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Published: 2012-10-25 03:52:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1703; Favourites: 172; Downloads: 17
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One of my newest ocs. I got her as an adoptable and just had to have her as an oc, her design is just so adorable. Plus I love her hair, it was so much fun to color. <3333Romantic interest -
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So since da won't let write a critique via mobile I'll do so here.
Originality 5☆
Technique 3.5☆
Impact 4☆
Vision 4☆
So whay I like first off is the colors of the piece, you have a theme and are definitely working it thought the entire piece. The colored bows in the background do well to compliment the character with the blue being more visble on the red bow and the red ear being more visble on the blue bow. I also really like the atamony and the pose. Somethings I would adjust is the hair she's holding I would reccomend making it shorter and not as thin in one section, this is mostly because the hair looks like it poofs a bit randomly and that the certain strand is longer then her hair, I also want to say you did great with making sure her arms and legs are even (I have hell doing that sometimes). I would also reccomend shrinking the thigh gap her hips appear a bit turned so the gap is a bit noticeable visually, I also want to comment you did very nicely with the shape of the legs the curves are in all the right places and you have the pants bunched over the knee with out it focusing too much on part. Finally I want to comment on the face now the eyes are a bit high on her face, there is also a bit of gap between the nose and mouth. Something to think about is look at your pointer finger, the first line you see on your finger is about the same space as the tip of your nose to the tip of your lip. The shading on the eye and lips are done very nicely and have a very elegant appearance.
Overall I really love the pic and you're doing a fantastic job
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Thank you for the critique, I appreciate it. ^^
Even on an old piece, knowing what needed to be improved is still knowledge I like to have. Can't believe this has been since 2012. owo
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Wait this is an old piece (oh my god it like just popped up in my watch lol)
Also I'm glad I sometimes worry my critiques might come off as mean or overall picky but I'm really just trying to help. Your style is so lovely and I'm honestly really excited for when my characters get done cause I would just love see my babu's drawn by you x3
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Yeah, it's from 2012. My style has changed so much since this and my anatomy and overall skill has improved. ^^
And no, it didn't come off harsh. You gave a lot of positives with the constructive negatives, so I didn't find it offending.
Aww, really? I didn't know you wanted me to draw them. ;w; I'm flattered.
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Od course you're an artist I really admire but I'm honestly too shy to communicate with...even though you've been super cool with chatting with me.
I was wondering are your commissions open? My precious darling got done
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Ah, really? owo Aww, thank you and you don't have to be shy, cause I'm usually shy unless someone starts talking to me. ;//w//;
If you're interested, just send me a note using my commission order form. It's located on my front page in my commission journal.
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Thanks! designed her, I just adopted her. :3
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She is so cute! I love your shiny colourin. :3
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Hehe, thank you. ^^
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Her design is fabulous! She looks adorable and kinda reminds me of cotton candy- because she's so sweet!
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Thank you. Hehe, funny thing is when I adopted her, before I gave her name, she was just called Cotton candy kitty. So maybe that's why she reminds you of that.
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Your new oc is such a cutie! <333
And you really did justice to her! I just love how she's holding the hair
Great work Mir! <3
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Aww, thank you! I hope to get you to draw her sometime. I'd love to see how you color her hair. :3
I know, I have a habit of making my characters hold onto hair in someway. Just cause I personally love hair and play with mine all the time. x3
Thank you, Kitty. It makes me happy to hear that from you. <3333
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She looks so precious! She certainly is a cutie haha! You did great colouring the hair and sweater! ;v;
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Thank you. >w<
Her hair was so fun, I can't wait to draw/color her again.
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No PRoblem!
Love,
Harumi <3
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SQUEE!! You finally colored her and everything! I definitely love how she turned out.
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Yeah, took me about two days off an on. I kept getting distracted watching Halloween movies on tv while I was working on it. >3>
I love how it turned out too. ^^
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Hahaha I hear you there. i've been watching old classics. XD
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Today we went and watched Silent Hill. ^^
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OMG THE NEWEST ONE?!
How was it?
I've been thinking about seeing it.
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Yeah.
I personally liked it. But a lot of people gave it a bad review. I thought it was a lot better than the first one. It also seems like their might be at least another if not 2 spin offs of other Silent Hill games. Like Silent Hill 2 and the newest one, Downpour I think. At least that's what the ending made it seem like. Which I'm hoping, cause I enjoy the movies.
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Each one of the movies scares the living crap out of me. Creepy freaky things ever. ESPECIALLY THE NURSES! ZOMBIFIED NURSES! fjksagjlhglahghagsg I remember a group acted out on script at OhayoCon and it was awesome but creepy. ;-;
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lol, the first one freaked me out with those weird baby things and their screeching. Then the Pyramid head ripping off that girl's skin, then the guy in the school bathroom was weird. The nurse I think are cool.
I remember that skit, to Bad Romance. I got cut off at the door before it started. :/ So Zai an I sat outside and watched it.
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OMG THE PYRAMID GUY! I hattteeee that guy. He always scare me with his huge big ol weapon of his. I'm not sure which scared me the most, the guy or the nurses. ;-;
And dawwwww, that's sad. ;-; I'm glad you guys were still able to watch it. I only saw it on youtube. XD I wanna go check the skits out this coming OhayoCon.
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He's awesome though! Him and his big cleaver, so cool~
It was pretty cool, would have been better to have been inside watching it, but it was still enjoyable.
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Hahaha, very. XD
I never gone to one so hopefully I am this time. Going to the ball too.
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Since we're only goint Sat, I dunno what our priority will be.
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SEEING ME IS YOUR NUMBA ONE PRIORITY!!!
Just kidding.
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lmao xD
Oh silly me, how could I have forgotten. >.<
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DDDDD;
Chu forgotten?
;-;
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Oh Emi, you silly girl. You know better.
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very nice its cool that everything is split between the two colors
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Thanks. Yeah, that's what I like about her.
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