured: [link]
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this is awesome!! I want to grab all of them home! cuz they all sooo sweet and sexy!~ <-- this is my first impression.
Azula's pose is not threatening, probably... because... this is actually a sexy pose la!
gorgeous done!! I think the mood for me is nice!
I can see that the original pose is from the ep60, but it somehow feels quite charming here, and I'm actually happy with that
just one little recommend: for this piece, try to draw/drag their line of sight to the some point (if they are not interactive with each other). the sight line of the character usually guide audiance's attantion, so making them towards different direction may disturb audiance's force, therefore make the image feels lose.
looking forwards for the coloured version!~
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Thanks very much! 
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sorry...I know I'm really bad at explaination...
simplly say...try to make them look at the same direction, I mean, make their eyes communicate with audiance. Am I... understood...
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Yes I understand! Thanks!
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yeh. that could be a good idea, and no need to worry balance and position ect all these stuffs
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I LOVE IT!!! Azula's pose is amazing!
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Good job you're not because I'd beat it outta you! ;D
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OMS! I WANNA BEAT THE SPARKLES OUT OF EDWARD CULLEN! THAT WOULD BE FUN! F IS FOR FIRE BURNS DOWN THE WHOLE TOWN. U IS FOR URANIUM....BOMBS. N IS FOR NO SURVIVORS! ....i had to,k?
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Ah plankton. An evil mastermind. I worship him!
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Plankton and Azula are besties. TOGETHER...THEY WILL DOMINATE THE EARTH!
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That face is scarier than the one I put o.o
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It is THE Azula rape face. Phwaaaar!
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WELL IT'S SCARY, TYRONE!!!!
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not anymore. Your name has been changed. I asked your mother and she said she loved the name Tyrone. So hellur, Tyrone!
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You don't know my mommy >.<
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YES I DO! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
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WHAT'S HER NAME THEN?! >.<
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NUH UH! SHE CHANGED HER NAME TO TYRONE, TOO!!!
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