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xocatwomanxo — One simple Reflection

Published: 2003-04-24 19:07:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 9
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Description *::Reflection::*

As I reflect in life
All I see is lies

Again into despair
It\'s not fair

Why did you have to die
You just lied

Promises to stay forever
Never realized that you would ever

The cries I hear at night
Remind me of our life

Together we where whole
until you apart from it all

You left me all alone
In this f\'cking hole

I wish I could have gone with you
You where greedy and wanted to be alone

You where gone
And I was done

Till my next love walked into my life
But had an ease to leave

Is it me?
Am I making everyone hate life?
Maybe I should die...
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Comments: 6

xocatwomanxo [2003-08-14 11:29:43 +0000 UTC]

the picture btw is NOT by me it's by a friend of mine that let me borrow it for this piece !! thanx brian!

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sappy-fire [2003-07-17 02:09:55 +0000 UTC]

Very beautifully written. It sounds like it would make a lovely song.

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placebosuckerlav [2003-06-10 17:16:34 +0000 UTC]

aw sad. but very nice, emotional poem. so very sorry, hope all is better

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melliegurl2005 [2003-06-03 18:36:57 +0000 UTC]

good poem, emotion is expressed very well! it is sad. . .but very nicely written

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kwazo [2003-04-24 19:35:48 +0000 UTC]

Yer, sad. But a good poem.

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lasseman [2003-04-24 19:12:00 +0000 UTC]

makes me feel bad.

hoping you will be happy

cheers
~L

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