sappy-fire [2003-07-17 15:41:40 +0000 UTC]
I was going to comment on the other one, but I decided to comment the newer one *shrug* I love it, it's great, and has good style. I'm +fav'ing this one.
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cali-t [2003-07-11 22:13:04 +0000 UTC]
Actually, the length is kind of nice...it's something that you don't see alot because people are so obsessed with being short and concise. Really, the drawn outness is very nice, and makes the poem less rushed. I like the style as well.
~~da-x
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lexidh [2003-07-01 19:41:25 +0000 UTC]
I like it, but it's to long. I'm sure you can keep the spirit of this in lesser words.
~da-x
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