cornzee [2005-12-20 19:02:49 +0000 UTC]
The art work is fairly good although the text doesnt fit in too well and i can clearly see which adobe photoshop brushes youve used but overall the art is good(ish) the poem however (and im no poet critic) but i find to be very boring. I dont mean to cause offence and please dont take this the wrong way, either of you but i found it all rather dull and the ryhme started and stopped constantly. Its a piece thats a good start but needs more work if you ask me.
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xnsdvd In reply to cornzee [2005-12-21 04:24:24 +0000 UTC]
Like I always say, it's honest criticizm I value How else do you improve?
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LandonCarlton [2005-12-19 15:08:41 +0000 UTC]
xnsdvd [2005-12-18 19:23:36 +0000 UTC]
[link] <-- lydia!