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Published: 2005-12-18 18:22:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 208; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 52
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Description Poem by lydia, the rest's by me. Feelin really moody so yeah...
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cornzee [2005-12-20 19:02:49 +0000 UTC]

The art work is fairly good although the text doesnt fit in too well and i can clearly see which adobe photoshop brushes youve used

but overall the art is good(ish)

the poem however (and im no poet critic) but i find to be very boring. I dont mean to cause offence and please dont take this the wrong way, either of you but i found it all rather dull and the ryhme started and stopped constantly.

Its a piece thats a good start but needs more work if you ask me.

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xnsdvd In reply to cornzee [2005-12-21 04:24:24 +0000 UTC]

Like I always say, it's honest criticizm I value How else do you improve?

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LandonCarlton [2005-12-19 15:08:41 +0000 UTC]

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xnsdvd [2005-12-18 19:23:36 +0000 UTC]

[link] <-- lydia!

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