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Published: 2003-06-21 00:52:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description There\'s you
and thee heart that wonders wildly to just make us be twined
till there\'s no room but to breath
maybe t\'is is just very sublime

What I\'ve learned is that there is love
but love within
because i don\'t believe that this love is returned
t\'is just deep
within

As I lay down
I wonder
If i would smile

A smile not of those that touches the ground
But the smile that just makes you cry and laugh all while, you\'re just wild
full of hapiness and fear
but this fear that is held from
this fear that you feel comfronted from
because that smile is in fact full of hapiness
full of love
full of forgiveness
full of trust

It\'s full of many things
nervously just a rust
Full of us

....

There isn\'t just have to face the facts
And see how this world is, and what it\'s truly of

But just this comes to show that i believe in love
love within two
it hopefully will come

But love has come to me
and only me
If there was two
there will be that smile
That part of me that will feel whole

Right now i feel empty
full of love
but no one to share it with
no one there to just hold me down
I\'m a wild spirit
But this spirit is also wanting to calm down

maybe see life as it may be
life in a different way, you see
love and life reconciled in one
That will show only that there will be someone

As I listen to his voice
It just makes me want to burst
makes me listen and think that there must be more
more to me as a whole

Life changing,
changing,
changing,
it\'s all just a memory that keeps on changing

so i may sit here and watch it change
or i may seat here and make it change
making\'s harder than watching but if you don\'t fight it there\'s nothing

Just waiting for the right time
Just waiting waking up for the first time

Held in your arms as i awake is only what i dream of
that will come someday
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Comments: 4

sappy-fire [2003-07-17 15:41:40 +0000 UTC]

I was going to comment on the other one, but I decided to comment the newer one *shrug* I love it, it's great, and has good style. I'm +fav'ing this one.

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kano2k [2003-07-12 08:15:24 +0000 UTC]

This is great

portrays the feeling really well

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cali-t [2003-07-11 22:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Actually, the length is kind of nice...it's something that you don't see alot because people are so obsessed with being short and concise. Really, the drawn outness is very nice, and makes the poem less rushed. I like the style as well.
~~da-x

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lexidh [2003-07-01 19:41:25 +0000 UTC]

I like it, but it's to long. I'm sure you can keep the spirit of this in lesser words.

~da-x

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