Windy-Willows [2007-02-13 07:28:23 +0000 UTC]
Nice!!!
I really like the sketch so far, but I can't give you much advanced critique as
1) Being too out-of-proportion myself, I know nothing about human proportion
2) You haven't inked or colored it yet, and that's what I have more stuff in
So I'll just say I can't wait to see it inked!
But meanwhile, I think that you should either make Mr. Mal's legs a bit wider to make him more macho, or give him baggy pants. And mebbe yer wanna make the gun more modern? Just as a tip, the finger on the trigger- the top of the finger-knuckle-thing should be rounded, not completely flat.
I really love your character design, I love the Inara character!!!!! Can't wait to see more!
-Willow
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